Forsaken Redux

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Battle Theme

• Name: Rave
  
• Age: 20
  
• Bloodline Limit: Kaguya
  
• Country/Village: Wind/ Sand
  
• Rank & Profession: Gennin
  
• Difficulty Setting: Hard
  
• Releases/Senses:
  
  • Lightning Release

Types

• PRIMARY! Ninjutsu
  
• SECONDARY! Taijutsu

PHYSICALITY[/u]

• Height: 5'6"
  
• Weight: 145lbs
  
• Physical
  :Kaguya: Rave's appearance attribute's to his heritage as a Kaguya though not all of it. His skin is rough, pale as a white egg, and as fair as white silk. The locks of pale silver hair flowing from his scalp, though gorgeous and glamorous, are very typical within the clan. While some would have some coloration to their features much of Rave's features remain pale to the point he looks like a ghost. His figure is fit and lithe moving swiftly and deftly despite gaining the appearance of a full grown male, a lithe figure with slim extremities.
  
  :Other: Through his hermit-ism, much of his clothing is frayed and tattered like the edge of his black shirt. He wears a set of black leather jeans held up by a belt, with similar symbols and patterns working up the thighs and around his hips as they come down to a pair of black shoes, durable, made for long hunts.
  
  :Misc.: Among other styles and accessories, he also wears a tattered black leather cloak that covers his head and shadows his face while it extends down his back to end at the back of his knees, the cloak's hem is also designed with black trim and silver symbols. The last of his unique visage is a finely made leather quiver held across his back and chest with a belt of the same fine leather. The last strange feature to Rave are his crimson Iris' making his eyes look like a deep pools of blood.
  

PAST...

COGNITION[/u]

• Personality:
  
  • :Protective: Rave typically keeps to himself and those close to him, he's a little shy but overall he's a good friend and a trustworthy person. Rave does what he chooses to despite what others think or say. He doesn't reach out to many people and if someone he doesn't know says something to offend him or him friends he'll become very angry and hold a long grudge. One hatred he will always hold is against the Kirigakure who killed his cousin>
    
    :Reserved: Rave usually is very cold and distant if his past is brought up. His calm revere stems from his hours of hunting and discipline that was brought onto him from his rough training. While Rave sometimes might seem to hate being the center of the spotlight, that assumption is only half true. He believes that certain circumstances need different tools to achieve the objective. He will gladly stand up or step down to do what is needed to be done and done right. No matter which side of an argument is friendly to him he will back up the correct side of it without any disregard for friend or foe.
    
    :Battle: In the heat of battle Rave is usually calm and collected until things get out of hand or until he gets hurt. At that point his battle style becomes much more erratic and destructive in his movements and attacks. while working in a group Rave will tend to try to follow someones lead and boost their abilities as much as he can. If Rave was to be ambushed he would react violently lashing out defensibly while trying to get away from his attackers. When Rave hurt or his fuse finally goes off his demeanor changes instantly and drastically turning into an evil killer. Hardly able to comprehend friend and foe, finding personal pleasure in nothing more than carnage, destruction and blood.
  
  
  
  
• Alignment: Nuetral Evil
  
  
• Allegiance:
  
  • Rave will not easily pledge to anyone until they have shown him they can be trusted.
  
  
  
• Quirks & Tendencies:
  
• Likes & Dislikes:
  
  • likes
    Honesty
    blood
    animals
    friends
    hearing something out of the blue
    
    
  • Dislikes
    groups of people
    losing
    fake people
    direct sunlight
    

ARMAMENTS[/u]

• Claws
  Light Bow
  
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  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Melee
  Description: Claws are simple bladed sets intertwined at the user's hand, where a small glove-like apparatus holds them together above the back of the user's hand. Excellent for close quarter combat, where short and quick strikes are needed.
  Cost: 5,000 Ryo
  
  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Range (50 meters)
  Description: The Light Bow is a small bow that is easy to carry and normally made out of wood. The Light Bow has a standard range of 50 meters; however, this can be improved upon by incredible use of strength or stamina. It requires Arrows to be spent in order to be used.
  Cost: 1,000 Ryo
  
  
  
