Kemono Shinsei (Beast's Divinity) NinTai-FS

[X-Ray]

Kemono Shinsei
~Beast's Divinity~

[/size][/color][/i]

[/center]

This style of fighting draws on the owner's most primal part of their instinct to let loose the beast within to wreak havoc. Hige Kyrian was an elite commander within Konoha that lead the shock troops during the war against the Yonbi However on the verge of defeat and with most of his forces diminished he commanded a retreat of his troops to regroup then reestablish their attack but on the way to the rendezvous point he fell into concealed hole and slid down into dark cave. Being prepared as most ninja are he pulled a bundle of glow sticks from his person then cracked them to light and threw them out around the cave while keeping one on him As the neon light filled the cave he could see a horde of reflective eyes and as they came closer into the light, Hige saw they were huge hungry black bears with blood stained claws and teeth.

He slowly started to back up but quickly came to a dirt wall, his chances were severely dropping as most of his stamina and chakra had been used during the battle and he was now running on fumes. Having gotten caught in a corner, Hige's temper was raising with his desperate crusade. As the bears closed in on him he felt something deep within him break and burst out from him consuming him in a rapid swarm. Not long after Hige's disappear did his troops discover the entrance to the cave and go in to search for him. What they found amazed them a cave full of bodies torn apart and eviscerated though the markings along the bodies and walls were much smaller than a bears and shortly after the discovery of the bodies did they find their commander but he was bloody and rambling on about losing his soul.

During this incident the war was ended to the avail of the Thunder Trio and the troops were all sent back to their home lands but Hige took to the wilds rather than returning so he could train and harness his the power he had found within him. Rumors of Hige spread out through the land and soon he was sought for by others seeking to harness their less than noble sides. Through Kemono Shinsei, practitioners of the style will draw out the primal power within them, which they can use to confuse and close in on their foe while dealing devastating blows capable of tearing their target apart.

____________________________

RESTRICTIONS...

• Must train the first rank of the Shuyona-Naku within a quest! Test Event // "B" ranked /// Intermediate Difficulty
  
  
• Chakra-Enhanced Taijutsu!
  
  
• Cannot be used in conjunction with any genjutsu or chakra enhanced taijutsu style! (Souin, etc...)
  
  
• Must be of Chaotic or Evil alignment.

[/li][/ul][/blockquote]

[X-Ray]

Shuyona-Naku (Primal Cry)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Domain / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: ---
Chakra: Low, Mid, Mid x2, High, High+Mid x2
Special: The aura of chakra around the user creates a streaking afterimage and will eventually allow them to use their chakra to slide across the ground at full speed keeping them from losing momentum and balance but takes time to activate.
“D” rank: afterimage lasts one second / takes a full turn to start sliding and a full turn to activate
“C” rank: lasts 2 seconds / ¾ of a turn
“B” rank: lasts 3 seconds / half a turn
“A” rank: lasts 4 seconds / ¼ of a turn
“S” rank: lasts 5 seconds / near instant

Description: By drawing out the user's primal chakra as it wraps around their body producing a smokey cloak of chakra capable of obscuring the image of those around the user. The influence of this aura will create pointed chakra claws at the end of the user's finger tips, giving their posture a looser and feral appearance giving them a more lithe form of movement that will wrap their feet and hands in a thin layer of chakra allowing them to cling and slide across surfaces while not losing the speed or balance.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei

Primal Pulse
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 5 meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Blasts back anything in range a distance of 15 Meters away as well as damaging them. When first learned the user can only blast away one person per use and can be retrained to increase that number by 1 each time maxing out at 10.
Description: The chakra will compress around the user and once activated it will surge forward as a dense wave of energy pushing back incoming threats and other physical entities. This blast is also capable of blocking projectiles of the user's Shuyona-Naku rank and lower.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “C” rank.

Will-o-Wisp
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: Mid+Low
Special: creates a sphere of chakra, that will last 1 turn, the user controls at their whim within 10 meters of themselves and moving at a fast pace and will disipate after one blow. The power of the spheres are as strong as the user's Shuyona-Naku rank. Can add another sphere and an extra turn of duration each time retrained
Description: Gathering the chakra from around the user's body and will then create a dense sphere of pulsing chakra capable of swirling around the user attacking from many angles and blind spots.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “B” rank

• Bestial Vice
  Rank: A
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 0-5
  Handseals: no
  Chakra: High x2
  Special: Creates spheres of Demi then slams them together on the enemy letting them break down into a cluster of small orbs that will pound the target till they fade away, however these small clusters will only last the turn they are created in. Can be retrained to stack an extra A rank of damage.
  Description: Gathering the chakra from around the user's body they will create two large sphere of the energy in their hands before slamming them together. The resulting slam will make the spheres grind together breaking down into a cluster of smaller spheres. This will then make them continually slam together against the enemy crushing and pounding the area they hit.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank.
  
