Raiton no Houchou (Lightning Step)

[Chae]

Raiton no Houchou (Lightning step): Spark Step
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: High

[/b] applicable upon learning Raiton no Yoroi. While similar, unlike its offensive counterpart (Jigokuzuki), Raiton no Houchou focuses entirely on the speed boost provided by Raiton no Yoroi itself. Simply put, the general concept around the technique is based on using Raiton no yoroi's explosive speeds to shuffle their body in several directions to give off three different type of 'steps'

Note:

• Hibana no Bouchou (Spark Step)
  While stationary against either an incoming ninjutsu (non AOE) or taijutsu, the user can simply shuffle their body in a lateral fashion (left to right at 'close' range). As a result, their body seemingly splits into several parts (see image), causing the incoming attack to through the user. Only applicable when stationary.

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Raiton no Houchou (Lightning Steps): Lightning Step
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Defensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: x2 High

[/b] applicable upon learning Raiton no Yoroi. While similar, unlike its offensive counterpart (Jigokuzuki), Raiton no Houchou focuses entirely on the speed boost provided by Raiton no Yoroi itself. Simply put, the general concept around the technique is based on using Raiton no yoroi's explosive speeds to shuffle their body in several directions to give off three different type of 'steps'

Note:

• Raiton no Bouchou (Lightning step)
  While the concept is still similar to the spark step, the execution and functionality of the Lightning step are completely different. This second or middle stage of step's is considerably the most defensive against taijutsu & non AOE ninjutsu when in motion. Because of the concentration needed to perform this during movement requires a higher consumption in chakra.
  
  Nonetheless, when against an attack that the user can read & see coming towards them, they can merely activate this technique with an extra bit of chakra to boost their speeds a single level above Raiton no Yoroi's normal (x6) for the duration of the movement. In doing so, it leaves an afterimage of the user that, when struck, dissipates into fizzling lightning (see image), leaving the user to maneuver around the opponent (or attack) unseen since the afterimage serves as a 'distraction' for ones eyes.
  
  Additionally, with a stacked cost (x2 high + Raiton no yoroi activation), the user can use only this method as a means of activating Raiton no Yoroi to further surprise and blind side the enemy. When using this as an activation into Raiton no yoroi, the user does not gain x6 speeds but Raiton no Yoroi's base.

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Raiton no Houchou (Lightning Steps): Heavy Thunder Step
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Defensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: x3 High, High per turn

[/b] applicable upon learning Raiton no Yoroi. While similar, unlike its offensive counterpart (Jigokuzuki), Raiton no Houchou focuses entirely on the speed boost provided by Raiton no Yoroi itself. Simply put, the general concept around the technique is based on using Raiton no yoroi's explosive speeds to shuffle their body in several directions to give off three different type of 'steps'

Note:

• Banrai no Bouchou (Heavy Thunder Step)
  The last and final stage (or usage) within the quick step series, this merely allows the user -with their increased speeds- sprint around the opponent(s) while exerting Raiton chakra from their tenketsu to the point where it expels a considerable amount of electricity that deals extreme shock damage (equal to raiton no yoroi). As the user goes around and around, it creates 5m high wall of electricity with separate blurs of the user moving throughout the electricity at different angles (see image). User cannot perform any techniques outside of Raiton ninjutsu during the duration of the technique.
  

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[Exar Kun]

Kickass.

These need to be three separate techniques, imo. Multiple chakra costs are supposed to allow for basic enhancements to a single function, I.E. With a mid's worth of chakra, Bob can shoot a fireball with a 1x1 meter diameter; by using 2xmid Bob can shoot a 3x3 meter fireball, etc. The three abilities listed here are loosely connected in the sense that they are all about being covered in lightning chakra and moving really fast, but their functionality and purposes are completely different.

So, my advice would be to split these up into three separate techniques. To compensate for this, I wouldn't mind them all being A-Rank, since they're basically just supplementary of raiton no yoroi, which is already SS-Rank and forms the core of these techniques anyway.

I'll take another look once you've given them each their own separate profiles.

[Chae]

Edited. should be good to go separately.

[King]

Getting to this tomorrow (Sunday), I swear.

[King]

Having looked it over, this is generally flare. I don't have a problem with any of the techniques, as they are

1/2

[Nirvana]

2/2 whatever, my ninja.