Kumo Mugetsu
Apr 21, 2011 9:00:46 GMT -8
Post by Mugetsu on Apr 21, 2011 9:00:46 GMT -8
PERSONOLOGY[/u]
- Name || Kumo Jushou
- Age || 16
- Clan, BL, or Kekkei Touta? || N/A
- Country and/or Village || Kumogakure
- Rank & Profession || Sensor
- Difficulty Setting || Normal
- Types
-> Genjutsu (Primary)
->Ninjutsu (Secondary)
->Taijutsu (Tertiary)
PHYSICALITY[/u]
- Height || 5.9
- Weight || 156lbs
- Apparel ||
Kumo's overall attire is rather odd to some, but to him, its rather comforting and befitting a ninja of his prowess. His entire upper body from his arms, torso, neck, and even his jaw, all wrapped in black bandages.Upon his legs he wears what could only be described as old feudal era samurai pants that are ripped ant torn at several edges. His feet? well, he likes to walk barefooted for he feels it takes away from his stealthy approach in combat - Body Appearance || Kumo's frame is rather small and sleek due to him lack in talent in terms of Taijutsu skill and overall physical prowess. Though he is not 'weak' he is simply not as strong as most others. His upper body is wrapped in bandages so it is hard to see what his actual frame looks like. He has no muscle tone what so ever, he sacrificed balance to become a powerful genjutsu and sensory shinobi. He sports long silky, blackish blue hair which slightly corresponds with his bandages. His eyes are a piercing maximum black, all the more reason for him to be a nightly stealth ninja.
- Blemishes & Scars || None that are visible
COGNITION[/u]
- Personality || Kumo, as he prefers to be called, is a young shinobi from Kumogakure. At first glance one would gather that he is a quiet contemplative young man, as he spends much of his time watching the world move around him, sketching as he observes, with pencil and notebook in hand. This however is no more than a mask that he puts on to hide his exuberance and identity.
At heart, Kumo iis an artist and a tactician and a high class shinobi. He walks into every situation, senses wide open, taking in the lay of the area and the people and animals in it.
A little obsessed with the aesthetics and the superficial, he can easily be construed as shallow and egocentric but quite the opposite is true of him. He is taking the time to understand what is on the surface and accept things for how they are and expresses these observations while he looks for deeper meaning and understanding, leaving these thoughts unsaid most of the time unless someone says he is shallow or witless. His egocentricity comes from his need to be concerned with hisself over that of other’s and their well being and understanding now that his life is truly about living for himself.
It is his whole hearted, proactive attempt at finding and further connecting with himself and his inner feelings and emotionsHe also doesn’t see the point in blatant dishonesty and has a tendency to be tactlessly honest about things, caring little for whether a person is capable of coping with the truth.
Art, since an incredibly young age, has been a large part of his life. it was his doorway into life really. He aspired to be a ninja like most young children but having not been from a shinobi clan he was put at a disadvantage. He had no particular training outside of the Academy nor any special jutsu to cultivate so he turned to his only other skill outside of his acute intellect: art.
Sharpening his senses and expressing himself through color and shape and the simple stroke of a brush. This love and skill was what then shaped his life and became his most deadly ability. His imagination flourished and his excitability along with it. He relishes in the wonder of true artistic expression whether it be his own work or that of another or the supposed construction of nature by some unseen god who forged the world in the fires of creation. It has gone so far as to become his ninja way.
He balanced the destruction and murder his job as a shinobi brought about about with creating his works of art but as his skills and capabilities became better he found that he was given less time off and the feeling of emptiness inside that he feels when he can’t freely express himself is something he dreads. Shinobi can easily be viewed as bad people but he has always viewed himself as a good person with lots of morally gray actions and thoughts under his belt but when he doesn’t let his art free from his mind and release it into the world, he grows depressed and anxious and enters the cold blackness he grew to call his Charcoal Soul.
Charcoal being brittle, difficult to work with and rather messy, staining purity and coming with no color. It was an apt name for the condition for his mind always felt like it was on the brink of snapping and his own chakra felt devoid of feeling.and his colorful and exquisite chakra was tainted and stained with his mental energy so blocked.
In love he is probably the most awkward, having never gotten to experience the feeling and become so emotionally attached to someone in a romantic way and thus, he searches for love of man on woman skin contact, finding it comforting. This trait goes hand in hand with his longing for acceptance of himself and his artwork, probably the thing he is the most sensitive about in the entire world. What good is expressing yourself if it doesn’t resonate with another person and no one appreciates it after all - Alignment || A chaotic good character acts as his conscience directs him with little regard for what others expect of him. He makes his own way, but he's kind and benevolent. He believes in goodness and right but has little use for laws and regulations. He hates it when people try to intimidate others and tell them what to do. He follows his own moral compass, which, although good, may not agree with that of society.
- Allegiance || Kumogakure
- Quirks & Tendencies || Being egocentric he thinks highly of himself and only himself at times, this really clashses with those who delegates orders and have superiority over him.
- Likes & Dislikes
Likes
->Painting
->Observing his surroundings
->Meditating
->Analyzing Art
->Showing others his art
Dislikes
->Liars
->Dogs
->Arrogant people
->People who disrespect art
->Being spoken about in ill manners
ARMAMENTS[/u]
- Primary Weapons ||
Lariat
Rank: C
Type: Primary / Melee
Description: A lariat is a loop of long, specialized rope hardened and designed to be thrown around a target. Once secured, the thick measures quickly constrict, tightening when pulled.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo - Secondary Weapons ||
Pack#1-2/i]
Hikari (Light Bomb) x2
Rank: C
Type: Tool / Area of Effect
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: 1 per pack
Description: Flash Bombs are supplementary explodables used mainly for diversions, creating a blinding light when they detonate that spreads quickly across a small area. Flash Bombs come in many shapes and sizes depending by region; some may look like small spheres wrapped in paper or, more conventionally, as cylindrical canisters.
