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[That Guy]

PERSONOLOGY[/U]

• Name: Nakashima Amon
  
• Age: 27
  
• Nakashima Clan
  
• Tetsu no Kuni
  
• Profession: Non-Ninja
  
• Difficulty: Normal
  
• Releases/Senses: Ototon
  
• TYPES:
  Taijutsu (Primary)
  Genjutsu (Secondary)
  Ninjutsu (Tertiary)
  

PHYSICALITY[/U]

• HEIGHT: 5’11”
  
• WEIGHT: 170 lbs
  
• APPAREL:
  
  
  
• BODY APPEARANCE: Refer to above picture please.
  
• BLEMISHES & SCARS: None
  

COGNITION[/U]

• PERSONALITY:
  Serious
  
  Intrapersonal (A strong understanding of himself and his ideals. Keeping most of his true thoughts and feelings to himself.)
  
  Hardworking (When a task must be done, it has to be done right. There is no reason to get lazy when it comes to working in any manner.)
  
  Stubborn (When a task is accepted that proves a greater challenge than seems possible that will not dissuade him. FUCK IT WE’LL DO IT HIGH!)
  
  Uncaring (Aware of the struggles of man in today’s world, he will still not stand beside those less fortunate and offer a lending hand where he can.)
  
  Tit for Tat (Tends to treat the world around him as it treats him. People who act friendly get his version of friendly. Aggression is in turn returned with aggression.
  
  
• ALIGNMENT: Chaotic Good
  
• ALLEGIANCE: Tetsu no Kuni
  
• QUIRKS & TENDENCIES:
  Addictive Tendencies. Most things he will try that he finds pleasurable he will soon find himself driven to attain. Of course lesser addictions can be cast aside or even replaced by the new “best thing.”
  
• LIKES & DISLIKES:
  
  Likes: Spliffs, coffee, lemonade, sleeping in, and being left the fuck alone.
  
  Dislikes: Moochers, Naggers, Hangovers, Vegetables.
  
  
  

ARMAMENTS[/U]

• PRIMARY WEAPONS:
  Katana
  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Melee
  Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
  Cost: 1,000 Ryo
  
• SECONDARY WEAPONS:
  
  X1
  Makibishi (Ground Spikes)
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 20 per Pack.
  Description: Makibishi are small, sharp objects that are mainly used to inhibit someone from walking in a certain direction or area, since they would injure the ninja's feet if they tried to walk over them. Although ineffective when used individually, they can severely cripple a whole enemy unit with appropriate use.
  Cost: 200 Ryo per Pack
  
  X3
  Kunai (Throwing Knife)
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
  Special: 2 per Pack.
  Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
  Cost: 100 Ryo per Pack
  
  X1
  Ninja Wire Strings
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 20 ft. of wire per pack.
  Description: Wire Strings can be used for rappelling, manipulating weapons, or to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent, sometimes even being able to slice through items when generating enough force to do so. They are a useful tool for a shinobi.
  Cost: 200 Ryo per pack
  
• ITEMS:
  
  Tracker
  Rank: C
  Type: Accessory / Self
  Special: Has a range up to 1000 yards.
  Description: Similar to the communication's device in ease and effectiveness, the range finder can function both as binoculars and as a means to measure the distance to a target. snug and sleek, it fits across only one eye, and has a see-through lens that establishes visual information. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
  Cost: 3,000 Ryo per Tracker
  
• JUTSU: None
  

[Estilo]

Things you're missing out on.

Secondary Weapons - 5 packs that are 'C' rank and lower
Items - 1 'C' rank or lower accessory

Things you need to state.

Your free release.
Types: Primary, Secondary and Tertiary.

I'll hazard a guess and say that you want your 1000 EXP thrown into your sidebar, so that you can recreate later and put most of it into a BL or Clan. If not, then I'd suggest choosing your techniques now.

D;

[That Guy]

Thanks for the heads up, just revised and filled in the things I was missing out on. Also, yes your guess would be correct. I was kind of hoping to working this character into being a samurai later down so I was hoping to learn as little as possible until I could get more styles in the samurai category.

Also changed the appearance because I looked down a few posts and someone else is already trying to use the other one. My mistake.

[Estilo]

Alrighty theen.

1/2!

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[That Guy]

KENJUTSU
1000 exp



Stamina Reduction I

Battojutsu (Art of the Drawing Sword)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S [325]
Type: Defensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Special: Allows the swordsman to deflect basic attacks of equal or lower rank, in conjunction with other, more advanced moves within the style.
Description: An offensive nature of fighting, all Battojutsu practitioners will tend to stand in looser patterns, letting their steel fly and attack at often irregular angles. Unlike its defensive counterpart, this form allows for quicker, more deliberate strikes, making it deadly in the hands of a true master.
Domain: Kenjutsu

Mae Zuki (Front Thrust)
Rank: D-D [50]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Low
Special: Each time retrained, 'D' ranked damage is stacked.
Description: Commencing from a standing position, the practitioner draws and thrusts a frontal attacker and then quickly sheathes his blade. As he invests more time and practice into the art of offensive sheathing, his overall offensive rating shall increase, although at the cost of greater stamina.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'D'.

