The blades of vengeances have fallen swiftly. The shinobi are no more as 'Absolute Justice' has returned...now, it is the Samurai that rule the Five Major Nations!
But at what cost? Have they become the very thing that they despised the most...? Heroes and villains seem to change roles every day, but one thing is for certain - we yearn for our freedom, for days gone by where we flew the skies unhindered.
Post by DAVID BOWE on Mar 17, 2011 13:35:48 GMT -8
A young boy that looked no younger than 9 years old walked amongst the barren wasteland of Konohagakure no Sato. This mere child had clearly not eaten in weeks. The young man was boney; steps were the biggest task for this young child. Food had been the source of intense energy and when one runs out of this said energy everything becomes a daunting task. Walking into the ramen shop. Small little store where food was around, about one of the few areas where food can be seen. Clearly this young man hadn’t had money, this boy could barley keep the clothes amongst that slender back. One could obviously see that money was something the young child was lacking.
Cleary green daunting orbs looked up amongst the chef “Excuse me sir, could you please spare me some food?” The young man asked with such heartfelt words. However these were tough times. People forget how to act passionate, how to appear considerate. Rightfully so, let your guard down for even the slightest second and you’ll regret it. Chef seemed to ignore the young boy whom stood at five feet and three inches. This young man knew the chef wasn’t going to provide our young boy with food unless the child had money, which wasn’t something the young boy knew of. Dirt ridden facial features looked down amongst the dirty ground, standing there without a word escaping the young ones tender pink dried lips.
Green hues while still looking down amongst the ground traveled over towards this warrior. Clearly this blond haired individual had money, no? Was this ninja kind? Considerate, even during times of war? Times of mental fortitude, extreme anguish. Could this warrior provide the child with something that the boy hasn’t had in weeks. Mop like hazel hair flowed upwards while those green orbs looked amongst the blond haired warrior. Slender boney digits grabbing the warrior’s cloth. Tugging upon the clothing known as the shirt while those green orbs looked up amongst the blue eyed warrior. “Excuse me sir, could you spare some coin?” Such mumbled and hunger driven words exited the young boy confinements.
Post by DAVID BOWE on Mar 12, 2011 18:54:30 GMT -8
Allow me to explain… any ninja whether they know that technique or not can run for long distances in all directions. They don’t need that technique to do that. They’re ninja; they’re trained and conditioned when they go through the academy. Even Chouji doesn’t seem to tire out when running full speed and jumping from branch to branch.
Additionally, your second technique already exist. Shunshin no Jutsu is pretty much the exact same thing. Whether you built your character around these techniques or not if the techniques already exist… I’m not gonna accept another one that does the exact same thing because they revolve around your character. Learn the current non selfish ones and say your character is skilled at them and call it a day.
As for the denials you need two, so they aren’t outright denied but my denials still stand. If another staff agrees with my statements and also denies them THEN they’re denied.
Post by DAVID BOWE on Mar 12, 2011 18:40:49 GMT -8
Sukiru: We’re talking about Ninja here. These ninja can jump from tree to tree as though it were riding a bike (Without the need of a technique) so this technique here seems simple and useless for a technique. Before you know it we’ll be making techniques that should be learned so the ninja can pick up his spoon and eat breakfast. To put it bluntly, I see no point in having a technique where they can… run for a while. If you can jump from tree to tree at a constant pace like it was driving as a technique, you don’t need this. ( 1 . 2 Denied )
Rocket Start: Shunshin no Jutsu, learn that. This is impeding on a basic technique already around. ( 1 . 2 Denied )
Missle: Meh, seems like a basic jumping kick that was used because your character ran super fast. Now… why in a NINJA WORLD is a basic jump kick from super fast running a user only technique? I’m leaning towards denying this one as well unless you delve into the description a bit more. Make it something special and not basic.