Huh, that's an interesting name.

[Nyouta]

NYOUTA TENZOU

DOSSIER;

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Birth Name: Nyouta Tenzou
Alias: n/a
Titles: n/a

Height: 6'2''
Weight: 170 lbs, muscle mass.
Martial Status: Single.

Age: Twenty-Five.
D.O.B: September 19^th.
Nation: Mist.
Village: Kirigakure.

Clan: n/a
Kekkei Genkai: --
Kekkei Toutai: Shouton.
Profession: Shinobi.
Rank: Genin.

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Tier: Advanced/Hard.

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Elemental Release(s): -- Shouton

PSYCHE;

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» Intelligent.
» Thoughtful.
» Quiet.
» Honest.
» Happy.

NEGATIVE TRAITS
» Blunt.
» A bit cynical.
» Over-complicates things.
» Unsympathetic.
» Insecure of his thoughts.

LIKES
» Swordplay.
» Mechanics.
» Junk food.
» Early mornings.
» Gems, jewels, anything of the sorts.

DISLIKES
» Rebellious groups.
» Deceitful people.
» Awkward situations.
» Fire.
» Birds.


Alignment: True Neutral

[li] Neutral alignment, also referred to as True Neutral or Neutral Neutral, is called the "Undecided" or "Nature's" alignment. This alignment represents Neutral on both axes, and tends not to feel strongly towards any alignment. A farmer whose primary overriding concern is to feed his family is of this alignment. Most animals, lacking the capacity for moral judgment, are of this alignment since they are guided by instinct rather than conscious decision. Many roguish characters who play all sides to suit themselves are also of this alignment (such as a weapon merchant with no qualms selling his wares to both sides of a war for a profit).

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APPEARANCE;

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[/b] Nyouta's build isn't all that fantastic. Although he is a shinobi, he isn't a person to inwardly exercise, although his job forces him to put out with training and running, and as thus he has some muscle, his over-all form isn't an athletics build, but could rather be explained as a 'backliner'. His hair is a charcoal black color, his eyes a dark blue in contrast to them.


Apparel: Style is a large part of Nyouta's lifestyle, always keeping up-to-date on the newest and highest shinobi fashion. Although a bit behind on this season, he usually wears anything of black variant. Whether that is spandex under a black robe, or even a set of black leather vests. It doesn't matter.
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[Nyouta]

PRIMARY WEAPONS;

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• Katana
  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Sword / Melee
  Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
  

SECONDARY WEAPONS;

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• Shuriken (Ninja Star) ( x3 )
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 5 per Pack.
  Description: A shuriken, like kunai, is one of the more basic weapons employed by ninja of all classes. They are sharpened, four-pronged metal stars, no more than a few inches long, and are extremely useful for throwing. Although small, they can be used to distract, or, if accurate enough, to kill. They have an open circle in the center, used for grabbing with a finger, to avoid cutting oneself, or to put thread through. The circle is also a benefit in aerodynamics, as it ensures more accurate trajectories.
  
  
  
• Kunai (Throwing Knife) ( x1 )
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
  Special: 2 per Pack.
  Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
  
  

ACCESSORIES;

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• Binoculars

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Rank: C
Type: Accessory / Self
Special: Has a range up to 100 meters.
Description: Similar to the radio in ease and effectiveness, the binoculars are sturdy and serve as a means to measure the distance to a target. Measuring no more than six inches in diameter, this square shaped device sports a durable carapace designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
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[Nyouta]

Academy Ninjutsu; 0 EXP

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• Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: Switch is near-instantaneous. Kawarimi can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained. However, the technique itself can only be used once per turn, regardless of retraining. Requires the user to switch with objects that range from equal in size to as small as half their size. Cannot switch with other living people or animals.
  Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log) the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack - i.e. exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu.
  
  
  
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: Yes
  Chakra: Low
  Special: Allows the user to transform into any person, object or animal of normal/small/miniature size. Transformation can be held for one turn, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: Henge no Jutsu is a very basic ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at their respective village's Shinobi Academy. Henge allows the user to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu.
  
