kiri-oni stuff.

[ナナシ]

Refill: Nerve Gas

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Rank: B
Type: Modification
Special: Two containers per pack. Each container has enough gas within to be used four times before the Kiri-oni needs a refill. The opponent needs to be exposed to two doses of the gas before the body is considered infected with the gas. Paralysis is a slow process that gets worse before it can get better, and lasts a total of 5 posts (roughly 30 IC seconds). Using this more than once does not stack the effects.

[/b] The nerve gas needs a single turn to affect the brain; no symptoms shown yet.
Post 2: Sites closest to the brain will be affected, namely the upper half of the body. This includes the face, arms, and chest. Movement of the legs is still possible.
Post 3: Full body paralysis ensues, now including the lower half of the body. This includes face, arms, chest, torso, and legs. Movement is impossible without help from an outside source.
Post 4: As the nerve gas starts to wear off, symptoms recede to their former positions. Sites on the upper half of the body will remain paralyzed, while the lower half regains movement ability.
Post 5: The gas needs one last post to work its way out of the body's system. There are no symptoms associated.[/ul]Description: A gaseous formula that can be purchased for use in a Kiri-Oni with gas socket modifications. A set amount of the concentrated mixture is released upon command and can infect the opponent's system by breathing it in. It slowly restricts the communication between the opponent's brain and their nerves, resulting in paralysis. Curiously, internal organs such as the heart and lungs remain unaffected. If the user is not careful, they can easily be affected by the gas as well.
Cost: 4,000 ryo per pack.

Refill: Tear Gas[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Modification
Special: Two containers per pack. Each container has enough gas within to be used four times before the Kiri-oni needs a refill. Symptoms depend upon the affected part of the body. Effects of the tear gas last for 5 posts (roughly 30 IC seconds).
Description: A gaseous formula that can be purchased for use in a Kiri-Oni with gas socket modifications. It is released in a thick spray upon command, and will affect the opponent if it is breathed in or hits the eyes. It works by irritating mucous membranes. If the spray gets in the eyes it will cause severe pain and crying; sight will be difficult. In the nose and lungs, sneezing and dry coughing are more common.
Cost: 4,000 ryo per pack.

Refill: Sulfuric Acid[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Modification
Special: Two containers per pack. Each container has enough liquid within to be used four times before the Kiri-oni needs a refill. Acid wounds can be effectively treated by irrigating the area with large amounts of water. Useable in syringes.
Description: An acidic formula that can be purchased for use in a Kiri-Oni with liquid socket modifications. The acid is released upon command, typically when the opponent has been slashed by the claws. Because the acid has a high exothermic reaction with water in addition to corrosive properties, the burns from this acid are very serious. Additional tissue damage is due to dehydration and particularly secondary thermal damage due to heat liberated by the reaction with water. Needless to say, it has the potential to make even a small cut more serious than it normally would be, although the damage stops after the initial exposure and does not spread.
Cost: 4,000 ryo per pack.

Refill: Epibatidine[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Modification
Special: Two containers per pack. Each container has enough liquid within to be used four times before the Kiri-oni needs a refill. The toxin's effect starts immediately on the opponent's next post and lasts for 5 posts (roughly 30 IC seconds). Because of Epibatidine's lethal symptoms, if one person is injected with three doses--that is, are attacked three separate times with the toxin in one thread--they will die. Successful poison extraction by a medic within 5 posts of the third dose will circumvent this, however. If no medic is located, the opponent dies at the end of the 5th turn. Useable in syringes.
Description: A toxic formula that can be purchased for use in a Kiri-Oni with liquid socket modifications. It is released upon command, typically when the opponent has been slashed with the claws. A biotoxin taken from tree frogs, it is naturally made for the defense of the user. As it spreads through the blood stream, it binds the muscarinic acetylcholine receptors, causing bradycardia partial-paralysis of the respiratory system. In simpler terms, it slows down the beating of the heart and makes it difficult to breathe properly, ensuring the body will not get enough oxygen. Running and intense movement become a chore, if not impossible.
Cost: 4,000 ryo per pack.[/blockquote][/blockquote]
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[ナナシ]

Done.

Only mods who are knowledgeable about chemicals & bio-toxins, please. I really don't want to explain them. But I will if I have to. :C

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[.DEVIOUS]

Ah, poisons... the beginning of the end is upon us! Time to get down and dirty on this, yo.

Nerve Gas: How much of the gas does the person have to be exposed to before they begin to suffer from the nerve gas? Will a single inhale be enough or do they require remaining inside of an area effected with the gas or...? I would honestly prefer a somewhat high level of exposure to the gas simply for the sake of balance.

Tear Gas: I'm pretty much okay with it as it is simply because of the less 'god-mod' level of effect.

Sulfuric Acid: I'm okay with it.

Epiblahblahblah: This needs both a duration of the effect (which you create in your other customs) and a time before the person begins showing the symptoms of the poisoning. How long does it take the person to die after the third strike?

[addy-hime ♥]

Gonna answer this on this account, lazy yo.

Nerve Gas: Per spray, the Kiri-oni releases a set amount of the gas. It's concentrated, so inhaling that amount will cause the effects listed. Any more added in doesn't stack the effect. Any amount of nerve gas can be hazardous to the body and very small amounts can cause worse paralysis than this in real life. Examples being total paralysis of the lungs, heart, etc. Bad. S'why I specifically said no internal organs are messed up.

Epibatidine: It says it lasts 5 posts, but I'll add in something to expand that a bit, like I did with nerve gas. Also, it says they will die in 5 posts after the third strike if they do not get the poison extracted by a medic.

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[.DEVIOUS]

I do understand that a lot of this 'nerfed' from what it would be like in real life, but that being said, the ninja world doesn't have the kind of advanced chemical weaponry that we have. The closest we've seen is an iron poison that paralyzes and then kills the person affected by it (over the course of several days). Obviously, poisons and biochemical warfare exist in the Shinobi world, but for the sake of balance on the site I've asked that some of the stuff be toned down even a little bit more. The Nerve Gas completely removes control of a character, essentially forcing god-modding, and I don't allow those kind of customs to come through without very considerable drawbacks. In this case, I'm asking that the person to be affected be exposed to the Nerve Gas for at least a full post before the symptom list can begin to tick. Otherwise it's too powerful and I can't accept it, no matter its realism.

Epibatidine: I didn't see the first part, but I read it now. Also, I read the part about the medic needing to cure the person within 5 turns, but that doesn't necessarily mean that the person will die ON the fifth turn if the medic doesn't cure it. It just means that after the 5th turn, the symptoms are too advanced for the medic to remove. I understand your thinking behind this too, but it can be confusing if not implicitly stated that at the END of the fifth turn, if the person hasn't been cured by a medical ninja, they will die at that moment.

[addy-hime ♥]

Okay, here we go.

Nerve Gas~ I added in: "The opponent needs to be exposed to two doses of the gas before the body is considered infected with the gas." Also, keep in mind: "If the user is not careful, they can easily be affected by the gas as well." because the kiri-oni are, essentially, short-range weapons. I want to point out that there are ninjutsu and even other weapons (Kyodai Senseu) that can fully paralyze opponents, so this is actually a rather weak version and gives the opponent plenty of time to run away.

Epibatidine~ Fix'd.

[.DEVIOUS]

Mmkay. That's fine. 1.2

[Kii!]

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