• Secondary
  x15 arrows
  x6 Pressureburst Arrows
  x6 Napalm Arrows
  x6 Light Arrows
  x14 explosive tags
  
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  Pressureburst Arrow
  Rank: C-Rank
  Type: Ranged / Area of Affect
  Range: 4 meter radius
  Special: 2 per pack
  Description: Pressureburst arrows end in an arrowhead that is filled with water kept under pressure. When this glass arrowhead shatters, the water is released with violent force. The water instantly sprays out in a 4 meter radius, hitting any object in the vicinity with D-rank damage and enough kinetic force to knock down a standing adult.
  Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack
  
  
  Napalm Arrow
  Rank: C-Rank
  Type: Ranged / Area of Affect
  Range: 4 meter radius
  Special: 2 per pack
  Description: Napalm arrows are designed specifically for area-denial and large area of affect damage. Each arrow ends in a small, aerodynamically shaped glass container that contains sticky napalm jelly. When a napalm arrow is fired and the glass container hits a target, it shatters, creating a spark that instantly ignites the napalm jelly into a roaring fire. Once ignited, this jelly burns for 15 seconds (3 turns), doing a D-rank of fire damage to anything within the radius for each turn. After 15 seconds, the napalm is completely burnt up and only a smoldering black mark on the ground is left. Napalm by its characteristics is water-proof.
  Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack
  
  
  Light Arrow
  Rank: C-Rank
  Type: Ranged / Area of Affect
  Range: 5 meter radius
  Special: 2 per pack
  Description: When these non-lethal arrows hit a target they burst into a bright flash of pure light, blinding all victims within its radius for one turn. Blindness can be averted by looking away or covering your eyes before before the arrowhead explodes. Flash will still blind victims through closed eyelids.
  Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack
  
  Arrow
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
  Special: 10 Arrows / Pack
  Description: Arrows can come in multiple shapes and sizes, depending upon the user's choice. The average length of an arrow from tip to fletching is 27".
  Cost: 500 Ryo / Pack
  Cost: 1000 Ryu a pack (200 each)
  
  Exploding Note
  Rank: D
  Type: Tool / Area of Effect
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Special: 10 per pack
  Description: The exploding note is a piece of parchment paper infused with special chakra, layered over with a special script on it that serves to enable and facilitate its explosive properties. Its execution is simple - the ninja can attach the note to another object such as a kunai or log, and upon activation, the note is set and begins either a slow countdown burn, which eventually results in a large explosion, or the explosion in itself upon command.
  Cost: 500 per Pack
  
  
  
• Accessories: C rank Blank Scroll x3

EXP COUNTER

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Axel
2000 from Clan and Char Transfer
1000 from 1000 member milestone
336
69
250
161
28
134 May is for Missions 67*2
[quad 1, quad 2, and quad 4] 84

Previous Character: Axel Inuzuka
Death Thread: here
Total EXP: 2408
EXP Used: 2375/2408
EXP Lost: 0
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JUTSU 4075

Summoning (200)

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique) (50)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Space-Time Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Mid
Special: Requires the appropriate Path in order to complete the summoning - look below! Keep in mind chakra costs will always combine between Kuchiyose as base and whatever specialty as an add-on.
Description: A powerful jutsu intended to call forth aid when in dire need, Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon a a variety of entities and items meant to assist them in a dire situation. From people, animals and even special Animal Familiars, to inanimate objects such as weapons and items, these creations come forth out of thin air near-instantly after the seals are done and into the battlefield. Keep in mind each summoning in question requires a previous contract to be filled out. Finally, signing this contract also allows said summoning to be able to reverse summon the human ninja to their own location.
Domain: Kuchiyose - Universal Ninjutsu.

Kuchiyose - Kishin Kami (Summoning Path - Animal Familiars) (75)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Space-Time Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: --
Chakra: Very Low - Very High
Special: Can only summon Animal Families that have agreed to being summoned by the PC via a written contract. See Summoning for more info!. One family contract per PC.
Description: This version of Kuchiyose allows the summoner to effectively call upon the famed Animal Familiars that can truly change the tide of battle for the user!
Domain: Kuchiyose no Jutsu.

