Hidden Mist Exclusive Jutsu

[Hageshii]

Decided to get in on the village customs contest, sorry for flooding the customs so much, no pun intended. I haven't translated yet but upon approval I'll be sure to do so, translation takes time out of my thinking process so I hope thats acceptable. I have in italics the base jutsu that these advanced jutsu are derived from because I figured it would make things easier to compare. Hopefully this can be done in time for the competition but no rush, thanks for your time spent on this.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Techqniue)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Clone speed matches that of the user. Up to one clone can be made at a time, plus one more each time retrained. Explosion range covers 5 meters. For every 4 clones simultaneously detonated over an opponent, the effects of 'Water Prison' can be achieved without needing physical contact. Same 'Prison' effects apply.
Description: With this technique, the Suiton user is able to call upon aid from a perfect copy of themselves. Comprised purely of water, this clone retains the user movement speed and can share linked mental judgement. Best of all, physical strikes fixed on a point within their body will force it to break up into a puddle and join the mass below, able to avoid danger and regenerate anywhere the water exists. Finally, when defeated, the clone explodes into a blob of water that aims to take over the nearest opponent available. If found, the water envelops the victim whole, drowning them in the user's cursed water and setting up more attacks of the same nature.
Domain: Suiton.

• Kiri Bunshin (Mist Clone)

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Clone moves half as fast as the user. Up to one clone can be made per use, plus one more per retraining. Clones create a 5ft diameter fog of mist when destroyed and is treated the same as Hidden Mist Jutsu.
Description: A unique variant of the Water Clone technique that allows a Kiri shinobi to condense water into a replica of themselves. The clone is weaker than the standard Water Clone but when struck it does not fall apart into water, instead it becomes a thick mist that can aid in obscuring an opponent's vision and make subsequent attacks easier to land.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Water Clone[/li][/ul]

Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 -10 meters
Special: Fills a large, 10 meter area with mist as long as the user keep the technique flowing. Each time retrained, area of mist expands by 10 more meters. Mist blocks out all doujutsu requiring clear visibility.
Description: Though very basic, the Hidden Mist Technique allows for the stealthier side of combat to rule. After forming a few simple handseals, the user causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target, as they can move unseen, and if careful, unheard.
Domain: Suiton.

• Kiri Shiryoku (Mist Vision)

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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Vision is limited to 15ft plus 5ft per retraining. Maintaining costs a D Rank amount of chakra every post.
Description: A jutsu designed to allow for enhanced sensual perception even when an area is obscured by water or mist. The user directs chakra to their eyes that allows them to see through mist without distortion and see through water without refraction or distortion, enabling them to clearly maintain sight even with these things in the way. This vision is limited to a few feet however.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Hidden Mist Jutsu

[/li][li]Gaitoo Tsukimasu (Cloaked Arrival)[/u]
Rank: C,B
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Taijutsu
Range: Self
Special: Creates a five square meter area of mist as the user walks. As a B Rank jutsu it can be coupled with Shushin to create a fifteen square meter area around their initial movement point and the usual 5m area at the ending movement point, cloaking their movement.
Description: A stylized jutsu that serves to cover a shinobi's entrance into a water-based battle-field or to create a cover for movement. The user causes water to turn into mist as they walk on it, the chakra used to hold themselves up as freeing up the tight bonds of the liquid. This covers their movement in a fog and is commonly coupled with Shushin to create a powerful effect.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Hidden Mist Jutsu

[/li][li]Kiri Tsunami (Mist Cresting Wave)[/u]
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Suiton Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 30 meters
Special: Requires a 30 meter area of mist to perform and changes 50 meters of mist into water, retraining increases the amount of mist that can be changed in one user by 10 meters per.
Description: An offensive Suiton jutsu that is unique to the Mist Village. The user makes a sweeping motion with their arm and causes any mist they've created to move forwards towards an opponent or move inwards if they are already within it. The mist than changes into water, crashing down on them and bludgeoning them with the weight of the water as well as potentially drowning them in the suddenly created waves. Since the water is only created and not controlled by the user during this jutsu, allies and even the user can be harmed by the rush of water if they are within its range, suffering the same crushing damage as opponents.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Hidden Mist Jutsu