  
• Maelstrom
  Rank: S
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 10 meters
  Handseals: no
  Chakra: x3 High
  Special: Scatters 20 small spheres around the area while running in a 10 meter wide circle 3 times also enhances the user speed by 200% (12 m/s) Can be retrained to add another 10 orbs to the circle and another full sphere to hit the target, capping at 4 retrains. Each glancing blow deals “D” rank damage and each full sphere deals “B” rank damage
  Description: The user will race around the enemy using the sliding properties of their aura while creating multiple spheres of around the area. HOwever the sliding alone cannot attain this feat at human speeds and as such the user will use the chakra for accelerated traction to move faster and accomplish the onslaught. Once the area is full the user will rush the enemy grabbing another orb to fill their clawed hands as they land glancing blows on their opponent continuing past and repeatedly hitting the enemy till they've gathered enough orbs into their hands culminating in two spheres they will then slam into the enemy. However, each blow is separate from one another and therefore can be dodged or blocked. Using the technique does not ensure all hits will land.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank, Bestial Vice.

Feral Shadow
Rank: A
Type: Clone / Specialized Taiaijutsu
Range: 3 meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: High
Special: Creates 1 clone1 when first learned that will vanish upon taking an "A" rank worth of damage and is capable of dealing "C" rank damage with their own claws. Will disipate after 3 turns. These clones are also capable of using Kemono Shinsei techniques "A" rank and under. Can be retrained to increase the number of clones by one and the number of turns before they disipate by one each time retrained.
Description: Drawing on their chakra veil they will mold the chakra along the ground then make it raise from the ground in a pulsing circle as the copy is formed. This method of creation is very basic in nature for the need to move visible chakra and not covert enough to simply 'poof' a copy into existence.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku "A" rank.

• Feral Break
  Rank: C
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 10 Meters
  Handseals: yes (for clones)
  Chakra: Mid
  Special: disorients and cuts down the enemy, requires 3 Feral Shadow clones.
  Description: uses Feral Shadows to converge on the opponent swarming around them slashing and cutting at vital areas while the afterimage issued from their bodies obscures the opponents vision. The rapid onslaught will create a massive semi-transparent fog around the target from the chakra surrounding the user's body.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Feral Shadow.

Edge of Nature
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range:0-5 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: Mid+Low (Mid upkeep)
Special: Durability and piercing ability is equal to the user's Shuyona-Naku rank.
Description: The user will gather their chakra along their arms then projects a chakra blade from each forearm. These blades are foggy and smooth at the length of a meter each.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “B” rank

Descent Into Hell
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 15 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: High+Mid (Mid Upkeep)
Special: creates a 15 meter wide 5 meter tall dark dome.
Description: The user will create a web of chakra across the ground spreading 7.5 meters away from the user that will then connect into a giant ring before walls burst up from it and encompass the area with the user inside. The area inside of the sphere is glowing dark blue. Due to the dome and user having the same type of chakra around them to such a dense degree, the enemy will only see what looks like a heat distortion.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku "S" rank.

• Highway To Hell
  Rank: B
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 20 meters
  Handseals: no
  Chakra: High
  Special: Creates a 5 meter wide wave of 1 meter long spikes capable of piercing through defenses of one rank lower than the user's Shuyona-Naku rank, moves at incredible speed.
  Description: The user will make their chakra surge forward along the ground creating waves of spikes. These spikes dissipate after 2 seconds and are the same shimmery partial transparent texture that the chakra is.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku "B" rank, Descent Into Hell.
  
  
• Raising Hell
  Rank: A
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 10 meters
  Handseals: no
  Chakra: High
  Special: surrounds a 20 meter wide area with spikes. Capable of piercing through "A" rank defenses.
  Description: The user will create a large web like array on the ground similar to the start of the Descent Into Hell but rather than encasing the area they will make a multitude of spikes raising up to 2 meters tall.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku "A" rank, Descent Into Hell and Highway To Hell.

Lust
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 3 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: Mid+Low
Special: Creates five 3 meter long tendrils from the users back. They're as strong as the user's Shuyona-Naku rank.
Description: The user will focus their chakra to their back before making it erupt in 5 long tendrils capable of contact and reaction like true limbs. They have the capabilities as the user's own arms being able to assist in movement and maneuverability and attacking.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “B” rank.

• Lust: BDSM
  Rank: A
  Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
  Range: 10 meters
  Handseals: no
  Chakra: High
  Special: The 10 meter long tendrils whip at high speed. Capable of grabbing one object per tendril and can be retrained to increase the amount of tendrils down their arm at a max of 3 tendrils per arm. (6 trainings total / 1 initial and 5 retrains)
  Description: The user will take the concept of Lust and grow tendrils along the back of their forearm capable of reaching a commendable distance and snare then wrench the target back to the user. This an easy way to surprise and catch an enemy off guard.
  Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank, Lust.

Gluttony
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: Low, Mid, Mid+Low, High, High+Mid
Special: Binds for 1 turn giving damage of equal rank each turn. Can retrain each rank up to 5 times to add an extra turn to it's constriction each time. The tentacles have the durability of the user's Shuyona-Naku rank.
Description: The user will funnel their chakra into the ground and then while holding the position up to 5 tentacles will burst from the ground and wrap around the target continually restricting them to damage them.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku of appropriate rank.

