Yamanaka Ninjutsu

[BLKND]

Please give feedback. Do not be afraid to be blunt. I'm still getting used to this system. I believe the first two jutsu to be passive, but I was told in the Cbox that they are Supplementary, so that is what I've posted them as.

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Secret Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Range of jutsu is dependent on the number of times the Shintenshin no Jutsu has been retrained. When first learned, Ōgon no Kusari can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: After performing the Shintenshin no Jutsu, the user is typically lost within an ephemeral plain, incapable of finding their ethereal body instantly. This jutsu fixes that. When performing the Shintenshin jutsu, the user will be capable of returning to their body instantly in case the technique either fails or misses, allowing them to prevent their bodies to be taken advantage of in case of a mishap.
Domain: Yamanaka

Gōruden Yajirushi(Golden Arrow)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Secret Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Range of jutsu is dependant on the number of times the Shintenshin no Jutsu has been retrained. When first learned, Gōruden Yajirushi can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Considering the speed of the Shintenshin no Jutsu, there is the constant exposure to failure that the Yamanaka faces with its every use. In order to prevent this, there is the possibility of increasing its speed so that it will have a better chance to at hit the enemy. This increases the speed of the Shintenshin jutsu to be as fast at the user's top speed when casting.
Domain: Yamanaka[/ul][/size]

[DAVID BOWE]

Golden Arrow -- you need to state how much this technique is increasing Shintenshin in speed. If it's just increasing it to where Shintenshin can move as fast as the users normal speed now, I don't have a problem with it. If you're making it far faster than the usual. Gonna have to say no.

Golden Men -- I can't see this one happening. I mean, I usually like helping with techniques so they're able to become acceptable but I just can't see the Yamanaka creating their own clan bunshin.

[BLKND]

Modified
Golden Arrow - Capable of moving at user's top speed. Normal Shintenshin moves slightly below this.
Golden Man - Eliminated. I'm sure there is capability in this jutsu becoming fathomable in some form considering the use of this jutsu, but perhaps a medium would be necessary?

[DAVID BOWE]

1.2 accepted on Golden Hair and Golden Arrow. That clone jutsu, I don't know. Just couldn't see it at all, even with a medium. Maybe the clone doesn't actually exist but that'd be Genjutsu. Which the Yamanaka don't specialize in so =\.

[Kii!]

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