Ushiro Zuki (Rear Thrust)
Rank: D [25]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Low
Special: Each time retrained, 'D' ranked damage is stacked.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner quickly turns and draws to thrust the rear as a simple attack then sheathes. As long as the user is aware of the target behind them, a quick unexpected offensive strike like this usually yields success.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'D'

Morote Giri (Two Handed Cut)
Rank: B [100]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Can be retrained in order to stack damage per strike.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner rises, gathers their strength for one moment, and then strikes with their sword in both hands, performing a single strong attack that is capable of breaking through defenses and delivering massive damage.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'B'.

Sandangamaegiri (Triple Cut)
Rank: B [100]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Damage is calculated per strike. Can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner rises and draws to make three fast strikes at one opponent. The movement is flashy and hard to trace, leaving unguarded opponents in trouble.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'B'.

Nibaigiri (Double Cut)
Rank: C-C [100]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Damage is calculated per strike. Can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner rises and draws, making a rising strike on the draw and a dropping strike as he sheathes. The movement is flashy and hard to trace, leaving unguarded opponent's in trouble.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'C'.

Sanjuu Kenippen (Triple Blade Slice)
Rank: A [150]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Very High
Special: Can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Commencing from a kneeling position, the practitioner lunges toward a group of opponents, focusing his mind and skill on striking those before him. The user then draws, slashing from one side to the other, and spinning instantly through again for another cut, then a third and final spin to finish the opponents off. The strikes are quick enough to believe one sees three blades slashing, not one.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'A'.

Hitoshirezu (Ethereal Slash)
Rank: A [150]
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kenjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Cut travels 10 meters at thrice the speed of a kunai, plus 10 more each time retrained for a maximum of 30 meters.
Description: The ultimate offensive measure. Once the Kenjutsu master has learned the Art of the Sword and about wielding such sharp steel, they become the cut itself. The level of sharpness they have achieved is so great that the very air can be sliced before them until their target is reached. As such, from a relaxed position, the swordsman may flash-draw their blade, cut the air, and sheathe it. The result? A barely visible razor sharp force lunged at whatever the swordsman aimed at, with the full strength of their blade behind it.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battojutsu 'A'.

HACHIMON TONKOU
1000 exp

[1] Kaimon (Gate of Opening)
Rank: C-C-C-C-C-C-C [350]
Type: Supplementary / Nintaijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Mid [per turn]
Handseals: No
Special: See subjutsu. Lasts for one turn, plus one more each time retrained. Intense flow of chakra is able to disrupt regular Genjutsu 'D' ranked and lower. Once activated, the user moves at twice (6 mps) their normal speed, to the point a normal eye will have a harder time focusing on the user, seeing the figure slightly blurry but still themselves, and a Sharingan Stage 2 would be the only one to truly see with clarity. Upon deactivation, fatigue settles and lasts as long as Gate was active, yields strain, but does not restrict the user's level of Taijutsu.
Description: The first stage of the Eight Gates, the Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon) is located in the brain, and upon activation, releases the brain's restraints, allowing full power usage of the body's muscles. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use extremely strong techniques, such as the Iron Fist's Frontal Lotus.
Domain: Hachimon.

Strength
Rank: C-C-C-C-C-C-C [350]
Type: Passive / Nintaijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Represents strength boost received from Kaimon. Once activated, all Taijutsu, basic or advanced, shall have 'C' ranked damage stacked on at all times, equal to the amount of times retrained.




[2] Kyuumon (Gate of Rest)
Rank: B-B [200]
Type: Supplementary / Nintaijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: High [per turn]
Handseals: No
Special: See subjutsu. All effects of previous gates are passively carried over. Lasts for one turn, plus one more each time retrained. Intense flow of chakra is able to disrupt advanced Genjutsu 'C' ranked and lower. Once activated, the user moves at thrice (9 mps) their normal speed, to the point a normal eye can barely keep up with the user, seeing blurs and streaks, and a Sharingan Stage 3 is the only eye that can truly see the user clearly. Upon deactivation, fatigue settles and lasts as long as Gate was active, yields moderate strain, and restricts user to Taijutsu 'S' ranked and under for the remainder of the fatigue.
Description: Located within the brain, the second stage of the Eight Gates, the Gate of Rest, raises stamina and assists in recovery after being weakened. By further boosting one's inner strength, they subsequently re energize their body.
Domain: Hachimon. Must be able to sustain 'Kaimon' for at least 7 turns.

Endurance
Rank: C-C [100]
Type: Passive / Nintaijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Represents defensive endurance boost received from Kaimon. Once activated, the user shall have a defense to 'C' ranked Taijutsu damage stacked on at all times, equal to the amount of times retrained.