[/li][li]Rasenkei Hageshii Kiri (Spiral Bleeding Mist)[/u]
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: See Special
Special: Requires a 50 meter area of mist and after use this area fades away, can only hit targets within this area of mist. Retraining allows for a retention of used mist equal to 25 meters per as well as increasing the amount of mis that can be used by 10 meters. Primary effect takes one post and secondary effect takes another post, the user cannot move during this jutsu's performance.
Description: An exceptionally powerful Suiton technique utilized solely by Kirigakure shinobi that requires a large amount of chakra-laden mist in the area. The user performs a series of handseals and then extends their hand to the mist, causing it to transform into a condensed form in specific areas, creating claw or teeth like formations. These formations avoid allies and the user if they are within the mist so long as the user is aware of their exact location but otherwise coats the entire fog with these hardened features which can puncture an opponent easily but the jutsu is not yet complete. The shinobi then twists their wrist and causes the mist to rush around in a violent storm of fangs and claws that rip apart opponents within the mist, though the user must know their general location to be able to land successfully hits as the claws churn in the mist.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Hidden Mist Jutsu
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Teppoudama (Bullet)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 20 meters
Special: Bullets are fired from the mouth, all at once in the form of straight lined stream–like fashion. By default, 5 bullets can be fired at once, plus 5 more each time retrained. Must hold seals while firing. Bullets pierces 'C' ranked barriers and below, and move at the speed of a kunai.
Description: A simple yet effective suiton technique, after forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests bullet sized water projectiles in their mouth, which can then spit at their opponent at fast speeds for a quick attack. As the user’s knowledge of the this technique increases, so does the amount of bullets they can fire off.
Domain: Suiton.

• Kiri Kokyuu (Mist Breath)

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Suiton Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 30 meters
Special: User must inhale 10 meters or more of mist, for every 10 meters a single bullet is created. Retraining increases efficiency and allows for an additional bullet per 10 meters, maximum of 10.
Description: An offensive jutsu developed for use by Kirigakure shinobi that begins by inhaling a portion of created mist into the mouth, puffing out the cheeks like most oral jutsu. The user then spits out the mist as a concentrated bullet-like projectile that moments before impact shifts into water. Since mist is light-weight it travels much more quickly than a standard water bullet and is capable of dealing similarly greater damage when it shifts into water.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Water Bullet[/li][/ul]

Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Special: The user must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. While in prison, victims cannot perform handseals. Requires a water source.
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. After the shinobi forms the necessary hand seals, the water around the victim comes together in order to form a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby, or even have the bunshin be the one’s holding the target hostage.
Domain: Suiton.

• Kiridama (Mist Sphere)

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: Lasts for one post plus one post per retraining, requires 25 meters of mist to perform a single sphere. Only one sphere may be created per use. Sphere can only regenerate when around additional and plentiful mist and if attacked by an A Rank or higher jutsu the damage is irreparable and causes the sphere to fall apart.
Description: A Kiri exclusive jutsu that allows the user to manipulate mist, natural or created, to condense and form a thick sphere around an opponent who is currently within an area of mist. The sphere is similar to a Water Prison except more versatile since it is difficult to avoid its formation and it exhibits the same intense pressure as its origin jutsu. However, it also differs in that if attacked it simply regenerates the damage and it does not require the user to maintain a hold to ensure the sphere persists. The condensed mist slowly invades the captive's lungs as they inhale and causes lasting damage to their breathing even after the sphere ends or they escape, physically weakening them by leaving them out of breath for a post after the sphere's effects end, plus one more post for every post they were within the sphere.
Domain: Kirigakure, Suiton, Requires Water Prison[/li][/ul]

[Kii!]

For Mist Cresting Wave, 50 meters of instant water from mist is quite a bit for a B Rank. I'd like it to start off at 30 meters (the standard range for B Rank techniques) and increase through retraining. Even Baku Suishouha, a ridiculously powerful B Rank suiton technique, doesn't create that much water in a single turn. Since it requires mist beforehand, I think 30 meters is acceptable.

For mist sphere, it should be noted that it won't be able to regenerate without nearby mist. Also, it should be completely destroyed by techniques A Rank and higher that can affect the prison as a whole (in which case it has no time to regenerate).

[Hageshii]

Modified as stated.

[Kii!]

I think this is alright, then.

1.2

[DAVID BOWE]

Mist Vision -- I'm assuming that you're constantly feeding chakra into the eyes to maintain this jutsu? Meaning each round this jutsu is maintained it'll cost an additional amount of chakra?

Cloaked Arrival -- So explain the B ranked version for me. What I understand is the mist doesn’t actually cover fifteen meters from the start. It’s still 5 meters but before the user shunshin’s it’ll cover fifteen. Once the user finishes the shunshin it still covers 5. Correct? Or incorrect? If incorrect, the jutsu really is rather pointless. Just train the basic mist technique twice, which covers twenty meters and call it a day. Or train it once, which covers ten and call it a day.

