Sansutsomu (Jutsu +Passive)

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Technique Name Ranton: Reizā Sākasu (Storm Release: Laser Circus)
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type:Ninjutsu
Range: See Special
Chakra: low to massive
Special: Strength and range of burst depends on the user's highest 'Storm Channeling' rank. With each new rank an additional two beams can be fired out D:2,C:4,B:6,A:8,S:10.
Description:
The user creates several bright beams and shoots them at the enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the user's hands as this technique is activated. The user is able to alter the beams direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy.
Domain: Sansutsomu


Technique Name One with the storm
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Passive
Range: None
Chakra: See special
Special: At Each rank, Raiton jutsu of a rank below it become ineffective against the user. (At D-rank= E-Rank unaffected)

Description: By living with the power of the storm for so many years, lightning is a part of their being and their own body, The Sansutsomu clan has become so accustomed to it that Raiton Jutsu become almost useless against them.

Domain: Sansutsomu

[chiatsuki]

First off - please delete the bolded [technique name] beside the actual name.

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• How do lasers have anything with storms? There was already a technique submitted in today with the exact same name and special. This has already been denied so please remove it.
  

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• Raiton is not the only release that sansutomu members have, you would have had to implement this into suiton and fuuton as well. This is going to be denied because techniques that grant immortality to a release permanently doesn't sit right with me - and im sure it wouldn't sit right with others as well.
  
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[KID GAMBINO.]

Agreed with sohyo on 'One with the Storm', don't see this working at all. Denied. 2/2

However, I'm going to have to disagree with sohyo, seeing as 'Storm Release: Laser Circus' is a canon technique, and Sansutsomu is based around Ranton entirely. With that said, I am going to say that this is completely acceptable, just needs to be cleaned up a bit. Here is a cleaned up version of the technique. If sohyo still disagrees with this being Sansutsomu-compatible, then you will have to find another staffer to make a final decision.

Reizā Sākasu [Laser Circus]
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Clan Kekkei Touta / Ranton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Can shoot up to two laser beams when first learned, plus two more for each new rank attained, for a max of ten beams. Strength and range of lasers depends on the user's highest 'Storm Channeling' rank.
Description: Using the legendary ability to merge several elements of the storm to create deadly techniques, the user forms the required handseals, then stretches out their hand as a halo of bright energy spreads from it. Then, several bright beams composed entirely of lightning-infested water travel like the wind, aiming to pierce the target. The user is able to alter the beams' direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down a single enemy.
Domain: Sansutsomu. Advanced Storm Channeling.

Once the modified version is swapped in, you have my 1/2.

[Estilo]

In my opinion, Laser Circus has no reason to be restricted to Sansutsomu just because people are too impatient for kekkei touta Ranton techniques outside of the bloodline to be released. In addition, I don't believe canon character Darui is a Sansutsomu either.

So, yeah. There's my 10 cents. I say we at least archive the technique until later, when we're actually accepting storm customs.

[chiatsuki]

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Agreed. Also - Ranton was never supposed to be the release for sansutomu. I don't believe Darui is sansutsomu either.

[KID GAMBINO.]

Alright, this will be archived until further notice.