Nitōjutsu (Two Sword Style) [DONE]
May 5, 2011 15:54:17 GMT -8
Post by Kii! on May 5, 2011 15:54:17 GMT -8
Looks like I'm taking this over.
Defensive stance: note in special that you can block equal rank attacks only in conjunction with jutsu used inside of the stance, and not simply by being in the stance. Also, as a note (this can be added if you wish to clarify, but I feel it's a given. I just wanted to make a note of it) that you can only block techniques whose nature allows you to do so, i.e. you won't be blocking a B rank tidal wave even if you have S rank defense, 'cause you can't block a tidal wave with a sword.
Offensive stance: Looks fine.
Balanced stance: Just note that you need equal rank of both offensive and defensive stances in order to train this in the domain.
For both blocking techniques inside defensive stance: you'll need equal rank defensive stance to learn these (I assume you intended that?), just put that in the domain.
For all offensive techniques: I assume you're trying to base this off of the way kenjutsu works, right? You could note in the special that the damage of the strike is based off of your offensive stance rank. Furthermore, it's to my understand (from reading the replies) that you originally had the ability to retrain this for more strikes? While what Lash said is true, if you want the ability to retrain, you could allow retraining in order to stack damage equal to the rank of the technique. Just a suggestion. Also, like the defensive stance techniques, you should note that an equal rank of offensive stance is required to learn any of the techniques.
For all balanced techniques: same as above. Rank of strike can be determined by balance stance rank, and you could retrain to stack damage equal to the rank of the technique. Some suggestions that give the stances more meaning. Aside from that, note that the balanced stance rank must be equal to or higher than the technique you're learning, just like the other two sections.
I think that covers the issues I saw, as Lash pointed out most of the specific jutsu issues.
Defensive stance: note in special that you can block equal rank attacks only in conjunction with jutsu used inside of the stance, and not simply by being in the stance. Also, as a note (this can be added if you wish to clarify, but I feel it's a given. I just wanted to make a note of it) that you can only block techniques whose nature allows you to do so, i.e. you won't be blocking a B rank tidal wave even if you have S rank defense, 'cause you can't block a tidal wave with a sword.
Offensive stance: Looks fine.
Balanced stance: Just note that you need equal rank of both offensive and defensive stances in order to train this in the domain.
For both blocking techniques inside defensive stance: you'll need equal rank defensive stance to learn these (I assume you intended that?), just put that in the domain.
For all offensive techniques: I assume you're trying to base this off of the way kenjutsu works, right? You could note in the special that the damage of the strike is based off of your offensive stance rank. Furthermore, it's to my understand (from reading the replies) that you originally had the ability to retrain this for more strikes? While what Lash said is true, if you want the ability to retrain, you could allow retraining in order to stack damage equal to the rank of the technique. Just a suggestion. Also, like the defensive stance techniques, you should note that an equal rank of offensive stance is required to learn any of the techniques.
For all balanced techniques: same as above. Rank of strike can be determined by balance stance rank, and you could retrain to stack damage equal to the rank of the technique. Some suggestions that give the stances more meaning. Aside from that, note that the balanced stance rank must be equal to or higher than the technique you're learning, just like the other two sections.
I think that covers the issues I saw, as Lash pointed out most of the specific jutsu issues.
