kumogakure techniques

[BLKND]

Rariatto (Lightning Plough Hot Sword)
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid, High for chakra amplification

[/b] Chakra enhancement is completely up to the user's technique tree. Technique enhances user's speed by x3. It costs a Mid amount of chakra to perform the technique, however a High amount to perform it with the added chakra enhancement.

*A Kumogakure hidden village technique.[/ul][/size]

Daburu Rariatto (Double Lightning Plough Hot Sword)
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid x2

[/b] Circumstances of decapitation obviously depend on RP scenario. User must know Lightning Plough Hot Sword in order to learn this technique.

*A Kumogakure hidden village technique.[/ul][/size]

[addy-hime ♥]

Lightning Plough Hot Sword

• We no longer do multi-rank techniques. To fix this, simply differentiate between the two levels of the technique via chakra consumption. You already explain it quite well in the description, but also make a small note about the different levels of consumption in the 'Note.'
  
  
• I don't understand why you're equating certain techniques to this attack. Fuuton = Kaze no Yaiba? What does that have to do with a Taijutsu attack? Moreover, I'm not okay with combining this technique with "certain Kinjutsu," only elemental chakra (basic and advanced are fine).

Double Lightning Plough Hot Sword

• This is actually a Supplementary technique, since it's just an addition to the first one.
  
  
• Put a mention in the 'Note' that the user is required to know the base technique to learn or use this technique, please.

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[BLKND]

Modified.

[addy-hime ♥]

1/2.

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[Yox]

If you just want to edit it so that it's like: Rariatto (Lightning Plough Hot Sword) and Daburu Rariatto (Double Lightning Plough Hot Sword), as well as justifying the description so that it matches the 'standard' of the sites technique template.

Other than that, these are ready to go. 2/2 once you've just made this minor edit.

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[BLKND]

Modified.