Genjutsu Vol.I

[vegapunk]

Kakezan no Jutsu (Multiplication Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Sight
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Objects are multiplied by five (for each object in question), with an additional five created when retrained, for a maximum of thirty multiplications each. Can be used once per turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: An illusion that makes the opponent believe that inanimate objects seem to be multiplying at an incredible rate. The user will produce the necessary handseals allowing them to multiply a range of objects from their creation. For example, making an increased amount of fake projectiles while masking the real projectiles within the mix, in order to increase the chances of a successful hit, or used in an important object to prevent someone from stealing it.
Domain: Inton 'D'


Hibiki No Jutsu (Echo Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Hearing
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: The user must be able to see the target or know thier location when casting. Can be used for a single turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: A sound illusion that causes the opponent to hear constant echoing within their mind coming from all directions, disturbing even the deepest thought processing as well as removing part of their hearing senses, making things such as surprise attacks easier.
Domain: Inton 'D'


Hinote Majindoki no Jutsu (Blazing Wrath Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Touch
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Lasts for a single turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: An illusion where the opponent is overwhelmed by a realistic burning sensation as if flames were consuming them, believing them to have such a painful burning feeling throughout their entire body. The feeling will progress, with their skin igniting in a slow boil, to the feeling of a searing flame that it hinders their whole movement and physical capacity.
Domain: Inton 'C'


Chakra Ensho no Jutsu (Chakra Inflammation Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: 2x Mid
Special: All chakra-based technique's used while this illusion is in effect will make the target feel incredibly depleted, therefore, making it more likely for them to refrain from using chakra-based jutsu. Target does not know that this effect is taking place, unless illusion is dispelled.
Description: An illusion that makes the opponent feel as if their current chakra supply, and efficiency with using chakra has been terribly decreased, giving them the feeling of a smaller base of chakra at their disposal. This effect will result in the target to moderate their use of chakra-based jutsu in fear of exhaustion as molding chakra becomes more difficult.
Domain: Inton 'B'

• Stamina Ensho no Jutsu (Stamina Inflammation Technique)
  Rank: B
  Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
  Handseals: Yes
  Chakra: 2x Mid
  Special: All physical-based technique's used while this illusion is in effect will make the target feel incredibly depleted, therefore, making it more likely for them to refrain from using physical-based jutsu. Target does not know that this effect is taking place, unless illusion is dispelled.
  Description: An illusion that makes the opponent feel as if their current stamina supply, and general physical capacity has been terribly decreased, giving them the feeling of a smaller base of stamina at their disposal. This effect will result in the target to moderate their use of physical-based jutsu in fear of completely exhausting their physical state as dizziness, instability and general fatigue sets in.
  Domain: Inton 'B'

Haku no Jutsu (Fade Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: 2x Mid
Special: Cannot be dispelled by a target using the 'Kai' technique. Can be used once per thread, and additionally, every time retrained. Costs a 'tier' higher worth of chakra if used as a means of escape (i.e out of the thread).
Description: An illusion which makes it seem that the user is scattering into the air in the shape of a personalized theme of their liking (small animals - spiders / snakes / crows, objects, paper, flower petals, etc). Commonly used with slithering and crawling animal or object although each person usually has their own use mark. After forming the required handseals this technique will make one's presence truly hidden, allowing for a strategic retreat or for a stealth attack. The structure behind it is alike that of Kawarimi no Jutsu, which will have the user previously disappeared from their place, leaving one's image behind to disperse after an attack or at will and the user will reappear when the "pieces" get back together at a location, which will make it easier for a target to follow.
Domain: Inton 'B'

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[Messatsu!]

Reviewing your Genjutsu in order like so:

Kakezan no Jutsu (Multiplication Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Sight
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: Objects are multiplied by five (for each object in question), with an additional five created when retrained. Can be used once per turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: An illusion that makes the opponent believe that inanimate objects seem to be multiplying at an incredible rate. The user will produce the necessary handseals allowing them to multiply a range of objects from their creation. For example, making an increased amount of fake projectiles while masking the real projectiles within the mix, in order to increase the chances of a successful hit, or used in an important object to prevent someone from stealing it.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

This is good, and original, can't say that i've seen this at all. As a whole it seems like a good idea and can't be very effective and balanced during fight. Only thing I will require of you from this is adding a reasonable capacity on the retrains regarding the amount of fake objects. totally buying this for myself.

