Asuka Hyuuga ( Waiting to be Checked )

[Alys]

PERSONOLOGY[/u]

• Name: Asuka Hyuuga
  
• Age: 13
  
• Clan, BL, or Kekkei Touta?:
  • Hyuuga [MAIN] – One of the founding noble families of Konohagakure. Each clan member possess the "Byakugan" or "White Eye." When the "Byakugan" is activated, the clan member gains an extra-sensory perception, which gives them penetrating sight and telescopic vision. This allows them to see the internal chakra circulation system in other beings, and grants the member a near 360° view of their surroundings.
  
  The clan uses this ability in conjunction with their own chakra creating the Jyuuken fighting style, also known as "Gentle Fist". By focusing the chakra to their finger tips, they can press the tenketsu or chakra pressure points of their opponents body. When the finger nears the tenketsu the chakra is forced out, collasping the targetted tenketsu for a period of time.
  
  
• Birth Country – Hi no Kuni ( Land of Fire )
  
• Country and/or Village: Konohagakure [ Village Hidden in the Leafs )
  
• Rank & Profession: Genin
  
• Difficulty Setting: Normal
  
  
• Releases/Senses:
  • Fuuton
  • ??
  • ??
  
  
• Psychical Talents
  • Jyuuken (Gentle Fist)
  
  
• Types:
  • PRIMARY; Ninjutsu
  • SECONDARY; Taijutsu
  • TERTIARY; Genjutsu

PHYSICALITY[/u]

• Height: 150 cm (4'11")
  
• Weight: 38 kg (83 lbs)
  
• Eye Color: Emerald Green
  
• Hair Color: Blond
  
  
• Apparel: Asuka got long blond hair that ends around her knee's, loves wearing cloth that reveals parts of her body she just loves when people can see her, she mostly wears a low cut black shirt with with only Sleeves on her right arm and a rather short skirt the ends a few inches over her knee’s only just covering her panties also in a black color, she wear something looking like bandage around her hands to not break her nails when she train
  
  
• Body Appearance: Slender and Curvy , her body looks like as if she been training to become a model but she just takes good care of her body after training so that she stays beautiful , she’s very athletic and trains hard every day
  
  
• Blemishes & Scars: She got Piercings in her Ears one in each and a tattoo on the upper part of her chest with something looking like a Cross with 4 wings out to each site that she got as a gift from her parents when she graduated the academy
  

COGNITION[/u]

• Personality:
  • Asuka is a loving and caring person who tent to put her beauty before anything if its not for the family, she tent to get angry easy when someone disrespect her and say stupid things about her, she loves her family in the Hyuuga house, and would never have been this good at Ninjutsu if it were not for her family, she got a sister that she cares alot about she likes lovers and plants mostly cause they don't break her nails
  
  
• Alignment:
  • Somewhere between Neutral Evil – Neutral Good but no fully Neutral
  
  
• Allegiance:
  • Konoha
  
  
• Quirks & Tendencies:
  • Short temperd and prefer not to say too much rather just have people look
  
  
• Likes & Dislikes
  • Likes: Training, Sweets, taking care of her body, Family, Cleaning, Flowers
  
  • Dislikes: Bad Weather, People who hurt her Family, People who smells and don’t take care of them self,
  

Asuka's School Year's

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Asuka were born into the proud and honored Hyuuga Family as a part of the Main branch, she did grow up with lots of training to be done from both her mother and father, her mother did try to teach her how to become a good medic while her dad did teach her the Hyuuga's secret arts, she were merely 4 when the training started and she been doing it since that day when she got older around the age of six she started the Konoha ninja academy where her life were about to begin as a ninja her mother and father were proud of her she came home everyday telling new story about what she had learned in the academy someday she came home crying also cause the others had bullied her by pulling her hair or just cause she had broken a nail already at a early age did she like to look beautiful in front of others to make the family look good. Asuka were one of the best in her class at ninjutsu the only one that could were Close to her were some uchiha girl.