Kuchiyose - Gorotsuku (Summoning - People) (75)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S,
Type: Supplementary / Space-Time Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: --
Chakra: Very Low - Very High
Special: Can only summon PC characters that have agreed to being summoned via a written contract (must be RP'd out). Summoned people are sent back only when either the summoner dies, or the thread ends; upon exiting, they are instantly sent back to their last location. Highest rank known determines the strength of the body the user can summon; same rules apply for corpses. In terms of corpses, like items, the contract is written on their bodies.

D: 0 - 999 EXP
C: 1,000 - 4,999 EXP
B: 5,000 - 9,999 EXP
A: 10,000 - 19,999 EXP
S: 20,000 - 25,000+ EXP

Description: This version of Kuchiyose allows the summoner to effectively call upon living, breathing humans from either a scroll or by seals, after the appropriate contract has been made. This also works on corpses, which have been enveloped in a small contract so that they too may be summoned from anywhere.
Domain: Kuchiyose no Jutsu.

Kaguya (1000)

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Shikotsumyako (Calcium Compression) (625)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Very Low - Very High
Special: Strength of ALL bone creations depend on highest rank known. Highest rank also determines the level of defense the Kaguya can create under their skin in the form of thin, compressed bone for the sake of defense. Damage reduction, while measured in the form a number, ultimately depends on the RP. Keep in mind the defense bonus only applies to attacks equal or lower to the highest rank known in this technique, and applies to single rank creations; stacked bonus damage attacks can bypass the bone with enough damage. Finally, because the bone within can be so strong, all non-weapon, hand to hand Taijutsu will receive a passive blunt damage bonus equal to the highest rank known in this technique. However, when this effect is applied, the user will ultimately lose speed.

D: 15% damage reduction // 50% speed reduction
C: 30% dr // 40% loss
B: 45% dr // 30% loss
A: 60% dr // 20% loss
S: 75% dr // 10% loss


Description: A Kaguya's most basic and innate skill, it allows them to alter the calcium composition of their entire bone structure to whatever density they see fit. Whether they harden a whole section of bone or just one individual piece doesn't matter; if the Kaguya wills it, one normal bone can become as tough as iron. This is the basis behind their bloodline skill and all their jutsu, and as they progress in skill and power, their bones become harder and stronger.
Domain: Kaguya.

Yanagi no Mai (Dance of the Willows) (100)
Rank: C x2
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Arm's reach.
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: Due to fluidity of the dance, the user can strike many times at once. After initially learned, any more retraining will stack a simultaneous attack per stave - that is, if one learns this three times, they strike three times at once. However, after every fourth retraining, the consumption of this technique goes up by one.
Description: The first of the five Kaguya dances. Using the abilities of their bloodline, the user will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of each hand to form a stabbing instrument. These staves extend up to great lengths, and are razor sharp. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then proceed to impale their opponents.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.

Karamatsu no Mai (Dance of the Larch) (175)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Very Low - Very High [initial + upkeep]
Special: Effectively shoots out bone spikes from the user's body near-instantly to defend them from incoming danger, or even to attack an opponent that simply got too close to the clan member. Spikes extend as far as one (1) meter away from the user's body. Dispersion of the bones is near-instant. Additionally, while using this, the defensive effects of 'Calcium Compression' are forfeit. Highest rank known determines the amount of the user's body the spikes will cover, as well as the level of damage they can produce. Spikes cannot protrude from sensitive areas like one's face, or head over-all.


D: 15% body coverage
C: 30%
B: 45%
A: 60%
S: 75% (3/4th's of the user's body surface!)


Description: Karamatsu no Mai is the third of five dance forms. After activating their special chakra that allows them free-flowing bone manipulation, the Kaguya will begin to extend multiple bones from their body, protruding almost instantly from their flesh and out his rib cage, radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow the Kaguya to move with little effort to impale their opponents. A horrific creation indeed.
Domain: Kaguya. Calcium Compression

Kyoki Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Weeping Willow] (50)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See Special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: The bones grows approximately 10 feet outward from the user, plus an addition 2 feet everytime this technique is re-trained.
Description: Kyoki Yanagi no Mai is named after the Weeping Willow, a tree that has long limp branches, thus it got the name of 'weeping'. Utilizing the ability of the Shikotsumyaku, the user channels their chakra and is able to grow bones from their forearms, palms or fingers. These bones have little calcium in them, but the strength lies in the amount that is created and that they are shaped and armed with extremely sharp barbs. The bones are utilized as coiled whips by the Kaguya clansmen, taking enemies out from a distance, immobilizing them with an array of thin whips from the forearm, palms and fingers which interconnect when around the target. The barbs make the immobilization more effective as they dig into the targets body. Once released, if it's still connected to the Kaguya, they are able to control the whips movements, as it is flexible like elastic. But, if the user wishes, they are able to disconnect the 'threads' from their body in an instant.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.