Hibiki No Jutsu (Echo Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Hearing
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low
Special: The user must be able to see the target or know his exact location. Can be used for a single turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: A sound illusion that causes the opponent to hear constant echoing within their mind coming from all directions, disturbing even the deepest thought processing as well as removing part of their hearing senses, making things such as surprise attacks easier.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

You say the user must be able to see the target or know his exact location, is this just while casting or even after its cast if the caster loses sight of the target, is it dispelled?

Hinote Majindoki no Jutsu (Blazing Wrath Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Touch
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Causes the target to be paralysed due to the illusion for a single turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: An illusion where the opponent is overwhelmed by a realistic burning sensation as if flames were consuming them, believing them to have such a painful burning feeling throughout their entire body. The feeling will progress, with their skin igniting in a slow boil, to the feeling of a searing flame that it hinders their whole movement and physical capacity.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

It sounds like this is a similar jutsu to the creepy crawling genjutsu with the bugs as a base and concept in terms of affected the outer layers of the skin. I like the concept behind this but I believe that the paralysis should be removed and replaced. Other than that this technique is fairly fine.

Do these and I'll move on to the last two.

[vegapunk]

Done ^^

[vegapunk]

errmm...bump.

[Messatsu!]

Sorry for the wait, didn't even see you post.

Chakra Ensho no Jutsu (Chakra Inflammation Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: All chakra-based technique's, used while this illusion is in effect, will cost a tier's higher worth of chakra than it normally would. Target does not know that this effect is taking place, unless illusion is dispelled. Note, dispelling with 'Kai' will also cost the target more chakra.
Description: An illusion that makes the opponent feel as if their current chakra supply, and efficiency with using chakra has been terribly increased, giving them the feeling of a larger base of chakra at their disposal. This effect will result in the target to excessively rely on chakra-based jutsu, as well as waste more of their chakra in doing so.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

[1] I'm not entirely sure about this technique, I'm pretty sure a person can tell and feel when their reserves are normal and could easily tell when its abnormal. Now, I think it'd make more sense if it makes them feel depleted thus causing them to NOT use jutsu insteand of using a higher ranked that could potentially backfire given the player, see where I'm going? Just change that little detail and up the rank and appropriate cost, this technqiue will be very effective against those who heavily rely on chakra. Now with that said, its just a illusion, meaning if the just so happened to use chakra while feeling depleted, it'd still go through if that makes sense.

Stamina Ensho no Jutsu (Stamina Inflammation Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: All physical-based technique's, used while this illusion is in effect, will cost a tier's higher worth of stamina than it normally would. Target does not know that this effect is taking place, unless illusion is dispelled. Note, dispelling through the means of 'pain' will cost more stamina.
Description: An illusion that makes the opponent feel as if their current stamina supply, and general physical capacity has been terribly increased, giving them the feeling of a larger base of stamina at their disposal. This effect will result in the target to excessively rely on physical-based jutsu, as well as waste more of their stamina in doing so. A feeling of receiving their second wind!
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

[2] Same as [1].

Haku no Jutsu (Fade Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: Cannot be dispelled by a target using the 'Kai' technique. Can be used once per thread, and additionally, every time retrained. Costs a 'tier' higher worth of chakra if used as a means of escape (i.e out of the thread).
Description: An illusion which makes it seem that the user is scattering into the air in the shape of a personalized theme of their liking (small animals - spiders / snakes / crows, objects, paper, flower petals, etc). Commonly used with slithering and crawling animal or object although each person usually has their own use mark. After forming the required handseals this technique will make one's presence truly hidden, allowing for a strategic retreat or for a stealth attack. The structure behind it is alike that of Kawarimi no Jutsu, which will have the user previously disappeared from their place, leaving one's image behind to disperse after an attack or at will and the user will reappear when the "pieces" get back together at a location, which will make it easier for a target to follow.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

This technique is confusing me in some way. Is it like, you're placing the illusion onto the target(s) and you appear to scatter int oa group of animals / objects while you yourself (the real you) moves about undetected (presuming no one is using chakra sensing abilities)?

