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Eternal Flames[/url]
Rank: A
Type: Primary / Melee + Ranged
Special: The eternal Flames are a set of two chakrams, circular bladed throwing weapons. Each Chakram is circular and red, with 4-inch silver spikes and circles around the edges, and two black handles shaped in a cross in the middle. Each Chakram has eight spikes along the length of the blade while being 1 foot across. Due to it's wide shape it can also easily be used to block blows from attackers. These specially designed weapons are set to control flames on a basic level and thus its wielder can use flames in conjunction with their attacks but cannot freely control flames.
Cost: 75,000 Ryo

Flurry of Dancing Flames
Rank: D. C. B. A. S
Type: Passive
Range: See Special
Handseals: No
Chakra: ---
Special: Range is Equal to the highest known Fire Dominion rank. This technique depends on how much time the user must charge before being able to use the jutsu under the Eternal Flames.
D: Full post (5 seconds) charge
C: 3/4th of a post (4 seconds)
B: Half a post (3 seconds)
A: 1/4th of a post (2 seconds)
S: Near Instant (>1 second)
Description: The Eternal Flames, as the name suggests, presides over the realm of fire and bends it to its will, to a minor degree. As the Wielder becomes more adept at wielding the flaming discs they will be able to produce jutsu from it quicker and quicker as their mastery increases.
Domain: Eternal Flames, Katon, Fire Dominion of equal rank.

Fire Tooth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / NinTaijutsu
Range: 20 meters
Handseals: No
Chakra: High
Special: Inflames the two chakrams in a wildfire torrent. Can be retrained to stack a B rank of damage each time up to 3 times. Every third retraining increases consumption.
Description: The user will channel their chakra through the web-like weapon before lighting them ablaze. Once they're alight the user will launch them forward making them slice through the air while the flames crackle with the rush of air. Further experience will make the flames grow hotter and stronger.
Domain: Eternal Flames, Katon, FoDF “B” rank.

Flame-Lit Path
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: See special
Handseals: no
Chakra: Low
Special: Range is Equal to the highest known Fire Dominion rank. Allows the user to shift the flames around the Chakrams and direct it but they can only direct the Eternal flames back to the thrower and in no other direction.
Description: Once the user learns the dynamics of the weapons and the traits of the fire they surround it with they become able to direct the flying weapon while in mid-flight. They shift the density and heat of the flames to manipulate the air currents and glide among them.
Domain: Eternal Flames, Katon, FODF.

[Hotaru]

Why are these so expensive? They dont seem to do anything to warrant a 50k cost. You need to give dimensions on the size of the weapon, or the range weapons of this overview can span.

Try and make these more like overview weapons. Throwing them and having them return would probably not be plausible without some kind of technique considering their shape. Instead describe the weapon more fully.

Also fix the image code.

[Exar Kun]

It's A-Ranked because the ryo pricing rules in the customs for dummies thread dictates that an A-Rank weapon has to be at least 50,000 ryo. Ludicriously expensive, I know.

Anyway, Hotaru is right for the most part. Please provide a bit more info on the weapons dimensions; specifically, all I really want to know about is the diameter of the hoops and the length of the blades.

And, furthermore, you are going to need a special technique in order for it to fly back to you. A boomerang works because of its shape and materials. This is a big steel hoop, basically.

So, please add a technique for it. It could be d-rank for all I care, but it needs one. Also, adding a ninjutsu or taijutsu technique will up the price to 75000 ryo.

And if you add those two other techniques from your other custom, that'll be a release, which adds another 25,000 ryo. So altogether, the chakrams will cost 100,000 ryo.

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yeah the cost is cuz of customs. also fixed the size dimensions and added in the techs here instead of the fire ones. also I thought it was techs of those nature (release or pure). and the nin gen or tai was what the weapon was used for

[Exar Kun]

Basically, if the weapon has a release injutsu made purely for it, that costs 25000 ryo. If it has taijutsu attacks made specifically for it, that costs 25000 ryo.

You're using nintaijutsu here, which means you'd have to pay for both.

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that sucks.... k

[Exar Kun]

If it makes you feel any better, if you quest for this you could get it for free IIRC.

1.3

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GM for me? lul

[Jae]

2/3!

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ty

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as far as i can tell my customs are still in line with new systems so could I get my 3/3s?

[KEITH]

Dual Chakrams
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Each Chakram is circular and red, with 4-inch silver spikes and circles around the edges, and two black handles shaped in a cross in the middle. Each Chakram has eight spikes along the length of the blade while being 1 foot across and can be thrown while the shape of the weapon will make it travel on an arc and return to the user much like a boomerang. Due to it's wide shape it can also easily be used to block blows from attackers.
Cost: 100,000 Ryo

Type is for primary or secondary. And if it is a melee or ranged weapon.

Flame-Lit Path
Rank: D
Type: Passive / Ninjutsu
Range: 30 Meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: Very Low
Special: Allows the user to shift the flames around the Chakrams and direct it back to them.
Description: Once the user learns the dynamics of the weapons and the traits of the fire they surround it with they become able to direct the flying weapon while in mid-flight. They shift the density and heat of the flames to manipulate the air currents and glide among them.
Domain: Dual Chakrams, Katon, Fire Dominion.

Boost the cost up to "Low," it shouldn't be "Very Low."

Look what it says here for stacking damaging and retraining techniques and add it to Fire Tooth and Flame Wheel.

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fixed

[KEITH]

Change the 10 MPS to less concrete wording like Addy told you in the other thread.

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fixed