Open Taijutsu [1st Try]

[Ho Chi Minch]

Technique Name Dragon Uppercut
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stamina: Mid
Special: Dragon Uppercut when first brought has a total of one hit,but can be retrained for an extra hit.
Description: A flashy yet, extremely powerful rising uppercut, in which the user attacks the opponent with a skyward blow, usually when they are attacking full on. This technique is incredibly powerful, sending the opponent skyward with tremendous force.
Domain: Taijutsu

Technique Name Blazing Fist - Rekkaken
Rank: D,C,B,A
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stamina: Mid-High
Special: When used this attack is about to break though a guard of equal or lower rank to the rank that is trained.
Description:A powerful move that can break through opponents defenses because of the power of "One Inch Build-Up", the user attacks with a blow that has tremendous force in which it is a punch that doesn't seem to be much, but in actuality is a punch that goes into one singular point of the body to break through the opponents guard. Highly destructive and usually done to finish the opponent.
Domain: Taijutsu

Technique Name Tiger Thrust - Toratsu
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Stamina: Low
Special: Even though this is a single based attack, it could be retrained up to one more time to deliver a extra knee attack to the foe.
Description: A knee strike, that is "shot" much like a bullet. The user leaps from a farther reach than usual. That's because this technique uses that distance to deliver a strong knee strike into the opponents body with critical force.
Domain: Taijutsu

Technique Name Flash Kick - Senkou Kikku
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Stamina: Low
Special: This attack is suppose to be done in the air,but when retrained once more could be done on the ground as well.
Description:A flashy yet effective technique. The user attacks while within the sky. Using a backflip kick in which they smash into the opponents body. This is a move designed for aerial battles, and thus is made mostly while in the air, though it can be done on the ground as well.
Domain: Taijutsu

[Pwn]

Do you still want this? If so, post here before Jan 19, 2012 and let me know. Otherwise, this will be archived.

[Ho Chi Minch]

Yeah I do :3

[Messatsu!]

Technique Name Dragon Uppercut
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stamina: Mid
Special: Dragon Uppercut when first brought has a total of one hit,but can be retrained for an extra hit.
Description: A flashy yet, extremely powerful rising uppercut, in which the user attacks the opponent with a skyward blow, usually when they are attacking full on. This technique is incredibly powerful, sending the opponent skyward with tremendous force.
Domain: Taijutsu

[1] I like the idea however the part where its describing it as 'extra hit' It sounds like its trying to stack? If not make it so simply something along the lines of "Each time retrain B ranked amount of damaged stacks". And sharpen the description up a bit, make it more clear, nothing overly detailed but it does need more. Also where your taijutsu says 'Technique name' swap that out with the actual technique name.

Technique Name Blazing Fist - Rekkaken
Rank: D,C,B,A
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stamina: Mid-High
Special: When used this attack is about to break though a guard of equal or lower rank to the rank that is trained.
Description:A powerful move that can break through opponents defenses because of the power of "One Inch Build-Up", the user attacks with a blow that has tremendous force in which it is a punch that doesn't seem to be much, but in actuality is a punch that goes into one singular point of the body to break through the opponents guard. Highly destructive and usually done to finish the opponent.
Domain: Taijutsu

[2] When dealing with Multi-rank techniques the cost is always (usually) of the corresponding rank so the Stamina cost would be 'Low - Massive'. With the special fix up the wording because it gets a bit confusing "Breaks through defense of equal rank and lower." maybe? It says the user attacks with a powerful blow, well, what type of blow? Is it fixed or left up to the users discretion - elaborate. Also with the range, I'm presuming its in 'hands reach' so use that if anything.

Technique Name Tiger Thrust - Toratsu
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Stamina: Low
Special: Even though this is a single based attack, it could be retrained up to one more time to deliver a extra knee attack to the foe.
Description: A knee strike, that is "shot" much like a bullet. The user leaps from a farther reach than usual. That's because this technique uses that distance to deliver a strong knee strike into the opponents body with critical force.
Domain: Taijutsu

[3] Same as the first (just add a stacking bonus. As for the range "Mid" is very vague, '0 - 5 meters' seems fair. where it says the knee is shot much like a bullet, fixing it up to just be a flying knee thrust is more than fine.

Technique Name Flash Kick - Senkou Kikku
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Stamina: Low
Special: This attack is suppose to be done in the air,but when retrained once more could be done on the ground as well.
Description:A flashy yet effective technique. The user attacks while within the sky. Using a backflip kick in which they smash into the opponents body. This is a move designed for aerial battles, and thus is made mostly while in the air, though it can be done on the ground as well.
Domain: Taijutsu

[4] Lol someone playing a ton of street fighter lately? Haha anywho, if this is similar to the traditional flash kick, well it doesn't really 'smash' into the opponent, its more so a rising back-flipping kick (upward arc) to strike the opponents chin or head. It being aerial in this case (it may just be me) I feel like this is a no-no, I can't really see where you'd gather the momentum and power to deliver such a strike when in mid air. Now off the ground where leverage is gain as well as something to actually jump off of to actually perform the back flip - its fine. Also stamina cost for C ranks are 'Mid'.

Lastly this doesn't appear to be a distinctive style at all so just add 'universal Taijutsu' to the domains.

[chiatsuki]

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