Hijutsu Vol. 1

[The Lazy One]

Gōrudensuchīrubaria (Golden Steel Barrier)
Rank: A
Range: 5m - 10m
Type: Ninjutsu / Defensive
Handseals: 4
Chakra Consumption: High per Shield (Optional x2 High)

[addy-hime ♥]

Some issues:

[/b] have to require the user to know the parent technique.

2) If you are creating a solid item using this spray, then it will not float when you spit it out in the air -- it will fall to the ground. You might want to mention that in some way, if you understand what I'm saying. Unless the webbing is sprayed at a surface, spraying it into open air would make the laws of gravity apply to it.

3) Read the Customs Manual to see how defensive jutsu work in relation to what they can block, and then revise your Note.[/ul]
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[The Lazy One]

fixed up.

[addy-hime ♥]

There's no mention in this technique of what it can defend against, only that it can double its capabilities with chakra. You'll need to specify exactly what is capable of breaking it / what it is capable of defending against before I can determine if allowing its defense to double for High x2 would work.

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[addy-hime ♥]

If the technique is not modified within 48 hours, it will be archived.

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