[vegapunk]

Haha, thats fine. ^^

I'm not entirely sure about this technique, I'm pretty sure a person can tell and feel when their reserves are normal and could easily tell when its abnormal. Now, I think it'd make more sense if it makes them feel depleted thus causing them to NOT use jutsu insteand of using a higher ranked that could potentially backfire given the player, see where I'm going? Just change that little detail and up the rank and appropriate cost, this technqiue will be very effective against those who heavily rely on chakra. Now with that said, its just a illusion, meaning if the just so happened to use chakra while feeling depleted, it'd still go through if that makes sense.

Well, whether a person can 'feel' their chakra reserves change or not is pretty much the whole point of this illusion and the RP process to dispel the illusion isn't it? If the opponent is aware of the change, i.e recognized the effect of the illusion, then they can kai out of it. I can make the change, but not too sure what you mean by this; "its just a illusion, meaning if the just so happened to use chakra while feeling depleted, it'd still go through if that makes sense."

This technique is confusing me in some way. Is it like, you're placing the illusion onto the target(s) and you appear to scatter int oa group of animals / objects while you yourself (the real you) moves about undetected (presuming no one is using chakra sensing abilities)?

Yeah, that is pretty much the gist of it. It is based on these two canon tech's; here & Itachi with his crows. The group of animals or objects thing is just to make it more customisable for everyone.

[chiatsuki]

Actually gene is right. Feeling ones chakra is the same as being able to tell if one is breathing or not - its nature to a shinobi and it would immediately give off the fact that the technique was/is genjutsu. Also - forcing someone to use more chakra on a technique than they normally would is a bit god-mode to me/ especially when you are talking about kai. 1/2 denial on that technique the rest are fine.

[vegapunk]

Thanks Soh. ^^

- Also, edited those two technique's to how Gene requested. Hope that the current descriptions suffice. If not, I will edit.

[Messatsu!]

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[tigaevo]

Hinote Majindoki no Jutsu (Blazing Wrath Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu / Touch
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Lasts for a single turn, with an additional turn every time retrained.
Description: An illusion where the opponent is overwhelmed by a realistic burning sensation as if flames were consuming them, believing them to have such a painful burning feeling throughout their entire body. The feeling will progress, with their skin igniting in a slow boil, to the feeling of a searing flame that it hinders their whole movement and physical capacity.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

Nothing wrong with the tech per say, but with the revamp of Genjutsu I don't think you should have to retain it multiple times to use it for multiple turns. So I think you can remove that and that jutsu will be fine.

Haku no Jutsu (Fade Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Genjutsu
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: Cannot be dispelled by a target using the 'Kai' technique. Can be used once per thread, and additionally, every time retrained. Costs a 'tier' higher worth of chakra if used as a means of escape (i.e out of the thread).
Description: An illusion which makes it seem that the user is scattering into the air in the shape of a personalized theme of their liking (small animals - spiders / snakes / crows, objects, paper, flower petals, etc). Commonly used with slithering and crawling animal or object although each person usually has their own use mark. After forming the required handseals this technique will make one's presence truly hidden, allowing for a strategic retreat or for a stealth attack. The structure behind it is alike that of Kawarimi no Jutsu, which will have the user previously disappeared from their place, leaving one's image behind to disperse after an attack or at will and the user will reappear when the "pieces" get back together at a location, which will make it easier for a target to follow.
Domain: Universal Genjutsu

Same thing with this tech, unless i'm just being loud and wrong lol.

other than those two things, i'll give it my 2/3

[vegapunk]

The revamp created dominion tech's for range, duration and number of targets, so it should be fine to keep it in. However, thank you for the 2/3! ^^

[chiatsuki]

3/3

[KEITH]

Need to be updated.

[vegapunk]

Updated.

[KEITH]

Updated.