  
  
• Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: Yes.
  Chakra: Low
  Special: Allows the user to create a clone without substance that resembles the user in every way, including retaining its movement speed. Clones cannot mold chakra nor perform jutsu, nor can they harm. Up to one clone can be made, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance that, although easily seen through by those with doujutsu, can fool the normal eye easily. Why? Simply because although without substance, the copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent, though no real damage can be done by it. Finally, as soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu
  
  
  
• Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No
  Chakra: Low
  Special: No other technique may be used while creeping. Invisible to the naked eye, but doujutsu and extra-sensorial skill will easily "see through" this technique.
  Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu
  
  
  
• Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No.
  Chakra: Low
  Special: Ineffective against complex, electronic, or unique binds.
  Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from regular rope binds.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu

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[Nyouta]

Shouton Ninjutsu; 500 EXP

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Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Handseals: No.
Special: Rank determines casting range of Shoton creations, level of techniques which the user can crystallize, and finally, the speed at which they can crystallize. Covers a 10 meter radius, plus 10 more for each additional rank attained. It is important to note that all Ototon (Sound) jutsu made against crystal will be enhanced by a single rank and along side that, the crystallization may only be utilized during the creation of Shouton techniques.

D: 10 meters of control // Full Turn
C: 20 meters // 3/4th of a Turn
B: 30 meters // Half a Turn
A: 40 meters // 1/4th of a Turn
S: 50 meters // Near-Instant!


Description: The root behind Shoton's unbridled power comes from the ability to crystallize anything, as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. Sekisuisho can crystallize any solid substance, so releases such as Earth, Water, and Wood techniques are virtually useless against it. Using crystal ninjutsu, the user can crystallize any physical material and even the moisture in the air around them, turning them into a weapon. The only apparent weakness of the crystallization process is that it cannot crystallize either raw energy or chakra as they have no physical mass to crystallize, allowing a person with either energy-based jutsu, such as Lightning, Fire, or Wind, or even someone simply with good chakra control to properly counter it. Finally, all Shoton creations are also susceptible to a specific sound wave frequency; because crystal requires a very precise build-up of molecules, the proper sound waves can break down the build-up before the crystal can properly form.
Domain: Shoton.

Kessho no Yoroi (Crystal Armor Defense)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: D - Low, C - Mid, B - High, A - High x2, S - High x3 [Initial] / Mid [Upkeep]
Special: Armor protection is equivalent to the user's highest highest rank known. Highest rank known determines the type of attack one can defend from.
Description: Once the crystal user learns to control the strength of their element, they are able to form more advanced creations. This technique makes crystal chakra flow through the body, absorbing the properties in order to form a skin-deep armor that is transparent and is only visible when light reflects off it. By doing this, the user effectively covers their skin with a thin sheet of crystal, protecting themselves from blunt-force attacks and trauma, as well as enabling them to perform stronger, more powerful physical strikes and break free or through restraints and walls. Best of all, despite encasing the user's body, the armor has no apparent affect on the user's speed or agility.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment'.



Suisho Taijin no Jutsu (Crystal Encampment Wall Technique)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: D - Low, C - Mid, B - High, A - High x2, S - High x3
Special: Size of wall defense equals to half the user's 'Crystal Commandment' rank. Highest rank known determines what kind of attacks can be blocked.
Description: A very basic yet effective Shoton technique, the user sends out a wave of chakra which then turns into an almost impenetrable crystal wall. The wall itself materializes before the user, and reflects directly the strength of their Shoton prowess. In the hands of a master, virtually any physical attack may be stopped.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment'.



Suisho-To (Jade Crystal Blade)

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Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Blades extend 1 foot in a curved fashion, and can be extended by 1 foot each time retrained, for a maximum of 5 feet.
Description: As the Shoton user's skill with their releases increases, they learn to wield their element in a more unique, offensive way. With this particular variation, the user can quickly form a blade made of pure crystal across their arms and forearms, so that they may be used for both offense and defense, such as for blocking and parrying or even slashing. Blades can be formed on one or both arms if needed.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'D'.



