Puppetry Expanded

[Śākyamuni]

Trajectory Change
RANK: D
TYPE: Ninjutsu[Puppetry]
RANGE: See Special
HANDSEALS: No
CHAKRA: Low
SPECIAL: The range of the Technique is dependant on the Range of the user's 'Puppetry Technique'. Per every re-train of the jutsu it can affect up to one other piece of weaponry. This Jutsu can only affect Secondary Weaponry.
DESCRIPTION: Being a Puppet Master is a difficult art, and requires intense training and perverseness to succeed. To further these goals, the jutsu was created so that the Puppetry Master could affect other items with his Chakra Threads, vastly increasing the range of tactics a Puppet Master can pull off.
This is is based around momentarily wrapping a thread around an oncoming projectile and slightly adjusting it's course. This adjustment can be no more then thirty degrees, removing it's effectiveness against items such as the Giant and Fuuma Shuriken.
DOMAIN: Puppetry:: Must know 'Puppetry Technique' 'C'.

Remote Body Change
RANK: D
TYPE: Ninjutsu[Puppetry]
RANGE: See Special
HANDSEALS: No
CHAKRA: High
SPECIAL: The range of the Technique is dependant on the Range of the user's 'Puppetry Technique'. Every re-train allows it to be used once more per topic.
DESCRIPTION: Being a Puppet Master is a difficult art, and requires intense training and perverseness to succeed. To further these goals, the jutsu was created so that the Puppetry Master could affect other items with his Chakra Threads, vastly increasing the range of tactics a Puppet Master can pull off.
This Technique instead focuses around replacing a Puppetry User with a Puppet that is currently being manipulated.
DOMAIN: Puppetry:: Must know 'Puppetry Technique' 'C'.

Remote Puppet Change
RANK: C
TYPE: Ninjutsu[Puppetry]
RANGE: See Special
HANDSEALS: No
CHAKRA: High
SPECIAL: The range of the Technique is dependant on the Range of the user's 'Puppetry Technique'. Every re-train allows it to be used once more per topic.
DESCRIPTION: eing a Puppet Master is a difficult art, and requires intense training and perverseness to succeed. To further these goals, the jutsu was created so that the Puppetry Master could affect other items with his Chakra Threads, vastly increasing the range of tactics a Puppet Master can pull off.
This Technique focuses around swapping the positions off Puppets around the field, rapidly changing their positions at the twitch of a finger.
DOMAIN: Puppetry:: Must know 'Puppetry Technique' 'C' :: Must know 'Remote Body Change' 'D²'

[Śākyamuni]

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[Śākyamuni]

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[Śākyamuni]

Come on.

[suzaku]

Trajectory Change
RANK: D
TYPE: Ninjutsu[Puppetry]
RANGE: See Special
HANDSEALS: No
CHAKRA: Low
SPECIAL: The range of the Technique is dependant on the Range of the user's 'Puppetry Technique'. Per every re-train of the jutsu it can affect up to one other piece of weaponry. This Jutsu can only affect Secondary Weaponry.
DESCRIPTION: Being a Puppet Master is a difficult art, and requires intense training and perverseness to succeed. To further these goals, the jutsu was created so that the Puppetry Master could affect other items with his Chakra Threads, vastly increasing the range of tactics a Puppet Master can pull off.
This is is based around momentarily wrapping a thread around an oncoming projectile and slightly adjusting it's course. This adjustment can be no more then thirty degrees, removing it's effectiveness against items such as the Giant and Fuuma Shuriken.
DOMAIN: Puppetry:: Must know 'Puppetry Technique' 'C'.

I'm a little torn on this jutsu; while it might seem like a simple action at first, you have to consider the speed at which an oncoming projectile will travel, as will as possible rotations(namely those of a shuriken) it might undergo; the issue here is that while you might have time to do this from large distances, were the projectiles thrown from close enough of a distance, you simply wouldn't have time to do something so intricate. I would suggest adding a "dead zone" range fo this ability: i.e. if you and your opponene tare within x meters, you simply wouldn't have time to perform such a trick, as well as bumping the ability up to C Rank, as D Rank seems fairly low for a jutsu that can potentially subvert projectile attacks like this.

Your Remaining two technique's aren't really suitable as D and C Rank; for their effects, potential range and chakra consumption, I would suggest increasing both of them to A Rank.

[suzaku]

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