Hikage no Mai (Dance of the Club Moss) (50)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See Special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: The bones grows approximately 5 inches outward from the users arm, plus another 5 inches everytime this technique is re-trained. Highest rank of 'Calcium Compression' determines the level of penetration into the flesh and muscle of the target.
Description: Hikage no Mai is named after the Club Moss, which has a unique style of lateral growth. Using the ability of the Shikotsumyaku the user will channel chakra into their bones to grow several jagged leaf-like entities from the top of their arm down to their wrist that creep out from the arm, forming several small branch structures similar to how antlers grow. However, while this technique appears at base level to be a simple bone technique capable of coating the user's arm in jagged like antler shapes, the true strength behind these outstretched bones are the scale-like leaves that are only visible when viewed up close. The scale-like formation of bones make it so that these bones not only have the ability to pierce the target, but also grind away at their flesh and muscles, vastly making this technique more effective, especially when used with the speed and grace of the Kaguya clansmen. The user needs not to pierce his opponent, but rather simply brush against the target in order to cut away at them.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.




Multi-Strike I, II, III, IV & V

Multiple Striking allows the user to perform two or more Taijutsu from one's mastery at the same time, essentially leaving your targets with twice the trouble to deal with! When first learned, two Mastery jutsu may be used at once. Each time re-acquired, one more jutsu is added the consecutive fire. Keep in mind that performing Taijutsu simultaneously does not reduce Stamina costs in any way!.

Hosatsu (800)

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Kihakuya (Spirit Arrow) (325)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Nintaijutsu / Offensive / Hosatsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Increases the potency of a fired arrow by an amount equal to rank of the technique.
Description: Not only are the users of Hosatsu talented Taijutsu artists, but followers of the style are able to imbue their arrows with their own chakra. The arrows, filled with the user's chakra, become both more powerful and more stable, increasing the piercing power of arrows fired. The major downside to this effect is the double drain of the shot, using up both Stamina and Chakra. Sometimes the reward is worth the risk, though. Beyond that, users of Kihakuya have the ability to further enhance their arrows, but at the additional cost of chakra.
Domain: Hosatsu

Nousatsu (Enchant) (Lightning 325)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Nintaijutsu / Offensive
Range: 5 meters, +5 meters for each rank
Chakra: Low - Very High
Special: Imbues an arrow with an elemental property that the user has the ability to manipulate. Must be relearned for every Element the caster may use.
Description: It is clear to those who have been in combat that there are certain elements that have a natural weakness to others. This shot attempts to make use of that information. By channeling elemental chakra through an arrow, the weapon takes on the elemental property of the element. Upon impact, that elemental chakra is released in a blast that covers the distance denoted in the ranged effect. For example, an arrow filled with 'B' Rank Fire chakra will, upon impact, release a burst of fire from the impact zone to a diameter of the said range.
Domain: Hosatsu, must have Kihakuya of the same Rank

Fukutama (Multi Shot) (150)
Rank: C x3
Type: Taijutsu / Supplementary
Range: ---
Stamina: Low per extra arrow
Special: Allows the user the ability to fire one extra arrow for each time this technique is trained to a maximum of 5 at a time.
Description: One of the more interesting techniques developed for use by Hosatsu warriors, this technique allows the user to knock and fire one additional arrow for each time the technique has been learned. They may be lined up side to side to increase the penetrating power of a single arrow, or spread out across the bow in order to create a 'spray' of arrows that shoots outwards. It should be noted that each arrow requires specific enhancement, meaning that overusing this technique will rapidly drain one's Stamina.
Domain: Hosatsu

Kyuudou (525)

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The Way of The Watcher (175 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Passive / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: --
Stamina: --
Special: One must know this tech to learn any tech of equivalent rank in it’s tree. Highest rank known determines the distance in which they can fire arrows, as well as the speed at which they move, while standing still. Keep in mind this type of technique requires the user to be still while shooting, which in turn rewards them with increased accuracy, coming forth in the form of faster arrow speed. Does not work on automatic or modern bows, that do not require the archer to pull and hold before each shot, as these fire the same regardless of the user's skill or speed.