Asuka came home from the academy everyday to train with her mother and father in the main house at the Hyuuga District she loved the training but knew that when she became a Genin she would not have much time to train with them anymore cause then she would have a squad to train with instead but they would always be there for her if she needed they were her mother and father after all.

Asuka's mother started teaching her medical jutsu's so that she would become and excellent medic since her mother had seen how much Asuka did love the medical arts and plants, she even bought home a few puppies and cats to try and heal them without luck so she got her mom to help her and a year or two before she graduated the academy she did heal her first puppy, and she were extremely happy that she had done it all by her self, and her mother rewarded her with the tattoo she got on her upper part of her chest.

Mean while she did also train with her dad to learn the Secret arts of Hyuuga she were getting quite good at the Gentle fist style that the Hyuuga did use and only like a two years before she graduated the academy she learned the first step in the Eight Divination Signs that were one of the Hyuuga family's most secret arts some of them so secret that only those from the main branch would get to learn them, and right after she started getting training in how to use them the week after she had graduated the academy she were able to due the 32-palms and it quickly became the strongest jutsu she had for offensive uses.

Asuka's mother and Father were proud that she had became such an strong kunoichi at her young age, they did have high expectation for her when she were going to be on her own feet now as a Genin, she did wear her Headband around her left arm

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ARMAMENTS[/u]

• Primary Weapons: Tanto
  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Melee
  Description: The Tanto is a single or double-edged straight knife no longer than fifteen inches. The tantō was designed primarily as a stabbing weapon, but the edge can be used for slashing as well.
  Cost: 5,000 Ryo
  
  
• Secondary Weapons:
  
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  Senbon (Throwing Needles) X3
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 10 per Pack.
  Description: Senbon were first used by doctors in acupuncture, but due to its reported widespread effectiveness, it was quickly adopted by ninja in order to hit points on the body that can induce paralysis, loss of consciousness, or even death.
  Cost: 200 Ryo per Pack
  
  
  Senbon Launcher
  Rank: C
  Type: Modification
  Special: Launcher holds up to 5 Senbon. Takes up 2 'Pack' slots. Senbon travel 20 meters at double their normal speed before losing effectiveness and crashing.
  Description: Usually hidden on either of the user's forearm, this launcher can be used to send needles at their opponents at higher speeds with better accuracy. Up to five needles can be launched at once, resulting in deadly surprise.
  Cost: 500 Ryo
  
  
  
• Items
  
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  Blank Scrolls
  Rank: C,
  Type: Accessory / Self
  Special: -
  Description: Scrolls remain one of the most important pieces of equipment in a ninja's arsenal. Because of their size, multiple scrolls can be carried into battle in the front pouches of a flak jacket or in a satchel. This will save space and not sacrifice a much needed piece of equipment which may be required later. In the end, the scroll is useful because it allows the ninja to summon creatures, people and items to their aid. There are also larger scrolls that ninja keep on their back, these are notably A and S-ranked.
  Cost: 1,000
  
  
  
• Jutsu
  Doujutsu ( Hyuuga Special Arts )
  
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  Hakke Shouhen (Eight Divination Signs, Creation Rebirth)
  Rank: B
  Type: Offensive / Clan Taijutsu
  Range: See special!
  Chakra: Low
  Special: Creates a hakke field for Jyuuken that extends 5 meters in every direction, plus 1 more meter each time retrained for a maximum of 10 meters.
  Description: The basis of all Gentle Fist techniques relies on the opponent entering the Hakke, or Eight Divination Signs field. Visible only to the user, this circular area is represented by a ying-yang symbol and other clan variations appearing below the opponent they are targeting. With intense training, the Hyuuga will be able to extend their Hakke, thus furthering their reach with all techniques that are executed in conjunction with the field.
  Domain: Hyuuga.
  