Mist Cresting Wave -- Explain the logic in this "Requires a 30 meter area of mist to perform and changes 50 meters of mist into water, retraining increases the amount of mist that can be changed in one user by 10 meters per." Basically what it sounds like you’re saying is by some odd and illogical sense, if the user has 30 meters of mist he’ll be able to transform 50 meters of that 30 into water. Where’d the extra 20 meters come from? Then the 10 additional meters per retraining. So you retrain it and you can now cover 60 meters even if you only actually have 30 meters of mist? Additionally, handseal-less jutsu are rare. This one isn't one of those rare jutsu, needs handseals. Lastly, if the user were within' the mist this would harm them aswell, correct?

Spiral Bleeding Mist -- 75 meters? That’ll need a considerable lowering, by like 25 meters. This technique is also S ranked. Lastly, retraining would improve it by 10 meters. Now, question, wouldn’t the user need to know the location of the opponents within’ the mist to successfully attack them with this jutsu?

Mist Sphere -- The ending “The condensed mist slowly invades the captive's lungs as they inhale and causes lasting damage to their breathing even after the sphere ends or they escape, physically weakening them by leaving them out of breath for three post after the sphere's effects end.” Instead of that three post make it one post (and an additional post for each post the victim was within’ the sphere.)

[Hageshii]

Mist Vision[/u]
Mhm, thats the idea, chakra through the eyes to enhance vision so it would naturally take a constant amount of chakra to maintain it after activation.

Cloaked Arrival[/u]
The intent with the B Rank is that when its combined with Shunshin it creates the 15m mist when they first move since thats where the energy and chakra is applied to initiate the movement, the normal effect still applies to cloak their additional movement with the 5m mist so yes. My apologies if it was poorly written and didn't clarify that.

Mist Cresting Wave[/u]
The additional water is created with the use of the jutsu by having an efficient chakra + mist = water exchange rate. Thats also where the additional mist increase to 60 comes from, more efficiency in the exchange in using chakra and mist. Other jutsu create large quantities of water so I assumed actually having a watery substance to change wouldn't be a large stretch of the imagination to use chakra to make the exchange rate better since chakra tends to serve as a pretty good catalyst for jutsu. The handseals is my fault, I assumed handseals were implied but I can edit them in.

Spiral Bleeding Mist[/u]
I can make those changes but as far as knowing where the opponent is, sorta'. Assuming the opponent was within the mist and it was equal to the jutsu's maximum effect, then as long as they knew they were within the mist knowing the exact location wouldn't be important because the jutsu would effect the whole thing. If the jutsu's 50m were to effect something like, 200m of mist, then knowing the general location would be needed because it could influence the 50m. Now, if it were, say, 1,000m, then yes knowing a more precise location would be fairly critical considering the jutsu now only influences 20% of the total area.

So since its an Area of Effect type of attack, knowing an opponents location as vital knowledge depends on how much of the area isn't effect. Knowing where your allies are, however, would need more precise information because not hitting them means sacrificing meters of effect so the user would want to minimize that by knowing exactly where they are. Does that clarify things, I'm not entirely sure what information you were after so I tried to cover a lot of ground in my explanation.

Mist Sphere[/u]
I can alter that as well, fair enough.

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Nothing in the first post has been changed yet, I tend to wait for confirmation for acceptable changes first so don't assume I'm being resistant or something for not changing things right away.

[◤ velocissimo ⊿]

Mist Vision -- If that’s the idea add in that it cost a D ranks worth of chakra for each round the sight is maintained. Once done it’ll have my 2 . 2 (I’ll switch to my mod account and accept it, blargh.)

Cloaked Arrival -- ‘kk, sounds good. Yet another one I’ll 2 . 2 on the mod account once everything is fixed with all my other issues.

Mist Cresting Wave -- Still need to know if everyone within’ the mist can be harmed by this technique. Additionally I’ll ask you either lower the 50 meters or up this technique to S rank (A rank if the user is harmed as well.) Something that covers 50 meters is generally thought as an S rank (unless there is something that draws it back, like the user being effected if they’re within’ the mist.)

Spiral Bleeding Mist -- It helps though I still say you should lower the area of effect to 50 meters. Bump the technique up to S ranked and if the user so desires to further the distance with this technique they can retrain it. Each retraining bumping up the area of effect by 10 meters. Additionally, point out that the user must have a general idea of where the opponents are within’ the mist for them to cleanly execute this technique. That and they must know precisely where their comrades are if they don’t desire to harm them.

Mist Sphere -- That’ll also have my 2 . 2 once you make that needed edits.

[Hageshii]

Everything has been modified. Mist Cresting Wave has been altered to an A Rank jutsu that can harm allies and the user if they are within its range and Spiral Bleeding Mist has been altered as suggested as well, all other edits are as agreed. With the rule modifications stating that any jutsu that does not specify it doesn't include handseals does include seals I've left the seal part out just to save length but its assumed to be there in accordance with the rules.

[DAVID BOWE]

2 . 2 accepted, assuming Kii still has no issue. I'm sure he'll move it back if he does.