Let's Get Tricky!

[Kenchiro]

Buyou no Bunshin (Clone Dance (or: The Almighty Face in the Crowd Attack!))
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu (Offensive)
Range: 0-5 Meters
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Requires "Bunshin no Jutsu" retrained a minimum of three times. The specifics of the final attack rely mostly on user personality and weapon choice.
Description: An offshoot of the classic Bunshin no Jutsu. The user of this technique will materialize a number of clones, who will proceed to charge the opponent in an overlapping scramble, jumping over and ducking under each other. With the user in the mix, the real ninja is obscured, much like the classic card game Three Card Monty. The ninja can then either attack the user in the crowd (theirs will naturally be the only attack that could connect) or circle around to attack from a blind spot once the clones all perform their assigned task (namely, bum rushing the target.). Naturally, only the real user's attack will be the one that does any real damage, since the clones are still illusory and intangible, but this technique's power is in its unpredictability, since the opponent can not easily determine which attack is real without the aid of extrasensory jutsu or especially sharp eyes.
Domain: Universal Jutsu

[vegapunk]

Your first two technique's imo don't need to be created. These are, fundamentally based off of the Water/Wall Walking jutsu. Although not included in the academy jutsu, they are considered to be supplementary abilities learn't once leaving the academy.

*Buyou no Bunshin: All good. Still not sure about the range (where is it included and why?). Edit range to 'See Special!' and include whatever range requirements are needed in the special.

-- After that you shall be approved.

[Kenchiro]

I can understand the logic behind the first jutsu; if the talent it describes is really implied by graduating the Academy, then it'd be wasting time and experience to have a technique for it.

Is it the same with the second? The crux of the technique is that the user could run silently and along things like ninja wires by virtue of seeming to have no weight. The only reason I ask is because, if it's actually part and parcel with the Water Walking technique, I don't want to risk foul being called if I did something like avoiding tripwire traps by walking directly on said wire or doing the cliche "standing on the enemy's sword blade" trick using that talent as a springboard. In either case, if it's cool, I have no problem with dropping both of the jutsu.

As for the third, I changed the range to a simple Melee. The idea was that whatever technique the user pulled out in tandem with this jutsu would be based on their weapon. A person with a bow, for instance, would not necessarily join the clones in a simple melee dog pile. That seems disingenuous in retrospect, tho, since the guy with the bow in the background would easily be singled out.

[vegapunk]

* With that said, I think the two first technique's can be removed. Good point brought up about the unknown grey area if you wanted to walk on ninja-wire etc. But, I think with the combination of the canon academy jutsu and technique such as this you will be safe;

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Kaneau (Good Balance)
Rank: C.
Type: Supplementary / Taijutsu
Range: Self.
Stamina: Low.
Special: This technique can only be used once per thread, and once more when it is retrained. Can be retrained 6 times.
Description: Kaneau is a Taijutsu technique that makes it easier for one to shift their own weight in an instant, providing them with good balance when they would land on one foot, no matter what they do or what kind of position they are in. This technique was developed by Taijutsu masters to give them good balance while they did the most ridiculous types of Taijutsu moves that would naturally leave them off balance.
Domain: Universal Taijutsu.

* Well seeing how this jutsu would be under the domain of the original bushin technique, just edit the range to 0 - 5m (what the bushin clone jutsu has). And, in your special section include a short exert about how it relies fundamentally on a weapon they hold. But note, that bushin clones have no physical property (like other clones), they are only an illusion. Then it will be approved. ^^

[Kenchiro]

Okey doke. The first two jutsu have been summarily deleted. I'll be sure to pick up that Balance tech for when I feel like fudging my acrobatics skills a little. I also made the necessary amendments to the remaining Clone Dance.

[vegapunk]

Coolio! 1/3

[Exar Kun]

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[Not Masakuni]

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