Otono the Speedster - DONE

[chisoku]

Otonoran Sukiru[/u] - Otono Running Skill
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self.
Special:
As his athletic ability, prowess with skill and overall experiences increase, the ability of this running aptitude increases further creating an ability all its own. For example, a switch in stance to make the style faster or slower, a more advanced ability within the course of skillful technical movement, accelerating and decelerating, and the works. Just to name a few. The technique also grows with the person and as a result, after reaching the limit of that level, the user must pay the same amount of each rank to increase the ability of running speed. Ranks also come into play, as the ability of a Genin grants him D and C level limits, but nothing above this until he levels to Chunin where he gains B to C level, and so on.
Description:
You think running isn't a special skill? You're wrong.

Moving at incredible speeds with his two feet since he was young, Otono has practiced his running to the point of perfection. Running forwards, backwards, strafing, making quick cuts without losing speed(Within a certain speed limit), losing as little speed as possible over rough terrain, and most importantly knowing how to keep up the act for as long as possible. His ability to run also stems from running full speed backwards just as well as forwards to show-off (for kicks and giggles, lol).

The most as of now Otono can keep running at maximum speed within a thread is 1 posts( 1 minute/s). This however, will grow as time passes. Each time the technique is trained, it goes up more posts, to keep full speed.
Domain: Otono Only.

Rokettosutāto[/u] - Rocket Start
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self
Special: This is basically a physical version of the Substitution skill.
Description:
The ability to move from standstill or at a slow pace, to full speed within moments. A very handy technique that Otono created to be able to react to opponents at a moments notice, he grasps the muscles in his body and then bursts forward relaxing into a full-speed run. The level of times he can use this however is three times per thread at Genin level. Five times at Chunin. Seven times at Jounin.
Domain: Otono only.

Otono Misairu[/u] - Otono Missile
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: 0-5 Meters.
Special: -
Description:
A powerful flying kick, done with great acceleration from Otono, in which he jumps at the epitome of his run, utilizing the acceleration of the kick, the sheer momentum of the jump and the power of his legs to dish-out a technique that does great amounts of damage and causes great knock-back. 5 meters from the start, and 1 more meter each time retrained, also increasing in devastation each time re-trained.
Domain: Otono only.

[☆ F ☆]

Because of the sheer simplicity behind running in general, I do not see this as a person-exclusive technique, especially when you have high-speed techniques like Shunshin for basically nothing to learn. I could see a 'Must be taught by' line there, though, so at least you retain control of the jutsu rights.

From what I gather, though you're exploding into a full run, in the end, you are retaining your maximum running speed. Essentially, you're not getting faster, you're just running sooner than normal. Which is fine to a certain extent, a long as it isn't used as a medium for godmodding, or somehow 'predicting and evading' attacks you wouldn't normally pull off without the super-run.

Sukiru - Make your run so that you have to buy it each time to add constant running around, but you start at one - i.e. Up to one post of running is maintained, plus one more each time retrained.

Rocket Start - Same comment as above regarding starting uses and retraining... though please remember one thing. Substitution works because you can instantly replace yourself with someone when the opponent is looking. Since we established running technique doesn't make you faster, just makes you run sooner, how can you explain pulling off something so quick and instant, purely on a physical level, without sudden enhancement?

Missile - Knock-back, maybe 5 meters, plus 1 more each time retrained?

[chisoku]

Think of Rocket Start as an evading Flash step of which speed is generated from its maximum potential as Chisoku uses it, meaning it goes well over his limits of speed to produce an evading dash at a short amount of time. I didn't want to make it flash-step-y... but it kinda was brought out to be that way.

His running ability is unique to him, the ability to run at his own pace, in a case of technical ability, such as moving in such a way he can trick an opponent by moving at a set-speed for a time, and then move at a greater acceleration, moving in jukes, twists, turns, acrobatics and such, increasing the speed of the attack to make it hit faster and harder, these are all taken into account for the attack.

The speed he runs during Rocket Start is different from his running speed, as he runs at a speed that he is able to move at normally without shooting past his limits. With Rocket Start, he moves at a faster speed above his norm for a set of a single post no matter how fast he becomes, it will always be over his limit of speed. Later on however, things will be added to the level of ability such as appearing behind the opposing opponent, or moving at such a speed that it gives him the power to engage more knockback into his striking strength.

All the moves follow suit that momentum equals power, and power equals speed. Thus, use of his running ability is basically the starting of a branch movement down the line, the more experience he gains, the more abilities he has with running or speed.

[DAVID BOWE]

[/u]: We’re talking about Ninja here. These ninja can jump from tree to tree as though it were riding a bike (Without the need of a technique) so this technique here seems simple and useless for a technique. Before you know it we’ll be making techniques that should be learned so the ninja can pick up his spoon and eat breakfast. To put it bluntly, I see no point in having a technique where they can… run for a while. If you can jump from tree to tree at a constant pace like it was driving as a technique, you don’t need this. ( 1 . 2 Denied )

Rocket Start: Shunshin no Jutsu, learn that. This is impeding on a basic technique already around. ( 1 . 2 Denied )

Missle: Meh, seems like a basic jumping kick that was used because your character ran super fast. Now… why in a NINJA WORLD is a basic jump kick from super fast running a user only technique? I’m leaning towards denying this one as well unless you delve into the description a bit more. Make it something special and not basic.[/ul][/ul][/ul][/size][/font]

[chisoku]

Both of these are here for a reason, both of them have a purpose for my character, so if you do deny them, my character has no purpose.

[DAVID BOWE]

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[chisoku]

Ok Ill just make a style then.

[☆ F ☆]

Thank you for understanding. Feel free to submit everything in a new thread.

[DAVID BOWE]

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