Personal I

[Sharkk]

Technique Name Hanatsu - "Radiate"
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: -
Chakra: x2 High
Special: Has an automatic two meter knock back plus one extra meter per retraining for up to three retraining [Though damage doesn't increase]. Effects all people and objects within the technique's range.
Description: During his "vacation" Clave trained himself in quite a few new ways and discovered his first real personal technique. By gathering up his immense pool of chakra [due to his ties with the Sanbi's chakra], he is able to release quite a bit of it without hand-seals. The venting chakra is so powerful that it caused the surrounding are to become visible white whips of wind that immediately extend out in a shock wave, effecting anything in range and knocking them back. This is caused by the immense amount of pressure and power behind the shock wave, similar to high rank Wind Release techniques, though they shouldn't be compared at their base, but instead their effect. And if it doesn't send someone spiraling backwards from the force, then it will definitely bring them to their knees for a time due to the strain on their bodies from receiving the blow.
Domain: Ninjutsu. Sebastian Clave

[Hotaru]

Um.

I've read this a couple times, and for the life of me, i still cant figure out what it does. Can you redo the special and Description to explain it more clearly? From the sound of it now, I'm not inclined to accept it.

[Mad-Rock]

It's basically just a sudden release of chakra as a hardly visible shockwave. Similar to immense amounts of reiatsu being released in Bleach, power ups in DBZ, etc.

[Hotaru]

1.2 denied then.

[Naitome]

Lolwut.


2/2.