Reign of the Wolf King

[Forsaken]

Ryuu Ichiban Konbi Henge: Kami no Kiba (Ultimate Man-Beast Transformation: God of Fangs)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Hiden NinTaijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: yes
Stamina/Chakra: Massive
Special: Each time the technique is learned, "B" ranked damage is added/stacked. Can only be retrained twice. Increases speed by 300%. Inuzuka techs are increased by one rank though ONLY Inuzuka techs can be used in this form, no other Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, or NinTaijutsu.
Description: The Inuzuka's ultimate transformation technique. Through intense training, the user and his animal companion transform into a massive wolf creature, anthromorphic in nature having the visage of a wolf with the frame of a man twice the user's normal size, increasing their combined power and speed exponentially. At the cost of this power is the sanity of the user leaving it's skills severely reduced. Though this severe drawback can be overcome through extreme perseverance.
Domain: Inuzuka. “S” rank All-Fours.

Saigouga (Final Fang)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Hiden NinTaijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: no
Stamina/Chakra: Massive
Special: Only can be used once per thread, 5 meter wide drill racing at 10 m/s. 1 meter extension slicing shock wave from the drill.
Description: Once in this monstrous form the bodies limits are stretched to further lengths. This technique is a super-spin and it burns up a massive amount of chakra and stamina, rendering the ninja and both canine companions almost helpless should the technique fail. The clan member familiar will first mark their target with the Dainamikku Maakingu technique. Then, by using Ryuu Ichiban Konbi Henge, the clan member and their partner will transform into the Kami no Kiba, "God of Fangs" This large beast has several advantages: the size of the beast also causes large amounts of penetrating damage when it begins its spin; the size itself lends it much more strength than normal. Unfortunately, they spin so fast they are unable to keep track of their vision. So they must entirely rely on their nose and the urine marking. If Saigouga connects with the target, the opponent is ripped to pieces, and even in the event of missing, the surrounding shock waves will slice into the enemy.
Domain: Inuzuka, Ryuu Ichiban Konbi Henge: Kami no Kiba.

Feral Foresight
Rank: S
Type: Passive / Hiden NinTaijutsu
Range: ---
Handseals: ---
Stamina/Chakra: ---
Special: Allows the user to use NinTaijutsu and “C” rank and lower Ninjutsu While in the form of The God of Fangs.
Description: As the user becomes more used to the feral nature of the God of Fangs they in turn gain the ability to see clearer. Once the user has gained a high enough clarity they become able to use their less savage techniques being able to actively use NinTaijutsu and Ninjutsu once again.
Domain: Inuzuka, Ryuu Ichiban Konbi Henge: Kami no Kiba.

True Nature
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary / Hiden NinTaiutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: no
Stamina/Chakra: Massive
Special: Adds “B” rank damage to physical attacks for 2 turns. Can be retrained to add another turn each time. If used 3 or more times per thread, user will be unable to mold chakra for the rest of the thread.
Description: After gaining the clarity to use their chakra again they will add their chakra nature to their clawed fists. This enhancement of raw power will rapidly increase the power of each strike dealt by the user. Naturally any elemental strike will leave traces of its presence along the area ravaged: fire will burn, earth will ache, etc...
Domain: Inuzuka, Ryuu Ichiban Konbi Henge: Kami no Kiba, Feral Foresight.

[Exar Kun]

I'm giving these only a cursory glance tonight -I'll look into them with more detail tomorrow- but the two things that stand out to me are that 1. You're getting better at writing out customs; the balance of these techniques aside, they're written clearly and concisely, which I appreciate, and 2. They're all powerful as hell. That isn't an acceptance or a denial, but I'm just saying.

I'm not sure if the first technique will fly, however, as it is technically a passive speed boost, which we're not allowing in customs at this point and time. I'm not sure if the fact that it's a transformation (one that limits your abilities to boot) is enough to be a distinguish.

I'd like to see some other staff members' opinions on that. Guys?

I'll look over the rest of the stuff tomorrow.

[Forsaken]

kk thanks for the look over I appreciate your opinion ^^

[Exar Kun]

Alright, well, the problem that I have with this technique is that it's basically just a ramped up version of a technique we already have (the double headed wolf).

You and your dog transform into a giant wolf that has super speed and strength but can't use any taijutsu.

We already have a technique that allows you to turn into a giant dog/wolf that has super strength but can't use taijutsu. The only thing it doesn't have is the super speed.

Sorry dude, but on that note I'm going to have to1.2 deny these. However, Inuzuka is due for a huge revamp of all its techniques, so we might see the new double-headed wolf transformation look similar to yours.

Feel free to make techniques that supplement the huge dog transformation technique we already have, though. xD

[KEITH]

2/2

[Exar Kun]

Archiving.