D: 20 meter range // 4 meter per second arrow speed
C: 40 m // 8mps as
B: 60 m // 12mps as
A: 80 m // 16mps as
S: 100 m // 20mps as


Description: One of the three distinct styles of the bow is known as 'The Watcher'. Employing patience, careful positioning and a steady, strong hand, the user is capable of launching a missle of death over a vast distance at swift speeds.
Domain: Kyuudou (Archery).

The Way of The Trickster (175 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Passive / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: Self
Stamina: --
Special: One must know this tech to learn any tech of equivalent rank in it’s tree. Highest rank known determines the distance in which they can fire arrows, as well as the speed at which they move, when shot while walking. Does not work on automatic or modern bows, that do not require the archer to pull and hold before each shot, as these fire the same regardless of the user's skill or speed.

D: 10 meter range // 2 meter per second arrow speed
C: 20 m // 4mps as
B: 30 m // 6mps as
A: 40 m // 8mps as
S: 50 m // 10mps as


Description: The unexpected branch of Kyuudou, the tricky and misleading way of the Trickster. Allowing the user to fire multiple shots at one time, ricochet attacks and even curve arrows. It's unconventional flair is it's greatest strength.
Domain: Diving Eagle

Multi-Shot (175 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: See Special!
Stamina: Very Low - Very High
Special: This modifying technique allows the user to fire more than one arrow at the same time per shot. Their ability to quickly knock and fire arrows is directly dependant on the users rank in “The Way of The Trickster”. Highest rank known establishes the amount of arrows the archer can fire at the same time.

D: 2 per shot
C: 3
B: 4
A: 5
S: 6
Description: The technique is one of the hallmarks of the Trickster style, firing more arrows than a normal person would believe is possible. It's been said that with proper mastery of the technique, the user can fire up to six at a time with all the ability they fire a normal one.
Domain: Kyuudou (Archery). The Way of The Trickster.

Raiton (1550)

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Chakra Booster I, II, III, IV, & V

With the Chakra Booster mastery, all chakra-based techniques will be able to deal either additional damage or yield additional defense - equivalent to one rank above normal each time acquired, to be exact! Keep in mind this only affects the base rank of the technique, and not any retraining that goes along with it.

Karai Shin (Lightning Wrath's Reach) (625)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Handseals: No
Chakra: Mid
Special: Allows the user the ability to create, control and move Raiton (Thunder) chakra of their own for multiple purposes, as well as control that produced by nature. Highest rank known determines the strength of the thunder, the distance at which one can control it, and finally, the speed at which the user can displace it.

D: 10 meter range / 3 meter per second
C: 20 ms / 6 mps
B: 30 ms / 9 mps
A: 40 ms / 12 mps
S: 50 ms / 15 mps


Description: Though powerful, Raiton can become uncontrollable even in the hands of the experienced, forcing its users to focus first on controlling their power in small areas, and then, over time, expanding. As one's experience with thunder and its control grows, so does the range at which they can become deadly with it.
Domain: Raiton.

Danpen Inazuma (Shooting Thunder) (175)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Handseals: No
Chakra: Very Low - Very High
Special: Highest rank known determines range of bolt, as well as the level (rank) and speed at which it is shot out.


D: 1/5th (20%) Karai Shin range + speed
C: 2/5th's (40%) KS range
B: 3/5th's (60%) KS range
A: 4/5th's (80%) KS range
S: Full KS range


Description: Meant more as a reactionary technique than a main avenue of offense, this jutsu allows the user to essentially shoot out small lightning bolts from a free hand to anyone within a small range. This requires no seals to conjure, and can be shot out from one’s appendage during the most heated of combat. The damage is light and the bolts shoot off in a relatively straight line, at rapid speeds.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin.


