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• Name: Vanyl Rayne (Vah-nil-lah Ray-n)
  
• Age: 20
  
• Bloodline Limit: Kaguya
  
• Country/Village: Wind/ Sand
  
• Rank & Profession: Gennin
  
• Difficulty Setting: Hard
  
• Releases/Senses:
  
  • Earth Release

Types

• PRIMARY! Taijutsu
  
• SECONDARY! Ninjutsu
  
• TERTIARY! Genjutsu

PHYSICALITY[/u]

• Height: 5'6"
  
• Weight: 145lbs
  
• Physical
  :Kaguya: Vanyl's appearance attribute's to her heritage as a Kaguya though not all of it. Her skin is soft as cotton, pale as a white egg, and as fair as white silk. The locks of pale silver hair flowing from her scalp, though gorgeous and glamorous, are very typical within the clan. While some would have some coloration to their features much of Vanyl's features remain pale to the point she looks like a ghost. Her figure is fit and lithe moving swiftly and deftly despite gaining the appearance of a full woman, a buxom figure and slim extremities.
  
  :Other: Through her hermit-ism much of her clothing is frayed and tattered like the edge of her black top which is set under an armored brassier with ornate symbols curling across the clothing. She wears a set of black leather tights held up by a belt, with similar symbols and patterns working up her thighs and around her wide hips as they come down to a pair of black leather boots, durable made for long hunts.
  
  :Misc.: Among other styles and accessories, she also wears a dusty rose cloak that covers her head and shadows her face while it extends down her back and rear to end at the back of her knees, the cloak's hem is also designed with black trim and silver symbols. The last of her unique visage is a finely made leather quiver held across her back and chest with a belt of the same fine leather. The last strange feature to Vanyl are her crimson Iris' making her eyes look like a deep pools of blood.
  

PAST...

COGNITION[/u]

• Personality:
  
  • :Protective: Vanyl typically keeps to herself and those close to her, she's a little shy but overall she's a good friend and a trustworthy person. Vanyl does what she chooses to despite what others think or say. She doesn't reach out to many people and if someone she doesn't know says something to offend her or her friends she'll become very angry and hold a long grudge. One hatred she will always hold is against the Kirigakure who killed her cousin that was like a brother.
    
    :Reserved: Vanyl usually is very cold and distant if her past is brought up. Her calm revere stems from her hours of hunting and discipline that was brought onto her from her rough training. While Vanyl sometimes might seem to hate being the center of the spotlight, that assumption is only half true. She believes that certain circumstances need different tools to achieve the objective. She will gladly stand up or step down to do what is needed to be done and done right. No matter which side of an argument is friendly to her she will back up the correct side of it without any disregard for friend or foe.
    
    :Battle: In the heat of battle Vanyl is usually calm and collected until things get out of hand or until she gets hurt. At that point her battle style becomes much more erratic and destructive in her movements and attacks. while working in a group Vanyl will tend to try to follow someones lead and boost their abilities as much as he can. If Vanyl was to be ambushed she would react violently lashing out defensibly while trying to get away from her attackers. When Vanyl hurt or her fuse finally goes off her demeanor changes instantly and drastically turning into an evil killer. Hardly able to comprehend friend and foe, finding personal pleasure in nothing more than carnage, destruction and blood.
  
  
  
  
• Alignment: Nuetral Evil
  
  
• Allegiance:
  
  • Vanyl will not easily pledge to anyone until they have shown her they can be trusted.
  
  
  
• Quirks & Tendencies:
  
• Likes & Dislikes:
  
  • likes
    Honesty
    blood
    animals
    friends
    hearing something out of the blue
    
    
  • Dislikes
    groups of people
    losing
    fake people
    direct sunlight
    

ARMAMENTS[/u]

• Forsaken Arc
  
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  Rank: B
  Type: Bow, Long-Range.
  Description: Named for being a the last creation of Maldin Grath, The Forsaken Arc had accidentally misfired while Grath was fine tuning it and the air had pierced the man through the forehead. His body was found and the bow sealed under the protection of the Hyuuga as specified by Garth.
  
  The bow itself is made from a strong and flexible wooden material, colored like stone and dead blue skin. Along the middle is a worn leather handle that then moves outwards and branching many ways increasing it's dexterity and creating sharp points towards the front of it while the ends branch and splay creating sharp edges. The final part of the bow was an ornate steel plate set over the handle to protect the hand and forearm. The protector while thick slopes into a wide spiked edge set just past the handle such as a fist-blade.
  
