Hisan Tori Yuki (Flying Snow Bird)

[Aiko Yukina]

Name: Hisan Tori Yuki (Flying Snow Bird)[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Clan Kekkei Touta / Hyouton Ninjutsu
Special: The bird can only remain in existence as long as Aiko maintains contact with it and continues feeding it chakra. The chakra consumptions increases slightly as rank increases as does the size of the bird.
Description: A special jutsu created by Aiko Yukina during experimentation. Focusing her Chakra and using a large water source, Aiko managed to form a large bird composed of ice and water. The bird is enfused with her own chakra, keeping it from melting. The bird resembles a gargantuan dove. It is large enough for Aiko to ride upon its back. With it's powerful wings, the bird can remain airborne for as long as it wishes, providing that Aiko continues sustaining it with chakra. When Aiko stops feeding it Chakra, the bird melts and disappears.
Domain: Yukina. Yuki no Kami 'C'. Aiko Yukina.

[☆ F ☆]

Rather than limit its range randomly to 80 meters, simply state that it can only exist as long as the user maintains contact with it. Makes more sense, especially over long term flight, though also mention that chakra consumption is per turn, based on the jutsu rank.

[Aiko Yukina]

I suppose that makes more sense. Fixed it.

[☆ F ☆]

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[DAVID BOWE]

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[Aiko Yukina]

Well technically, so long as chakra feeds into it, it can stay in existence/repair itself etc. But that would literally be like punching your chakra in the face so... after taking a few hits, a smart person would come down unless they were really trying to escape. For example, if someone used a C rank jutsu and destroyed the bird, Aiko could feed the amount of chakra it would take to remake it, and use that to keep it from being destroyed. But doing this repeatedly would very quickly drain chakra, you see what I mean?

Is it possible for this jutsu so be made into RP only? Can't be used in battle since it is mainly a plot device and not really for battle?

[DAVID BOWE]

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