Derp HOZUKI

[Sharkk]

Kusshin
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu
Range: 0-50 Meters
Chakra: Low
Special: Allows the user to extend one of their limbs, allowing them to increase the range of their jutsu and attacks. Range increase is based off of the users Hydration Rank. D rank Hydration allows the user to extend a limb 10 meters while S rank Hydration allows for an extension of up to 50 Meters. Does not require seals. Their top Hydration rank determines the speed of how fast their limbs can extend.

D: 2 meters per second
C: 4 meters per second
B: 6 meters per second
A: 8 meters per second
S: 10 meters per second

Description: Utilizing their ability to convert their bodies to water, a Hozuki can actually achieve the elongation of their limbs. By utilizing this ability, a Hozuki can increase the range of their attacks. However, due to the properties of inertia if a hozuki were to throw a punch and extend their arm, they would not be able to change the trajectory of the punch mid-attack. As the User masters their ability to liquefy their body, their ability to stretch their limbs will also increase.
Domain: Hozuki. Requires D rank Hydration.

update to this.
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[Icarus]

add extension rate.

[Sharkk]

done.

[chiatsuki]

Care to tune this down a bit? 10 meters / s is shunshin / shunpo speed. That means you'd be able to flicker your limbs at an instant and I'm not so sure that can be accepted.

[Mad-Rock]

It's copied from the KAge-Hebi, so I don't see why it's too fast if it can already be done?

[chiatsuki]

Ah, you're right about that. But there's just a few other problems I've noted out now that I've had a little more time to look over this. This needs to be multi-ranked because you would need an 'S' ranks worth of chakra in order to increase your arms at an 'S' ranked length. This would also mean that you should change your consumption from just 'low' to 'low-massive'.

[Sharkk]

Added ranks, but why would it need to require massive chakra to stretch when there isn't a massive consumption in S ranked Hydration? I could see requiring the Hydration rank stacking onto this, but I don't see why this tech would go to even high chakra consumption since the Kage-Hebi are at low chakra consumption for their stretching.

[chiatsuki]

Kage-hebi specialize in outstretching their limbs. Hozuki don't specialize in this but their bodies allow them capability of doing so - but at a slightly higher cost.

Added ranks, but why would it need to require massive chakra to stretch when there isn't a massive consumption in S ranked Hydration? I could see requiring the Hydration rank stacking onto this, but I don't see why this tech would go to even high chakra consumption since the Kage-Hebi are at low chakra consumption for their stretching.

Because hydration, aka the base technique for all hozuki jutsu, is supplementary and thus wouldn't require a massive chakra usage. (uchiha:sharingan = hozuki:hydration = kage hebi:stretching limbs) < Every clan or bl have supplementary jutsu that do not cost much chakra though they may be at high ranking. Everything else (such as this) falls into the normal order of drainage.

[Sharkk]

But, it does have a High drainage :/ which is more than sharingan and kage hebi stretch.

Edit; How about I just change this techs consumption to base Hydration rank + mid chakra?

[chiatsuki]

That's fine. But that would equal massive... why not just make this low - massive bro? Depending on the rank you use doesn't always mean it will be massive. You're making this harder for yourself ICLY.

[Messatsu!]

1² denied

[KID GAMBINO.]

I agree with sohyo, the technique needs to be made 'Low - Very High' at the least in consumption. You have until October 13th, 2011 to finish this, or it will be archived.

[Sharkk]

why does it need to be low-very high though? no other stretching tech is even past mid.

[chiatsuki]

2/2 denied. I've already discussed why this won't work. Since you haven't changed it i'm archiving it.