Bonin' Like a Pro

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Bone Armor
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Handseals: no
Chakra: Low, Mid, Mid+Low, High, High+Mid (Initial+Upkeep) Mid to mend armor.
Special: Creates a layer of bone armor just under the skin all over the user’s body and is capable of taking its rank in damage before being broken and having to be reapplied to that section of the body.
Description: One of the simpler yet still equally effective techniques within the arsenal of the Kaguya is the Bone Armor. A technique notorious for stopping a well-aimed and timed attempt at the users life and leaving them well within range of one of the Kaguyas many, many, specialized taijutsus. The bone spans every part of the user just under their skin protecting them from every angle from their hands to their thorax and even the eyelids.
Domain: Shikotsumyako of equal rank

[Hotaru]

Shikotsumyako (Calcium Compression)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Kaguya Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: No.
Chakra: ---
Special:Highest rank determines the level of defense the Kaguya can create under their skin in the form of thin, compressed bone for the sake of defense. Damage reduction, while measured in the form a number, ultimately depends on the RP. Keep in mind the defense bonus only applies to attacks equal or lower to the highest rank known in this technique, and applies to single rank creations; stacked bonus damage attacks can bypass the bone with enough damage. Finally, because the bone within can be so strong, all non-weapon, hand to hand Taijutsu will receive a passive blunt damage bonus equal to the highest rank known in this technique. However, when this effect is applied, the user will ultimately lose speed.
D: 30% damage reduction // 50% speed reduction
C: 35% dr // 40% loss
B: 40% dr // 30% loss
A: 45% dr // 20% loss
S: 50% dr // 10% loss

Description: A Kaguya's most basic and innate skill, it allows them to alter the calcium composition of their entire bone structure to whatever density they see fit. Whether they harden a whole section of bone or just one individual piece doesn't matter; if the Kaguya wills it, one normal bone can become as tough as iron. This is the basis behind their bloodline skill and all their jutsu, and as they progress in skill and power, their bones become harder and stronger.
Domain: Kaguya.

Can you explain to me the difference between this and what you've submitted, please?

Also, refrain from using slang language like 'cock block' in customs. It's unprofessional, immature, and unnecessary.

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fixed the wording

and my explanation for this is that the way I understand the original domain is that it strengthens and increases the density so that the bones wont break, like taking an S rank punch would tear through the flesh but wouldnt break the bone.

mine is how kimimaro's one armor works and creates a layer of bone under the skin like a full suit of armor, as you can see in the pictures through the skin where bone is protecting spots where not bone or at least not enough bone would be

[Hotaru]

Highest rank determines the level of defense the Kaguya can create under their skin in the form of thin, compressed bone for the sake of defense

This is taken from the first line of the special section of Shikotsumyako. I dont believe these to be different abilities. So. I'll have to

1|2 Denial.

If someone feels differently, even you, please feel free to follow up with a rebuttal.

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how the helld I miss that... okay sorry hotaru ^^; you can archive it

[Hotaru]

archived.