  The wide splay of the bow's frame creates extra tension increasing the distance and speed of the shot by 50%. While other techniques within archery increase many parameters of a shot they stack on top of this bows enhancements. Blueprint of this weapon must be obtained from Vanyl Rayne.
  Cost: 10,000
  
  
  Link to Selfish bow and tech
  
  
• Secondary
  x25 arrows
  
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  Stakes of Hell (5 packs)
  Rank: B
  Type: Arrow, offensive (5 a pack)
  Description: These arrows are created with a special core that splays outward while the arrow head is a three bladed tip. when these arrows are fired and hit max velocity they split into three separate sections spreading out approximately a foot from each other before hitting the target.
  Cost: 1000 Ryu a pack (200 each)
  
  
  
• Accessories: C rank Blank Scroll x1

EXP COUNTER

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Axel
1500 from Clan and Char Transfer
336
69
250
161


Previous Character: Axel Inuzuka
Death Thread: here
Total EXP: 2408
EXP Used: 2375/2408
EXP Lost: 0
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JUTSU -2375/2408 -33 exp left

Kaguya (1000)

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Shikotsumyako (Calcium Compression) (625)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Very Low - Very High
Special: Strength of ALL bone creations depend on highest rank known. Highest rank also determines the level of defense the Kaguya can create under their skin in the form of thin, compressed bone for the sake of defense. Damage reduction, while measured in the form a number, ultimately depends on the RP. Keep in mind the defense bonus only applies to attacks equal or lower to the highest rank known in this technique, and applies to single rank creations; stacked bonus damage attacks can bypass the bone with enough damage. Finally, because the bone within can be so strong, all non-weapon, hand to hand Taijutsu will receive a passive blunt damage bonus equal to the highest rank known in this technique. However, when this effect is applied, the user will ultimately lose speed.

D: 15% damage reduction // 50% speed reduction
C: 30% dr // 40% loss
B: 45% dr // 30% loss
A: 60% dr // 20% loss
S: 75% dr // 10% loss


Description: A Kaguya's most basic and innate skill, it allows them to alter the calcium composition of their entire bone structure to whatever density they see fit. Whether they harden a whole section of bone or just one individual piece doesn't matter; if the Kaguya wills it, one normal bone can become as tough as iron. This is the basis behind their bloodline skill and all their jutsu, and as they progress in skill and power, their bones become harder and stronger.
Domain: Kaguya.

Yanagi no Mai (Dance of the Willows) (100)
Rank: C x2
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Arm's reach.
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: Due to fluidity of the dance, the user can strike many times at once. After initially learned, any more retraining will stack a simultaneous attack per stave - that is, if one learns this three times, they strike three times at once. However, after every fourth retraining, the consumption of this technique goes up by one.
Description: The first of the five Kaguya dances. Using the abilities of their bloodline, the user will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of each hand to form a stabbing instrument. These staves extend up to great lengths, and are razor sharp. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then proceed to impale their opponents.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.

Karamatsu no Mai (Dance of the Larch) (175)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Very Low - Very High [initial + upkeep]
Special: Effectively shoots out bone spikes from the user's body near-instantly to defend them from incoming danger, or even to attack an opponent that simply got too close to the clan member. Spikes extend as far as one (1) meter away from the user's body. Dispersion of the bones is near-instant. Additionally, while using this, the defensive effects of 'Calcium Compression' are forfeit. Highest rank known determines the amount of the user's body the spikes will cover, as well as the level of damage they can produce. Spikes cannot protrude from sensitive areas like one's face, or head over-all.


D: 15% body coverage
C: 30%
B: 45%
A: 60%
S: 75% (3/4th's of the user's body surface!)


