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topography ! Dec 12, 2012 15:12:35 GMT -8

Post by BLKND on Dec 12, 2012 15:12:35 GMT -8

Promontory Geometry
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary / Defensive
Handseals: 15
Chakra Consumption: High to imprint, Low - Massive to activate

[/b] It is important that the user mark where they will be, when the jutsu is performed. This is typically marked with their signature, whatever it may be. Once a canvas is 'imprinted' it remains that way forever! The more paintings that want to be done, the more scrolls that will need to purchased. Map will remain in play until the user cancels the tech, dies, or leaves the thread. Painter cannot create dangerous traps within their paintings [cliffs, stalagmites, stalactites etc.], however creativity is encouraged! All paintings must be approved through customs, and will be considered an 'item.'

*Must be a member of the Sumi clan from Kumogakure to learn.[/ul][/size]

Last Edit: Dec 18, 2012 8:01:09 GMT -8 by BLKND

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topography ! Dec 17, 2012 22:18:29 GMT -8

Post by addy-hime ♥ on Dec 17, 2012 22:18:29 GMT -8

My only issue is with the summoning cost. You state that it takes Low - Massive to activate it, but then your S rank canvas has a Low summoning cost. I assume this is a typo, but it will need to be modified.

Otherwise, really nice work! I think this is an interesting concept and having the painting go through Customs as an item prevents horrible misuse.

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topography ! Dec 18, 2012 8:03:35 GMT -8

Post by BLKND on Dec 18, 2012 8:03:35 GMT -8

Thanks Addy!
You're right, it was a typo- now fixed.

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topography ! Dec 18, 2012 8:43:49 GMT -8

Post by addy-hime ♥ on Dec 18, 2012 8:43:49 GMT -8

1/3.

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Post by Comatose on Dec 18, 2012 15:03:13 GMT -8

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topography ! Dec 21, 2012 18:11:34 GMT -8

Post by Nirvana on Dec 21, 2012 18:11:34 GMT -8

they say it checks out so 3/³