Extension (Medic)

[Forsaken]

Chakra no Ken (Chakra Blade)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Very High Initial + upkeep
Special: When first learned, blades can only extend up to six inches in length. Technique can be re-learned up to nine times, each time increasing the maximum blade length by six inches.
Description: The user extends their chakra from their hands in a solid blade able to cut like steel. Due to its strength it is able to clash with other weapons and pierce defenses. At first the blade is similar in length to a knife but over time it can be extended to the length of a claymore.
Domain: Universal Ninjutsu

[adero]

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Archived.

[KEITH]

Moving back by creators wish.

[Not Masakuni]

Honestly, I don't see how this one is going to work. The one drawback to the Chakra Scalpel technique has always been that even master medics can't focus enough to create a long blade in battle. That's even stated in canon.

Beyond that, the fact that it loses its surgical ability and becomes, essentially, a physical sword of chakra, kind of destroys any connection to the Chakra Scalpel technique it may have. This simply isn't related to Chakra Scalpel if its a long, physical blade rather than a small and precise medical instrument.

[Forsaken]

well I was basing it on Shizune and Kabuto's actual chakra blades that are like 2-3 feet long its not so much connected to scalpel as it is the base. if it works better as plain nin Ill change it

[Exar Kun]

This would be better as something akin to a universal ninjutsu technique.

I don't have an issue with it as a ninjutsu technique. I do ask though, that in addition to changing it to ninjutsu, please re-write the special. It isn't written very well from a grammatical stand-point.

"At first the blades are only projected 6 inches can be retrained to increase the length by 6 inches again each time capping at 9 retrains."

Should be written like:

When first learned, blades can only extend up to six inches in length. Technique can be re-learned up to nine times, each time increasing the maximum blade length by six inches."

You do realize, however, that if you learn this technique ten times, that means that your blades can be up to 5 feet long, right? Having chakra swords that almost longer than you are tall seems a little excessive...

[Forsaken]

I know itll be 5 feet but thatll cost 1000 into it which is steep to begin with.

And ill switch it to pure nin if masa doesnt think we could somehow work it as a medical nin

[Not Masakuni]

I definitely don't see this being related to the Chakra Scalpel, no. The only correlation they have is that they're a blade made of chakra. All the details have changed. There's a lot of questions, here;

[Qs.] How powerful is this blade? How durable is it? Being made of chakra, can mundane objects interact with it? How long do you intend it to last? Irregardless, I think that the upkeep cost needs to be raised to High, along with the initial use.

[Forsaken]

fixed and its as corporeal as a real blade and as strong and durable as its rank. it can last as long as the user can keep it up

[Not Masakuni]

Hm. Let me re-clarify. This was a B rank when I last looked at it, so I meant that the initial cost and the upkeep cost should be the same; given that this technique essentially creates an A rank weapon out of nothing, allowing, for all intents and purposes, attacks of A rank cutting strength and a physical defense of that same rank, it should cost a full A-ranked amount of chakra for every round its active.

[Forsaken]

fixed

[Not Masakuni]

As an A rank technique, each second retraining must increase the chakra consumption by one tier. This also means that there can only be four maximum retrainings.

[Forsaken]

oh didnt realize that... could you archive it plz its not meeting my original views of it. sorry for the trouble

[Not Masakuni]

Archived.