Otoshinkirou Atogama (Sound Mirage Replacement)

[Izanagi]

Otoshinkirou Atogama (Sound Mirage Replacement)
Rank:C
Type: Genjutsu/ illusion of sight
Range: 0-10 meters
Chakra:Low-Mid
Special: This jutsu depends on Ototon-Inkaten Shinkirou no Jutsu, if the user doesn't have this jutsu, there is no affect. The jutsu only transports the user 10 meters using Shunshin no jutsu.
Description: The user creates a mirage to take his original place while the user is sent 10 meters away using Shunshin no Jutsu. After making a few hand seals the user creates a sound, be it with an instrument or otherwise, and creates an after image of the user as they speed away.
Domain: Ototon-Inkaten Shinkirou no Jutsu, Sound Dominion 'C' Rank, Illusion of Sight, Shunshin/Shunpo no jutsu

[chiatsuki]

I'm going to have to deny this. Simply put - replacing with inanimate objects is un-canon and unrealistic in my opinion.

[Izanagi]

Modified the domais sohyo and others please revote

[chiatsuki]

stop deleting your posts everywhere.. you're making things look messy.

since this requires a 10 meter dash put in the domain 'shunshin or shunpo no jutsu'

[Izanagi]

Sorry.. having troubles with my computer

[chiatsuki]

modified the technique to my liking.

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[KID GAMBINO.]

The jutsu only transports the user 10 meters, also if the user is deafened or disperces the genjutsu there is no effect.

^This line isn't necessary at all, seeing as anything that harms/disorientates the user will disperse the illusion.

Please state somewhere in the technique that this requires a Shunshin/Shunpo use.

Description is very vague, please expand on the process of the jutsu more. Does it use handseals? Are there specific requirements that need to be met before it can be completed? How long does the illusion last? etcetcetc.

Why does this need Ototon again?

[chiatsuki]

^
I assumed the illusion would come from sparking a sound, Laz. But you are correct in the description being vague.

[KID GAMBINO.]

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