Description: Karamatsu no Mai is the third of five dance forms. After activating their special chakra that allows them free-flowing bone manipulation, the Kaguya will begin to extend multiple bones from their body, protruding almost instantly from their flesh and out his rib cage, radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow the Kaguya to move with little effort to impale their opponents. A horrific creation indeed.
Domain: Kaguya. Calcium Compression

Kyoki Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Weeping Willow] (50)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See Special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: The bones grows approximately 10 feet outward from the user, plus an addition 2 feet everytime this technique is re-trained.
Description: Kyoki Yanagi no Mai is named after the Weeping Willow, a tree that has long limp branches, thus it got the name of 'weeping'. Utilizing the ability of the Shikotsumyaku, the user channels their chakra and is able to grow bones from their forearms, palms or fingers. These bones have little calcium in them, but the strength lies in the amount that is created and that they are shaped and armed with extremely sharp barbs. The bones are utilized as coiled whips by the Kaguya clansmen, taking enemies out from a distance, immobilizing them with an array of thin whips from the forearm, palms and fingers which interconnect when around the target. The barbs make the immobilization more effective as they dig into the targets body. Once released, if it's still connected to the Kaguya, they are able to control the whips movements, as it is flexible like elastic. But, if the user wishes, they are able to disconnect the 'threads' from their body in an instant.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.

Hikage no Mai (Dance of the Club Moss) (50)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See Special!
Handseals: No.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: The bones grows approximately 5 inches outward from the users arm, plus another 5 inches everytime this technique is re-trained. Highest rank of 'Calcium Compression' determines the level of penetration into the flesh and muscle of the target.
Description: Hikage no Mai is named after the Club Moss, which has a unique style of lateral growth. Using the ability of the Shikotsumyaku the user will channel chakra into their bones to grow several jagged leaf-like entities from the top of their arm down to their wrist that creep out from the arm, forming several small branch structures similar to how antlers grow. However, while this technique appears at base level to be a simple bone technique capable of coating the user's arm in jagged like antler shapes, the true strength behind these outstretched bones are the scale-like leaves that are only visible when viewed up close. The scale-like formation of bones make it so that these bones not only have the ability to pierce the target, but also grind away at their flesh and muscles, vastly making this technique more effective, especially when used with the speed and grace of the Kaguya clansmen. The user needs not to pierce his opponent, but rather simply brush against the target in order to cut away at them.
Domain: Kaguya. Must know 'C' ranked Calcium Compression.




Multi-Strike I, II, III, IV & V

Multiple Striking allows the user to perform two or more Taijutsu from one's mastery at the same time, essentially leaving your targets with twice the trouble to deal with! When first learned, two Mastery jutsu may be used at once. Each time re-acquired, one more jutsu is added the consecutive fire. Keep in mind that performing Taijutsu simultaneously does not reduce Stamina costs in any way!.

Hosatsu (800)

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Kihakuya (Spirit Arrow) (325)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Nintaijutsu / Offensive / Hosatsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Increases the potency of a fired arrow by an amount equal to rank of the technique.
Description: Not only are the users of Hosatsu talented Taijutsu artists, but followers of the style are able to imbue their arrows with their own chakra. The arrows, filled with the user's chakra, become both more powerful and more stable, increasing the piercing power of arrows fired. The major downside to this effect is the double drain of the shot, using up both Stamina and Chakra. Sometimes the reward is worth the risk, though. Beyond that, users of Kihakuya have the ability to further enhance their arrows, but at the additional cost of chakra.
Domain: Hosatsu

Nousatsu (Enchant) (Earth 325)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Nintaijutsu / Offensive
Range: 5 meters, +5 meters for each rank
Chakra: Low - Very High
Special: Imbues an arrow with an elemental property that the user has the ability to manipulate. Must be relearned for every Element the caster may use.
Description: It is clear to those who have been in combat that there are certain elements that have a natural weakness to others. This shot attempts to make use of that information. By channeling elemental chakra through an arrow, the weapon takes on the elemental property of the element. Upon impact, that elemental chakra is released in a blast that covers the distance denoted in the ranged effect. For example, an arrow filled with 'B' Rank Fire chakra will, upon impact, release a burst of fire from the impact zone to a diameter of the said range.
Domain: Hosatsu, must have Kihakuya of the same Rank

Fukutama (Multi Shot) (150)
Rank: C x3
Type: Taijutsu / Supplementary
Range: ---
Stamina: Low per extra arrow
Special: Allows the user the ability to fire one extra arrow for each time this technique is trained to a maximum of 5 at a time.
Description: One of the more interesting techniques developed for use by Hosatsu warriors, this technique allows the user to knock and fire one additional arrow for each time the technique has been learned. They may be lined up side to side to increase the penetrating power of a single arrow, or spread out across the bow in order to create a 'spray' of arrows that shoots outwards. It should be noted that each arrow requires specific enhancement, meaning that overusing this technique will rapidly drain one's Stamina.
Domain: Hosatsu

Kyuudou (425)

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The Way of The Watcher (175 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Passive / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: --
Stamina: --
Special: One must know this tech to learn any tech of equivalent rank in it’s tree. Highest rank known determines the distance in which they can fire arrows, as well as the speed at which they move, while standing still. Keep in mind this type of technique requires the user to be still while shooting, which in turn rewards them with increased accuracy, coming forth in the form of faster arrow speed. Does not work on automatic or modern bows, that do not require the archer to pull and hold before each shot, as these fire the same regardless of the user's skill or speed.

