Ototon, II

[Not Masakuni]

Muchi Moshi no Jutsu (Supposing Ignorance Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: Touch.
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Very Low.
Special: Lasts for up to one round, plus one more for each time retrained. Can be broken by a specifically-directed chakra surge of Very Low or higher.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, channelling chakra into their hands. They then touch the target's ear, using the minute sound of the contact to set up a subtle vibration that interferes with the function of the ear, causing a painless sense of temporary deafness. However, the technique is rarely used on enemies, as a directed chakra surge of the same strength, focused on the ears, can very easily break the technique.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryuuken 'D.'

Taiko Hyoushi no Jutsu (Drum Rhythm Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: See special.
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: High.
Special: Range of this technique is equal to your highest rank of Sound Dominion. Causes loss of hearing for one round, plus one more for each time retrained. For every five times retrained, chakra consumption increases by one tier.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating a sound such as a clap or a whistle. Using that sound as a medium, they create a focused stream of directed sound-waves that enter the target's ears, assaulting the eardrum with vibrations and interfering with its ability to transmit sound waves back to the inner ear, resulting in a temporary loss of hearing for the target.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryuuken 'C.'

Hebesuifu no Jutsu (Drunken Sailor Technique)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: 25 meters.
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Mid.
Special: Effects everyone in range, save for the user. The user must stay still and maintain the last hand seal (Bird.) The sound takes a certain amount of time to take effect, depending on the user's highest rank of this technique:

• D: Full Turn.
  
• C: 3/4ths of a Turn.
  
• B: Half of a Turn.
  
• A: 1/4th of a Turn.
  
• S: Near-Instant.

Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating a continuous sound such as a yell or a whistle. Using that sound as a medium, the user creates a constant stream of selective vibrations all around them. These sounds are designed to bypass the outer ear and assault the inner ear, disrupting the target's sense of balance. This induces a false sense of paralyzing vertigo, causing the target to stumble and vomit painfully, immobilizing them for the duration of the technique. Primarily designed as a stalling technique.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryuuken 'C.'

Dokitaiko no Jutsu (Wrathful Drum Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: See special.
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Very High.
Special: The range of this technique is equal to your highest rank of Sound Dominion. The user must remain stationary while this technique is active. Causes disorientation and pain that disables the target for one round, plus one more for each time retrained. Causes loss of hearing until the target's ear drum is healed.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating a sound such as a clap or a whistle. Using that sound of a medium, they create a focused of stream of directed sound-waves that violently assaults the target's ear drums, rupturing them with intense vibration. This causes a loss of hearing, as well as crippling pain and disorientation.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryuuken 'A.'

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[vegapunk]

* Supposing Ignorance Technique: Looks all good to me.

* Drum Rhythm Technique: Loss of hearing should be stated in the special, including how long the loss of hearing is for (i.e the tech's duration). Also, after every 4 times it is retrained the chakra consumption increases by one.

* Drunken Sailor Technique: I would make this multi-ranked with a time where the damage takes affect on the target/s i.e 1/4 turn, 1/2 turn, near-instant etc. Lock the range at 25m and include how long these effects take place.

* Wrathful Drum Technique: Some sections in special and description don't make sense and need correcting. I would say the user would have to stay in a stationary position for this jutsu to be used.

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[Not Masakuni]

Alright, tried to address those concerns. ^^

[chiatsuki]

Thank you for the help in creating more techniques for ototon, masa, I really appreciate it !

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[suzaku]

Taiko Hyoushi no Jutsu (Drum Rhythm Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: See special.
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Mid.
Special: Range of this technique is equal to your highest rank of Sound Dominion. Causes loss of hearing for one round, plus one more for each time retrained. For every four times retrained, chakra consumption increases by one tier.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating a sound such as a clap or a whistle. Using that sound as a medium, they create a focused stream of directed sound-waves that enter the target's ears, assaulting the eardrum with vibrations and interfering with its ability to transmit sound waves back to the inner ear, resulting in a temporary loss of hearing for the target.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryuuken 'C.'

I feel this is a little strong for its consumption even with the raising tier cost; for a mid-cost of chakra you can deafen somebody for 4 turns, which can be fairly significant. I'd like to see this raised to B Rank in Skill and High in cost, then adjust the rising tier to every 5 retrains.

[Not Masakuni]

Done so. ^^

[suzaku]

1/3

[chiatsuki]

2/3

[Messatsu!]

3/3