Ichiren Inazuma (Chain of Lightning) (200)
Rank: B x2
Type: Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: No
Chakra: High
Special: Range of chain depends on the user's 'Shooting Thunder' range. By default, you can strike up to one opponent with this, plus one more each time retrained. However, after every third retraining, the consumption will go up by one. Once struck, victim’s will be paralyzed and stuck in the chain until the user stops using it. User must keep outstretched arm and be still as they feed the chain raiton chakra.
Description: An advanced version of ‘Shooting Thunder’, the Chain of Lightning allows the user to pass strong currents of lightning from victim to victim within a thirty meter radius. The user outstretches their hands, so that the energy focusing within is displaced rapidly towards their target. Once they are hit, the victims are paralyzed and helpless, and the bolt then proceeds to jump and hit anyone else within range. Excellent when outnumbered, though one must use it with care, for it takes a great toll on the user’s chakra pool.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin.

Purasubīkon (Plus Beacon) (75)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton
Range: Self
Handseals: No
Chakra: See special!
Special: Lasts for the entire thread, or until the user dies or leaves. When used in battle with a comrade who has activated the ´Mainasubīkon (Minus Beacon)´, all projectile-based, raiton ninjutsu will increase in damage by one tier. Only works with projectile-based, raiton ninjutsu equal to the highest rank known, at the cost of doubling its chakra consumption. This ability cannot be stacked.
Description: After forming a connection with their raiton element on a subconscious level, the user will now be able to unlock the hidden potential they have with electricity during battle. The potential of ´Plus´, or positive electrons, is most typically used in conjunction with its counterpart, to charge each other´s ability and create amplified versions of their raiton ninjutsu.
Domain: Raiton. Cannot learn ´Mainasubīkon (Minus Beacon)´

Fukusū Gekido Doragon (Raging Lightning Dragon) (400)
Rank: B x4
Type: Offensive / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: High, Mid upkeep
Special: Distance that the dragon(s) can travel depends on the user's highest 'Karai Shin' rank. When first learned, the user can summon one dragon, plus another dragon each time retrained, for a max of five dragons. Upon impact, each dragon causes a five meter explosion of electricity, the heated energy causing severe electrocution and forces paralysis into those affected for 1/2 the turn.
Description: Fukusū Gekido Doragon is truly a dangerous technique, allowing the user to create dragon-like creations that cause threatening effects. After the user completes the appropriate amount of hand seals, they will discharge a great amount of Raiton chakra from their body needed to form one or many dragons comprised entirely of pure Raiton energy. Each dragon is about 3 meters tall and 2 meters wide, and can pursue the target as long as the user maintains visual of the target. However, due to the concentration needed to guide the dragons, chakra molding and movement cannot be accomplished until the dragon disappear.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin 'B'.

Purazuma Booru (Plasma Ball Technique) (75)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Very Low - Very High
Special: Highest rank learned determines strength of lightning sphere.Though no handseals have to be held once the sphere is complete, no other jutsu may be cast while plasma is active. Can be held as long as the user's chakra reserves allow it. Highest rank known determines strength of sphere. Area of sphere is determine by the user's highest 'Karai Shin' range, halved.
Description: A highly strategic raiton jutsu, the Plasma Ball allows the user to create a thick sphere of Raiton around their body, able to shock anyone that comes in contact with it immediately.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin.

[adero]

Can't start w/ B ranked primary weapon.

(That and its not approved.)

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Gene said I could do it while its in customs and the ranked weapon doesnt matter since its not a starter bio

[adero]

narutorplay.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=charreg&action=display&thread=83

Primary Weapons - 1 'C' rank primary weapon

[Not Masakuni]

Adero is, in fact, correct. Recreation or not, Genin can only start with 'C' rank or higher items. Check out this to fix your packs / weapons / accessories. Your EXP checks out properly, though, so this is the only problem with the bio going through as I can see.

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fixed

[Not Masakuni]

I think everything is in order, now.

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[☆ F ☆]

You can't start with anything over 'C' rank as a Genin. This includes jutsu. I believe you have up to 'S' ranked 'Calcium Compression'. I didn't bother to check it all but I imagine there might be a few more?

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