Shuriken Ranbu (Shuriken Wild Dance)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Distance traveled and shuriken durability depends on the user's 'Crystallization Commandment' rank. Up to 1 shuriken can be made, plus 1 more each time retrained.
Description: As its name implies, the Shuriken Wild Dance is a projectile raining of pure crystal, aimed and controlled wherever it is the user desires. After crystallizing a fixated amount of crystal shuriken, they float the user's side until deemed necessary for use. It is at this time that the shuriken are shot forward at blinding speeds, streaking across thin air and towards their unfortunate target.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'D'.



Shuisho Tontiko (Crystal Platform)
Rank: D
Type: Supplemental / Ninjutsu / Kekkei Touta
Range: See Special!
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Low
Special: Durability of the crystallized disc depends on the users rank of Crystallization Commandment. Distance is virtually unlimited. Costs low chakra to maintain active per turn.
Description: The user creates a small crystallized disc that allows for them to hover and move throughout the air. This technique is normally used to escape from opponents or to chase opponents. The user is able to move double as fast as if they were running due to controlling the disc directly. The user must maintain contact with the disc and if they lose concentration then the jutsu will promptly end.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'D'.



Shuisho Chuushabari (Crystal Needle Restraint)
Rank: C
Type: Supplemental / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Area of emerging needles depends on the user's 'Crystallization Command' rank, with the victim at the center. Enough needles emerge to restrain a single victim from below. Can restrain up to one target per use, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Although basic, the Needle Restraint technique is nonetheless effective. After forming a few simple seals, the Shoton user summons a flurry of fast moving crystal pillars from underneath their target's feet. The aim is not to injure them, but to overwhelm their body in staffs of crystal that prevent movement and best of all, drain the user of chakra slowly in order to power and reinforce the prison.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'C'.



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Rank: C
Type: Supplemental / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: A single crystal arc wheel allows the user to move 10% above their maximum; that is, 110%. It is, however, hard to corner when going at such speeds, making this a very linear technique when in battle, ideal mostly for travel.
Description: Simple, quick, and effective, this Shouton technique, allows the user to transverse any rough terrain otherwise deemed uncrossable by the user. After a few simple seals, the user creates a disk-shaped wheel made of crystal around them, encasing their figure so that they are in the middle. This arc allows them to keep above substances such as water, lave, or other rough retain, and race towards the enemy at high speed.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'C'.



Suisho Kyou (Jade Crystal Mirror)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Mirrors can be created on any preexisting Shoton creation, or made new. While this jutsu is active, only one mirror can be made at a time, plus one more each time relearned.
Description: One of the most dangerous aspects of Shoton is that the very crystal creations made can serve as birthing points for new variations. In this case, the crystal user can now alter their creations so as to include a large, crystal mirror in the shape of a snowflake - whether the mirror is made on the spot or comes from another jutsu is irrelevant - in order to provide a pathway for its master. Crystal mirrors, once created, serve as portals for the Shoton user to travel to freely. As long as there is at least one mirror in place to enter, the user may alter space and time in order to hide; with more in place, the possibilities are endless. However, there is one flaw - if the creation of crystal that houses the mirror is destroyed all at once while the Shoton user is phased out, they remain trapped in the alternate space-time forever.
Domain: Shoton. Must know 'Crystallization Commandment' 'C'.



Suisho-Seiso Kantsuu (Crystal Lance Pierce)
Rank: C
Type: Defensive / Ninjutsu / Shouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Strength of lance strike and penetration power depends on the user's highest 'Crystal Commandment' rank. Lance extends up to 1 meter, plus 1 more each time relearned.
Description: Dabbling into the offensive, realm, this Shoton technique allows the user to create a large and sharp spear-like rod attached to their wrist. Comprised of the user's strongest Shoton, the lance will remain fixated steadfast on the user's arm while they charge forward with intent to impale her target. With a razor sharp tip, anything that stands in the way of the lance's wrong end will most likely result in its very end
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Kenjutsu Taijutsu; 375 EXP

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Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Special: Allows the swordsman to deflect basic attacks of equal or lower rank, in conjunction with other, more advanced moves within the style.
Description: An offensive nature of fighting, all Battojutsu practitioners will tend to stand in looser patterns, letting their steel fly and attack at often irregular angles. Unlike its defensive counterpart, this form allows for quicker, more deliberate strikes, making it deadly in the hands of a true master.
Domain: Kenjutsu.