  • Hakke Sanjuunishou (Eight Divination Signs, Thirty-Two Palms of the Hand)
  Rank: C
  Type: Offensive / Clan Taijutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Consumption: Chakra: Low; Stamina: Mid
  Special: Each successful set of strikes can seal off one particular type of chakra flow - be it a certain release, genjutsu, or ninjutsu - for up to three posts, plus one more each time retrained. Moves around the Hakke to strike at near-shunshin speeds.
  Description: Once the Hyuuga is comfortable envisioning their Hakke domain and establishing it as their own personal striking grounds, they are taught the art of striking and sealing tenketsu. Moving their hands and arms and bullet like speeds, the Hyuuga extends their palm towards their enemy, and leads with both hands outstretched, so that their fingers land first - 2 strikes, then 4, 8, 16, and finally, 32 tenketsu. As the victim is caught in attack, they are temporarily paralyzed if they are touched even once. Although the result isn't as drastic as 64 or 128 strikes, it can nonetheless close off a specific type of chakra flow within the victim of the Hyuuga's choosing.
  Domain: Hyuuga.
  
  
  Iryou ( Medical Jutsu's )
  
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  Shousen no Jutsu (Mystical Hand Technique)
  Rank: D, C, B, A, S
  Type: Supplementary / Medical Ninjutsu
  Range: Self
  Handseals: Yes.
  Chakra: Low - Very High
  Special: Heals and counters damage equal to highest rank known.
  Description: Shousen Jutsu is one of the most fundamental yet vital Medical Ninjutsu techniques utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-nin can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible.
  Domain: Medics
  
  
  Acdamey Jutsu
  
  
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  Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No.
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: Switch is near-instantaneous. Kawarimi can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained. However, the technique itself can only be used once per turn, regardless of retraining. Requires the user to switch with objects equal or smaller in size; cannot switch with other living people or animals.
  Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack - i.e. exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu.
  
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  Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: Yes.
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: Allows the user to transform into any person, object or animal of normal/small/miniature size. Transformation can be held for one turn, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: Henge no Jutsu is a very basic ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at their respective village's Shinobi Academy. Henge allows the user to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu.
  
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  Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: Yes.
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: Allows the user to create a clone without substance that resembles the user in every way, including retaining its movement speed. Clones cannot mold chakra nor perform jutsu, nor can they harm. Up to one clone can be made, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance that, although easily seen through by those with doujutsu, can fool the normal eye easily. Why? Simply because although without substance, the copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent, though no real damage can be done by it. Finally, as soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu
  
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  Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No.
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: No other technique may be used while creeping. Invisible to the naked eye, but doujutsu and extra-sensorial skill will easily "see through" this technique.
  Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu
  
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  Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
  Rank: E
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Handseals: No.
  Chakra: Very Low
  Special: Ineffective against complex, electronic, or unique binds.
  Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from regular rope binds.
  Domain: Academy Ninjutsu
  
  
  Universal Ninjutsu
  
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  Genjutsu Kai! (Release)
  Rank: D, C, B, A, S
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: Self
  Handseals: Yes.
  Chakra: See special!
  Special: User can only release themselves from illusions of equal or lower rank. Chakra costs is equal to the Genjutsu being dispelled.
  Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
  Domain: Universal Ninjutsu.

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[Apple]

[/b][/color] I'm sorry, but I can't accept you to become a main house hyuuga at the grade that this profile is currently at- Please remove the main house hyuuga techniques from your profile.

• PRIMARY; Taijutsu
• SECONDARY; Iryou
• TERTIARY; Ninjutsu

[2] Your types are ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu. You can place these in any order that you want although keep in mind that whatever order you put them in will decide how powerful you can get in them. ryou isn't a secondary, so please replace it to genjutsu.

[/b][/color] S-Rank!
SECONDARIES CAN LEARN TECHNIQUES UP TO.. B-Rank!
TERTIARIES CAN LEARN TECHNIQUES UP TO.. D-rank!

Be careful which order you place them in, try and think what you want your character to be most powerful at- Nijutsu, taijutsu, or genjutsu? Then work out the same for secondaries. Tertiaries is the area which your character will be not good at at all.[/ul]

[3] I'd like to see a bit more personality since right now all I have is one sentence.


[4] In order to become a medical technique user, you have to be a ninjutsu specialist.


