Akuma iryūjon: Bodi keiren

[lei]

Akuma iryūjon: Bodi keiren
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: 0-10
Chakra: Mid
Special:
Affects targets within 10 meters of the user, plus one more each time retrained.
Description:
A technique, that when formed. Afflicts a target almost instantly, their body feels a sudden shock, and then begins to twitch uncontrollably. This can make their entire body begin to feel sluggish, or make it harder to fully control muscle movement.
Domain: Genjutsu;Touch

[chiatsuki]

Place in the description 'after the victim / opponent is touched' - otherwise this seems automatic and OP.

[KID GAMBINO.]

In addition to what sohyo said, I feel this needs to be upped in rank, to at least 'B'. Causing twitching and disruption of movement is too OP for a 'C' Rank. This technique also needs a range limitation or time duration, such as saying "once the target moves ___ meters away" or "technique lasts for _____ turns".

[chiatsuki]

My point in saying that its OP is because genjutsu is illusion. This is actually creating a physical disruption instead of a mental one.

[KID GAMBINO.]

You have until September 24th, 2011 to modify this, or it will be archived.

[KID GAMBINO.]

Archived.