D: 20 meter range // 4 meter per second arrow speed
C: 40 m // 8mps as
B: 60 m // 12mps as
A: 80 m // 16mps as
S: 100 m // 20mps as


Description: One of the three distinct styles of the bow is known as 'The Watcher'. Employing patience, careful positioning and a steady, strong hand, the user is capable of launching a missle of death over a vast distance at swift speeds.
Domain: Kyuudou (Archery).

The Way of The Trickster (75 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Passive / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: Self
Stamina: --
Special: One must know this tech to learn any tech of equivalent rank in it’s tree. Highest rank known determines the distance in which they can fire arrows, as well as the speed at which they move, when shot while walking. Does not work on automatic or modern bows, that do not require the archer to pull and hold before each shot, as these fire the same regardless of the user's skill or speed.

D: 10 meter range // 2 meter per second arrow speed
C: 20 m // 4mps as
B: 30 m // 6mps as
A: 40 m // 8mps as
S: 50 m // 10mps as


Description: The unexpected branch of Kyuudou, the tricky and misleading way of the Trickster. Allowing the user to fire multiple shots at one time, ricochet attacks and even curve arrows. It's unconventional flair is it's greatest strength.
Domain: Diving Eagle

Multi-Shot (175 exp)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Specialized Taijutsu / Archery
Range: See Special!
Stamina: Very Low - Very High
Special: This modifying technique allows the user to fire more than one arrow at the same time per shot. Their ability to quickly knock and fire arrows is directly dependant on the users rank in “The Way of The Trickster”. Highest rank known establishes the amount of arrows the archer can fire at the same time.

D: 2 per shot
C: 3
B: 4
A: 5
S: 6
Description: The technique is one of the hallmarks of the Trickster style, firing more arrows than a normal person would believe is possible. It's been said that with proper mastery of the technique, the user can fire up to six at a time with all the ability they fire a normal one.
Domain: Kyuudou (Archery). The Way of The Trickster.

Doton (150)

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Doton Ryouuken (Earth Dominion)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: No
Chakra: Mid
Special: Establishes the area of earth a user can control for their earthen techniques, including the ability to sense what comes in contact with it. Because Doton is a solid essence with physical mass, its creations deal more with strength and endurance of the earth; as such, each earthen creation from the user will have have a natural, built-in defense against any attacks equally ranked or lower. Highest rank known also establishes the size of Doton creations they can produce, as well as the amount of time it takes for the user to detect any form of contact with their Doton creations, as well as natural earth. Keep in mind detection occurs only when foreign contact occurs WHILE the user is also in direction contact with the earth, natural or self-made.

D: 10 meter range / Full Turn detection delay
C: 20 meters / 3/4 th's of a turn
B: 30 ms / Half of a turn
A: 40 ms / 1/4 th's of a turn
S: 50 ms / Near-Instant!


Description: The basis behind the majority of Doton techniques lie in the user's ability to control the very earth around them. 'Earth Dominion' is just as its name implies, a fundamental supplementary jutsu of Doton nature that allows the user to intermingle their chakra with that of nature, harmonizing the two in order to create complete control over the earth around them. Once this link is achieved, the door is opened for greater creations to be made.
Domain: Doton.

Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range:Self
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low
Special: User cannot move while underground, but they can detect anyone that walks along the earth directly above them. User can remain underground for a single turn before needing to resurface. Can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: A very basic earth technique, it allows the user to dive underground almost instantaneously so that they remain hidden from view in order to ambush their opponent. As long as the opponent is walking across the earth, they will be aware of their presence, and can wait patiently (without fear of asphyxiation!) until they right time, where they will emerge and latch onto the opponent’s legs. From here, they can easily suck them down, executing a replacement with them so that the opponent is buried underground up to his neck, while the user emerges unharmed above ground.
Domain: Doton. Earth Dominion 'D'.