[5] Basically, EXP is how we track power on our site, as so to say. The more EXP you have spent on techniques, the more powerful your character is if you know how to utilize it correctly. As a character who's starting with a Kekkei genkai you can only start off with 250 EXP, and we count techniques like this:

[/b][/color] 5 EXP!
D-Ranks cost: 25 EXP!
C-Ranks cost: 50 EXP!
B-Ranks cost: 100 EXP!
A-Ranks cost: 150 EXP!
S-Ranks cost: 300 EXP![/ul]

As a new character you can't start off with techniques that are higher than B-Ranked. You can use this 250 EXP on your profile to buy as many techniques as you want, permitting that they fit in the 250 EXP range. For example, you could buy two "B" Ranks and one "C" ranked technique for 250 EXP, or ten "D" ranks and one "C" rank- Mix and match to how you like! But please remembe that multi-ranked techniques with ranks that go from D to S (as shown below) are a bit trickier. Instead of paying for just say, the "B" ranked version, you have to pay for all of the ranks underneath it as well, I'll give an example:

Saikan Chuushutsu no Jutsu (Fine Affliction Extraction)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Low - Very High
Special: Rank determines healing capability when dealing with different strengths of poison.
Description: Saikan Chuushutsu no Jutsu is a skill used by medical ninja to remove harmful poisons from a patient's body. The ninja will infuse their chakra into liquid bubble, which they will insert into the patient. They will then use the liquid as a medium to draw out the poison from the cells. This mix can then be removed from the body. Depending on the deadliness of the poison, further treatment with an antidote or medicine may be required.
Domain: Medics

The above means that your someone knows the "B" ranked version. Instead of paying only 100 EXP for the "B" ranked version, because it's a multi-ranked technique, they must pay for the "D" and the "C" version as well, making the total be 175 EXP spent on the above technique, if that makes sense. If you have more questions regarding this (This confused me too at the start!) just ask!
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[Alys]

Thanks for the info, now i know how the Exp system works or atleast some more about it, i get into editing and then send you an inbox message

[Apple]

[/b][/color] You've spent 175 EXP so you have 75 EXP left to spend so that your total is 250. You can choose to spend this 175 on techniques, or you can choose to have it added to your sidebar where it says EXP so then you can use it to spend on techniques later on after your character has been accepted. What do you want to do?[/ul]

[Alys]

there Changed once again

[Apple]

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[~Kohana <3]

Creation Rebirth-100
32 Palms- 50
Mystical Hand- 175
Kai- 25

Total: 350

Sorry, but you have 100 more EXP than you should. I suggest you take away the Mystical Palm B-rank and from there you will fit the 250 requirements. Like Apple said, once you get the hang of it, you'll be fine!

[Alys]

Lol Apple were the one who said i had 100 to little so i change one to a rank higher and now i got 100 to much that means i did get it the first time Darn you Apple for Confusing me

[~Kohana <3]

Alright, everything looks fine, though I do have a question. If you'd like to be a Hyuuga from the Main Branch, I'd suggest really beefing up your personality, appearance, etc and such.

If it doesn't really matter to you then I would put a note in Scars/Blemishes about the curse seal on her forehead.

[Alys]

hmm what do i need to add? since i don't really see what to add more

[Apple]

[/b][/color] Add some information about the Branch family cursed seal on your character's appearance. For instance "Asuka has the Hyuuga Branch Family Cursed seal on her forehead" or something like that

[8] Your character's name is Asuka by the title and her name on the first post; But you refer to her as alys in your writing- Is this a nickname, or a mistake?
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[Alys]

thats cause i changed the name after give me a few sec and i change it but what is it i need to edite to become Main brench ?

[Apple]

[/url] and This as examples of main-house characters who we have on the site at the moment.[/ul]

[Alys]

that profile looks nice, but i don't really see what he got that i don't have on my profile

[~Kohana <3]

Meaning you should also had in a history. Like her childhood, her struggles or no struggles as part of the Main House. You know, what's her story?