2strng [selfish]

[KEITH]

"There was a man in Chu who sold shields and halberds. Praising them he said: "My shields are so strong that nothing can pierce them." And praising the halberds he said: "My halberds are so strong that there is nothing that they cannot pierce." A person asked: "What if someone pierces your shields with your halberds?" He could not respond."

2strng for a name (2strng to translate)
Rank: 2strng for a rank!
Type: 2strng for a type!
Range: Self
Handseals: ---
Chakra: Double Infinity (aka Legendary cost)
Special: 2fuckingstrng!
Description: da fuck?! 2strng for a description!
Domain: Taijutsu. Fūma Yokumaru.

[Naitome]

If this is not worked on within 48 Hours, it will be archived.

[KEITH]

Huzzah.

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[Hotaru]

You'll need to actually define the chakra cost in that portion of the technique. Overall, i'm not a huge fan of this, but maybe we can work through to make us both happy.

[KEITH]

:axcel:

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[Shinryu]

It requires a charge time of one full post, and a cool down time of one post, which stacks with retraining.

This is kind of ambiguous. Does this mean if it gets retrained 5 times, it takes 5 posts to charge?

[KEITH]

Yes.

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[KEITH]

le bump

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[Hotaru]

1|2 denied.

This technique makes you almost completely invulnerable for no drawback other than using an equal amount of chakra to block the incoming technique. Knowing the chakra to use to block the incoming attack would be impossible ICly unless you knew the incoming jutsu. It just kind of has way too much utility.

[addy-hime ♥]

There are actually several ninjutsu techniques that do something similar to this, only the user doesn't have to guess the consumption of the technique. Example: Kyodai Sensu's Godaikaze, while not actually a "defense" in the same way as this, protects the user from harm.

I'm not okay with you having what appears to be a natural immunity to blunt/sharp objects (you would need to find some way to quantify how strong your defense would need to be, chakra consumption-wise). Similarly, I'm not okay with this blocking Ninjutsu. Godaikaze can do it because it's deflecting the attack. But if you're being attacked by Katon, regardless of how "durable" you are you would still get burned. I think if you changed it to just Taijutsu and reworded the chakra consumption, it would be far more acceptable.

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[KEITH]

[Shinryu]

Not my call, but...

2Stronk for acceptance, I think.

[addy-hime ♥]

Archiving this.

Mods should probably be more professional. :P

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