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Grace of The Yggdrasil: Limb
Rank: C
Type: Passive
Range: ---
Handseals: ---
Chakra: ---
Special: allows the user to spread the Grace of the Yggdrasil to their tail as well.
Description: as the tail is also part of their body the Kaguya can use the Grace of the Yggdrasil to amplify their tail in the same manner as their arms.
Domain: Kaguya, Bone Tail, Grace of the Yggdrasil: Roots



Clematis Dance: Twisted Lance
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: 3 Meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: High x2
Special: The spiral pattern makes the damage result from impalement from this form increases the damage to an A-ranks amount.
Description: The user molds the bones in their spinal column creating a drilling ridge along it's length which requires more strain then the normal Tessenka No Mai and as a result makes a larger strain on the users body from the Bloodlines disease. The spiral pattern makes the damage result from impalement from this form increases the damage
Domain: Kaguya, Tessenka No Mai: Tsuru (Dance of the Clematis: Vine) and "B" rank Shikotsumyako (Calcium Compression)

Bone Tail
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: 2 Meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: High
Special: 2 Meter long and 2 feet thick tail. can re train to add an additional 1 meter to the tail. 2 retrains max.
Description: Utilizing the user's kekkei genkai they draw on the remnants of their tail bone and rapidly accelerate it's growth to burst from the skin in a massive tail. Due to the new limb the user will slump forward to level out their center of gravity and while the user is running linear for 3 seconds their extra mass will cause the user to double their movement speed. This posture will also create more momentum increasing their speed and the tail itself is capable of moving as quick as the user's arms to defend or attack. also able to grow spikes from the tail during Larch Dance.
Domain: Kaguya, "B" rank Shikotsumyako (Calcium Compression)

Ibara no Mai (Dance of the Briars)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: 10-30 meters
Handseals: no
Chakra: Massive
Special: Creates multitudes of bones enhanced with 6-inch sharp thorns that stack "C" rank damage with every landed hit. range of the bone blades are half the range of the user's Sawaribi no Mai range.
Description: Through the use of multiple styles of the Kaguya secret techniques one ultimate dance was born to those of the bones, the Ibara no Mai. First after growing their bone tail they will barrel forward at their target at high speed and once within 5 meters of their target they will spin in a wide arc sweeping their tail and arms while growing the bones of the Larch from along their body in a more deadly ballet slicing through multiple layers of defenses and flesh. Once the momentum from the charging sweep is gone they will slam their bones into the ground to perform the Bracken Dance making a vast forest of bone appear around them. Though this in itself would simply seem like a deadly combo what makes it a true Dance is the great amount of thorn like spikes littering every inch of bone produced during this dance including the tail.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'S' ranked Calcium Compression, Sawaribi no Mai, Karamatsu no mai, Bone Tail.

Sawaribi Domu (Bracken Dome)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: See special
Handseals: yes
Chakra: Massive
Special: Dome is as wide and half as tall as the user's Sawaribi no Mai range. Can only be used one per thread, and once the Kaguya leaves the thread in which they used this on, they must RP out a 'calcium restoration RP' which involves the clan member restoring their depleted calcium levels through whatever creative means necessary. The length of this RP must equal the amount of posts used by the clan member in the battle where the bone forest was used.
Description: Expanding on the aspect of the user's Sawaribi no Mai they use it to create a giant dome around the user allowing rays of light to pierce through lighting the final sight of a select few who have incurred the wrath of a Kaguya. The user will rapidly create a ring of bone trees then start growing layer upon layer over each other until the final product of a dome is complete. The user can move within this dome the same way they could move through their own forest instantly appearing out of any of the domes multiple surfaces to attack the enemies blindspots.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'S' ranked Calcium Compression, Sawaribi no Mai.

[Sharkk]

So let me get this straight, the Bone Tail is so heavy that it makes the owner slouch forward? But, in doing so they become faster and the tail is able to move fast as well? Seems a bit contradictory don't it? And if you plan on having the tail move I doubt that would be possible, as it's just bone without any other tissue.

[Forsaken]

badly worded. fixed

[Not Masakuni]

[1.] Twisted Lance - I'm not going to allow a B-rank technique that does A-rank damage for a C-rank amount of chakra. That's highly unbalanced. Scale back damage and increase consumption, please.

[2.] Bone Tail - A single C rank that increases speed to the level of the First Gate, without any of the drawbacks? Again, I find this to be unbalanced.

[Forsaken]

ranked up both

[Mad-Rock]

I still don't see how adding such a huge tail is going to increase speed, at all.

[Forsaken]

momentum, staff only please

[Not Masakuni]

The speed increase only comes after three seconds of motion, so it makes sense in the context of momentum. That's kind of unique, actually, I like it.

[1|3]

[Exar Kun]

Specify within the tail-bone jutsu's affect that it only increases movement speed (basicallly, just put "movement" in front of speed), and you get my 2/3.

[Forsaken]

fixed it so just need one more 1/3 ^^

[vegapunk]

3/3