Yamanaka Ninjutsu Pt.2

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Secret Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Range of jutsu is dependent on the number of times the Shintenshin no Jutsu has been retrained. When first learned, Ōgon no Otoko is capable of controlling one additional body. This number will be increased each time retrained. Control can only be broke by opponent's with greater chakra capacities (bijuu, samehada, or by simply having more jutsu).
Description: This technique allows the user to transfer their consciousness into more than one target by adding a curvature to their Shintenshin no Jutsu, giving them complete control of the bodies for a short period of time. Like the Shintenshin no Jutsu, the user's body is left defenceless while the technique is in use. Unlike the Mind Body Switch, this technique can travel in a curved line
Domain: Yamanaka[/ul][/size]

[Fuck Yeah!]

Definitely a no on the first tech. Cloning your mind? Even in Naruto world, even with a clan who does mind transfers, that's too much on the OP scale. Moving your soul around is one thing but creating stand in duplicates is whole different universe.

Number 2 should be Triple S rank. I can dig the concept of taking the other persons soul hostage with you when you go back to your body but it doesn't suddenly become some liquid substance you can just store in a hat. Maybe if they shared your body in some facet, but not with you just being able to yoink it out and put it whatever you like.

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Modified
Technique 1 - It's based on a canon jutsu. naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Mind_Clone_Switch_Technique
Technique 2 - Completely modified. It is now a jutsu to delay mental recovery. See above for details.

[Kii!]

I misunderstood the description of the first until you linked the wiki page. If I were you, I'd simply use the wiki description (as, honestly, I believe that's what was done with many canon techniques).

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Modified
Technique 1 - Now has wiki description. Hope that helps.

[Fuck Yeah!]

Indescribably Better ^-^

1.2 on Both

[Kii!]

I feel there should be more restrictions on the second jutsu. I'm aware of the risks you take in using the mind body switch in the first place, but once you do that, you use this and instantly have up to 2 turns of paralysis. Most paralysis techniques require a charge up post, half post length, or to paralyze the user as well, with some exceptions. I don't feel that the restrictions should be that drastic, due to having to use mind body switch first, but I feel that you shouldn't instantly get the paralysis. I'd say for the first turn, you're hurt by whatever they are due to bits of remaining consciousness. After that, they have the ability to escape in a single turn if they are strong willed, but if they remain for the second turn, then whatever happens to them no longer happens to you and you're free to do whatever.

This is just a suggestion, but I do feel like there should be something there.

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Modified
Technique 2 - Eliminated.

[Kii!]

2.2