Greed
Rank: A
Type: Defensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: Self | Arms
Handseals: no
Chakra: High (Mid upkeep)
Special: Shields along the arms as strong as the user's Shuyona-Naku rank. Can be retrained again to grow spikes.
Description: Builds up then condenses chakra along the arms of the user to resist and defend against attacks while encasing all but their hands so that they may still function. When the user has grown familiar with the creation of these shields they will be able to rapidly grow spikes from them during the creation process repelling attackers that are upon the user.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank

Anger
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: High
Special: Attacks with two serpents that will last for 1 turns. Can be retrained to make them last an extra turn with each retrain. As durable as the user's Shuyona-Naku rank. The user is capable of seeing through the snake's eyes for an additional x2 Lows of chakra
Description: condenses the energy of their body to the user's back before two serpents will burst out and attack anything in range tearing them apart. The user most remain still while using this technique and can see through the serpent's eyes.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “B” rank

Heresy
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 5 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: High
Special: Makes a Feral Shadow explode knocking anything in range back 10 meters.
Description: by overfilling a Feral Shadow with chakra they will explode knocking back anything in range while causing a burning sensation on open skin. The sensation is due to the shallow injection of chakra into the enemies skin.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank

Violence
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 20 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: x2 High
Special: attacks a 20 meter wide area with a burst of 50 piercing tendrils.
Description: the user will build up the chakra all over their body before rapidly expelling multitudes of sharp tendrils impaling anything within range of the tendrils. These tendrils will race in a straight line towards anything producing a heat signature of equal strength or greater than the human body so those who could lower their body temp could easily avoid the tentacles piercing power, Also though they are aimed at a heat source does not mean they will follow one once they are shot
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “S” rank.

Fraud
Rank: A
Type: Defensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: High
Special: creates a 10 meter wide web across the ground to defend the user with 5 meter tall spires as strong as the user's Shuyona-Naku rank. 1 spire may be created each time this technique is learned.
Description: The user will stretch their chakra out in an array around themselves that will create great spires to defend the user from incoming attacks, however if timed right one could use this array to impale their opposition. The user must know an attack is coming to defend against.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku “A” rank

Treachery
Rank: S
Type: Defensive / Specialized Taijutsu
Range: 5 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: x2 High
Special: Can make a 10 meter wide blast of chakra as strong as the user's Shuyona-Naku. with this last ditch defense however they will lose the Shuyona-Naku and it must be reformed.
Description: The final technique within the Kemono-Shinsei is a last ditch attack to protect the user, if the user shall feel that they are about to die and their would be killer is within range of them they can force off the layer of chakra surrounding them to slam back any opposition.
Domain: Kemono Shinsei, Shuyona-Naku

[X-Ray]

Would greatly appreciate help and consideration without being completely shot down outright.

[adero]

No. Two words - dark chakra.

[X-Ray]

its not dark just black, Fina said color didnt really matter

[adero]

Even more reason to deny it >/

And for the record, you do specifically say dark, many many times.

[X-Ray]

as description.... not a property

[Not Masakuni]

Through Kurai Jigoku, practitioners of the style will draw out the darkest parts of their hearts and by doing this it will taint their chakra into a very tangible form which they can use to confuse and close in on their foe while dealing devastating blows capable of tearing their target apart.

I understand your desire to not be shot down, I do. However, the concept of dark emotion tainting chakra into a sort of evil energy isn't going to pass, at the moment.

If you're willing to remove that, then we could work on re-tooling this as an elemental or pure chakra FS, though its going to require a lot of work.

[adero]

A lot of work.

[X-Ray]

time not work -sigh- fine ill make it pure

[adero]

No, work.

If you're going to waste a lot of our time I'm denying this now.

If you're gonna put a lot of work into this and succeed at making it good I'll spare this the archival with the small chance you'll actually pull through.

[X-Ray]

meant that it wasnt going to take me much effort to reword it just the time to sit here and do it. I have every intention of making this as good as it can be, I'll pull through on this.

so no worries should be able to do it by tonight

[X-Ray]

hows it look now?

[☆ F ☆]

Not a big fan of speed boosting supplementary techniques which start the style off. Same as techniques that 'increase doging/awareness', it cheapens the roleplay by automatically assuming your character is faster and everything they do is that much better as a result. It takes the fun away from RP, really.

Speed boosters and dodging techs are off limits. I'm gonna have to edit that in to our guide. You can make the other stuff work, but can you work on an alternative to the base technique and its abilities? At the moment, it seems like Gates + Goken + Nara. Most of the nintaijutsu is even more Ninjutsu based, like creating 'chakra webbing'.

[X-Ray]

kk fixed the domain so it doesn't effect noe its more like a glide, low traction speed with a slight traction to keep moving.

Ill add some more tai techs to it sry bout the abundance of those ^^;