Dochuu Eigyo (Underground Fish Projection)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Mid
Special: Range of movement depends on the user’s level of Earth Dominion, and while swimming underground, their speed remains the same. While the user cannot perform seals and thus use jutsu underground, they can wield weapons in order to surprise attack. User can remain underground for a single turn before needing to resurface; each time retrained, the user main remain underground for one extra turn. However, after every fourth retraining, their chakra consumption will go up by one,
Description: An upgrade to Shinjuu Zanshu, this underground variation grants the user movement whilst underground. Additionally, they can also emerge from below with their weapons drawn, allowing them to attack without being seen. After a few short seals, the user merely sinks below, and can remain there for a small amount of time.
Domain: Doton. Must know 'Double Suicide Decapitation'.

[Sharkk]

I'm not exactly entirely sure about your death and it being a scrap or accepted death, but I think it may incur/need the 10% exp reduction.

[Apple]

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extensive History added lol hope you like it Apple left it up to your choice

[Apple]

[/b][/color] Give me a little bit more appearance and you should be good to go!

[2] You have 900 EXP in hosatu, not 800. Please remove 100 EXP worth of techs or rearrange your EXP in general so that it fits.

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fixed both sry

[~Kohana <3]

Okay, so as a child you killed three Hyuuga elders with three arrows? A tad unrealistic, but that's not entirely my concern. More so, how are you Main Branch Hyuuga if you're only half Hyuuga? I mean, it's already looked down upon in Hyuuga standards to marry or have relations outside of the clan. It taint's the bloodline and could produce an undesirable alteration in genetics.

Hyuuga and Inuzuka marriage? Sure. Great way to link your old character and new character. Main Branch though? Hardly. Also, as for the elders 'holding a sign she never had seen before' which caused her mother to be in pain? I'm assuming that's in reference to the curse seal right? If so, you're doing it wrong. Only Hyuuga Branch members have those, not random Inuzuka mother's. If not, you should probably clarify.

Regardless, as it stands, I don't see this history being viable for a Main Branch. Sorry.

To Apple: I know this was your call but I felt as though this couldn't go ignored. Still much love though! <3

[Apple]

[/b][/color] Oh mah gawwdd, you're totally right, haha! I shouldn't overlook things next time when I'm tired- I'll keep that in mind! I'm sorry but I'm agreeing with kohana on this- I'd like your history to be a bit more clear before it gets accepted. Whilst I'm sure shinobi kids might be able to hurt people quite bad if they put enough work in to it, I doubt you'd be able to kill three elders, as Kohana has already stated- And I would suggest you become a full Huyuga rather than half one, because it doesn't really make much sense because coming from a KT you'd be unable to go in to Inuzuka techniques anyway.[/ul]

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I know that as far as the clan its for RP not anything else for her, as for the kills its nearly point blank range with enchant from Hosatsu. there's nothing major on here for relations at all or family-customs, as far as the curse mark goes I doubt the Hyuuga would let someone outside of the clan (IE Inuzuka) be part of the clan without someway to keep them from betraying the byakugan. and lastly I never asked for Main, the second I made the bio people said I had to wait for you(Apple) to chose whether she would be Main or Branch, The only perk of being a Main anyway is 64 and 128 palms, which I dont care about. so in retrospect I dont care if I make Main, never wanted it to begin with.

[~Kohana <3]

The reason why people would say that is because of you have Main Branch techniques in your bio. So of course it'd be assumed that you wanted to be in Main. 64 Palms, 128 Palms, AND Heavenly Spin are all Main Branch techniques.

Further more, I get it was for RP purposes but it also needs to make sense with the standards of the clan/background. So just take out the Palms and Spin, re-distribute your EXP into whatever you'd like and you'll be fine.

Though note that in Scards/Blemishes/etc you have to mention the curse seal that would be on your forehead. Also know that any Main branch member can activate it and cause you pain.

I know this sounds like a lot, Wolfy. But it's just fact. Sorry

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no its not a lot and I appreciate the help but there is no background for family customs on the Hyuuga page so I dont see why it cant be mixed blood, and I didnt mean her mother was an Inuzuka she was just related to them, like in laws for example. also I didnt realize Rotation was Main so I guess I am going Main

[~Kohana <3]

Alright. Well. Again it stands. Main Branch would require two Hyuuga parents. Up to you how you handle this.

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can I make her an illegitimate child? lol or her first mother died

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fixed I guess