Cost: 500 per Pack
Pack#3
Kunai (Throwing Knife)
Rank: D
Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
Special: 2 per Pack.
Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
Cost: 100 Ryo per Pack
Pack#4
Exploding Note
Rank: C
Type: Tool / Area of Effect
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: 10 per pack
Description: The exploding note is a piece of parchment paper infused with special chakra, layered over with a special script on it that serves to enable and facilitate its explosive properties. Its execution is simple - the ninja can attach the note to another object such as a kunai or log, and upon activation, the note is set and begins a slow countdown burn, which eventually results in a large explosion.
Cost: 500 per Pack
Pack#5
Smoke Grenade
Rank: C
Type: Tool / Area of Effect
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: 3 per pack
Description: This explodable comes in the form of a long, skinny cylinder, no more than a few inches long. At the top lies a pin which, when pulled, activates the grenade's internal components. Within seconds, thick, dark smoke begins to spew from the cylinder, covering a wide area and leaving all those nearby blinded and gagging.
Cost: 600 per Pack - Items || N/A
- Releases || Genjutsu Sense(Sightl)
- Jutsu
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Special: Switch is near-instantaneous. Can be used once per thread, plus once more each time retraned,
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack - i.e. exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
Domain: Academy Student Ninjutsu.
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Allows the user to transform into any person, object or animal of normal/small/miniature size. Transformation can be held for one turn, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a very basic ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at their respective village's Shinobi Academy. Henge allows the user to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Domain:Academy Student Ninjutsu..
Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: No other technique may be used while creeping.
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
Domain: Academy Student Ninjutsu.
Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self.
Special: Ineffective against complex, electronic, or unique binds.
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Domain: Academy Students Ninjutsu.
Kai! (Release)
Rank: D, C
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: User can only release themselves from illusions of equal or lower rank.
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Domain: Universal Ninjutsu.
Kagura Shingan (Kagura Mind's Eye)
Rank: D, C [75 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Sensory Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Special: When first learned, the Sensor can extend their Mind's Eye up to 10 meters in any direction. Each new rank extends the range by 10 more meters, for a maximum of 50 meters. Upon learing the 'S' ranked version, the user will no longer have to close their eyes nor form handseals to activate.
Description: Kagura Shingan is an advanced Sensory Ninjutsu technique used by all sensors, and serves as the root to the entire sensory tree. After a series of handseals, the sensor closes their eyes and uses their inate ability to detect chakra in order to determine the location of their opponent by the faintest of chakra trails, as well as discerning the size of an approaching unseen force, and even their chakra capacity.
Domain: Sensors.
EXP:
Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu (Mist Servant Technique)
Rank: D [25 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Sight Genjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Up to 5 servants can be made, plus 1 more each time retrained. Clones cannot exist more than 50 meters away from the user.
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a universal sight Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw projectiles such as kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Domain: Genjutsu - Illusion of Sight
Kagura Kinzu (Kagura's Supression)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Sensory Ninjutsu
Range: See 'Mind's Eye'
Special: Allows the Sensor to suppress their chakra so that other sensors or even chakra sensing vision cannot spot them.
Description: With this enhancement to Kagura Shingan, the sensor is now able to block out their chakra signal, so that other methods of chakra detection cannot trace them. While they remain nonetheless visible, without a chakra trail the sensor is free to move about stealthily without having fear of getting caught.
Domain: Sensors. Kagura Shingan 'C'
Kokohi no Jutsu (False Place Technique)
Rank: C, B
Type: Supplementary / Sight Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 20 meters
Special: Affects any single within a 10 meter area, plus 10 more each time retrained
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple sight Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. After forming a few seals, any object the user makes eye contact with will warp, twist, and look however it is the user wants to the untrained eye.
Domain: Genjutsu - Illusion of Sight
Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu (Sly Mind Affect Technique)
Rank: C [50 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Sight Genjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Effective only when target is traveling along enclosed paths which have objects that can be visaully altered - trees, buildings, doors, etc. Targets up to 1 target per use, plus 1 more each time retrained. Due to the constant evolving nature of the jutsu, it requires steady 'C' ranked chakra each turn to be continued.
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a simple yet effective Genjutsu technique which allows the user to play a nasty visual truck on their opponents, causing them to travel around an area lost, in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. Most effective in enclosed areas such as forests or jungle.
Domain: Genjutsu - Illusion of Sight
Kuramu no Jutsu (Extremely Disorienting Color Spray)
Rank: C,
Type: Supplementary / Sight Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 20 meters
Special: Affects a single victim within a 10 meter area, plus 10 more each time 'C' rank is retrained; 'B' rank adds an additional viciim each time retrained.
Description: After performing the needed seals, the user then targets a person with in range of the technique. The person targeted first shows signs on the technique immediately. From their point of view, the world that they’re looking at is twisting and turning rapidly in different directions, making it very hard to see. After a while disorientation kicks in and the person may feel nauseous and dizzy.
Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique)
Rank: B [100 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Sight Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: Fireball measures 10 meters. Affects everyone with 10 meters of the user, plus 10 more each time retrained.
Description: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a visual genjutsu technique that causes the user's target After forming the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope the user's chosen target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and will most likely feel compelled to flee their location for safety, in fear of their lives.
Domain: Genjutsu - Illusion of Sight
I counted your jutsu at 475 with 4-E (0), 3-D (75), 6-C (300), 1-B (100). You may choose one more technique that is D rank. Other than that, it looks good so far. The cognition can be simplified to reduce length, although there isn't a rule stating it must be done. It makes it easier for a reader to know your character. 