Mae Zuki (Front Thrust)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Learning 'S' rank version increases damage rank once more.
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws and thrusts a frontal attacker and then quickly sheathes his blade. As he invests more time and practice into the art of offensive sheathing, his overall offensive rating shall increase, although at the cost of greater chakra.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'D'.



Ushiro Zuki (Rear Thrust)

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Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Learning 'S' rank version increases damage rank once more.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner quickly turns and draws to thrust the rear as a simple attack then sheathes. As long as the user is aware of the target behind them, a quick unexpected offensive strike like this usually yields success.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'D'.



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Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Learning 'S' rank version increases damage rank once more.
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws and strikes an approaching attacker then sheathes. As they invest more time and practice into the art of offensive sheathing, their overall offensive rating shall increase.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'D'.



Nibaigiri (Double Cut)[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Damage is calculated per strike. Can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner rises and draws, making a rising strike on the draw and a dropping strike as he sheathes. The movement is flashy and hard to trace, leaving unguarded opponent's in trouble.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'C'.



Tsukesagiri (Cut and Thrust)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Damage is calculated per strike. Can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws, attempts to cut one opponent, then thrust into another before quickly sheathing. The variation of attacks is quite useful in a situation where the user is surrounded by two or more opponents.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'C'.



Sanpo Zuki (3-Way Thrust)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: Learning 'B' rank "Art of Sword Drawing" increases damage by one rank. Damage is calculated per strike. Can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws and thrusts his sword into three opponents around him, then quickly sheathes. The movement is capable of impaling a group of opponents easily, if they are not cautious.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battōjutsu 'C'.



Nadegiri (Killing Several in One Sweep)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S.
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: Self.
Chakra: Low - Massive.
Special: See description!
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws and strikes an attacker then sheathes. Nadegiri is a technique developed by Kenjutsu masters, who prefers to ending battles in one quick and powerful strike. Nadegiri doesn't have a set position for the strike, the attack can be coming from any direction, but, it requires two hands upon the handle to drive all the power and force behind it for it to be a finishing blow. Like it was created to be.
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Universal Taijutsu; 100 EXP

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Mid
Special: Can only be performed during or after the apex of the user's initial jump. Can execute up to 1 mid-air jump before hitting the ground.
Description: Once in the air, only the most advanced Taijutsu users can manage to use their brute strength to actually jump against the air using friction, effectively jumping again before hitting the ground.
Domain: Universal Taijutsu.

Hayabusa Otoshi (Peregrine Falcon Drop)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Mid - High x2
Special: Most effective when used on extremely hard surfaces.
Description: A very deadly and efficient taijutsu attack. While at an elevated position, the user will grab their opponent from behind. Firmly locking themselves to their back, the user will then lock their ankles onto the opponent's neck in order to get their body rigid. Finally, on the descent, the user proceeds to drive and plant the victim head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back pile-driver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.
Domain: Universal Taijutsu.

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[Nyouta]

Reserved !

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[Nyouta]

Reserved !!

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[Nyouta]

All done! Grading is hopeful!

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[Exar Kun]

Most of the stuff looks good. Just a couple things.

- You have 375 exp in Kenjutsu, not 400. Not a huge deal, but just wanted to let you know that your count is off.

- I'm not sure if the number you have listed next to your secondary weapons designates how many of each item you have, or how many packs of each item you have (that is, do you have 3 shuriken, or 3 packs of shuriken?). If it's the latter, then you have too many items. Genin start off with 3 packs' worth of secondary items, not five.

So take care of those things and we'll move you on to the next step.

[Nyouta]

Edited, would like the remaining exp Sidebar'd.

[Naitome]

You can't have your remaining exp sidebarred when first making a character. You have to use all 1000 starting exp. Just throw the last bit into some retrains of academy techs or something to complete this.

[Exar Kun]

As well, I'm counting 4 secondary weapon packs, 3 shuriken packs and 1 knife pack. You can only start off with 3.

[KEITH]

Refer to this and this.

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[Naitome]

This has gone unedited for over a week. If changes aren't made within the next 48 Hours, it'll be archived. I'll send you a PM to notify you, and can bring it back from archives whenever you need me to if you can't get to it until after that time.