Juujin-Ōgi: Jiganeji

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Juujin-Ōgi: Jiganeji (Beast Human Secret Technique: Hell Rotating Fang)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / NinTaijutsu
Range: 30 meter radius
Handseals: no
Chakra: High+Mid
Special: Shreds through 'S' ranked barriers. Because of the stress and strain placed on both their bodies, this jutsu can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: The second final evolution of 'Tsuuga' and the pinnacle of the Dual Rotating Fang. Delivered in a precise, deadly manner, the Inuzuka and their canine, while in the guise of the Juujin Bunshin, grasp their hands together and swing the others body with their claws outstretched, using their chakra reserves in order to rotate as fast and as hard as possible. After gaining momentum in the air, the two till then exert chakra to create a wide spinning saw blade capable of leveling entire battlefields and habitats as well as break through most defenses.
Domain: Inuzuka, Shiyaku (All-Fours) “S” rank, Juujin Bunshin (Man-Beast Clone).

[Tenzō]

What? This is completely unnecessary. Why is this B ranked tech shredding through 'S' ranked barriers? Why does this seem like it was created after reading other customs which recently, out of sheer coincidence, also create saw blades that shred through things? This technique equates to "we're doing the exact same thing as every other damn Inuzuka tech, just REALLY fast this time". How is something a second final evolution? How exactly do they even create the saw blade? If it's formed of their own rotating bodies, and they're moving as fast as they possibly can, then how are they able to aim the technique to hit someone?

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the ranking was a typo before, and its a second final because the two variants of piercing fang is the drill and the saw so since the drill had a final form in the tensoga I made this as the final form of it's saw counter part, the way it hits is the momentum and chakra. so it essentially makes this as this

[addy-hime ♥]

Mirouga (Triple Wolf Fang) basically does the same thing as this, so I can't accept it. As Naitome said, it's unnecessary.

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mirouga makes a saw blade and not a drill?

[addy-hime ♥]

Mirouga doesn't specifically say drill, it says spin. "If Mirouga connects with the target, the opponent is ripped to pieces." So yes, I think your technique basically does the same thing and I'll say again, it's quite unnecessary.

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mirouga is the cerberus version of garouga and wolf fang over fang is a drill too like every other piercing fang

[addy-hime ♥]

Regardless of whether you're making a drill or a saw, Mirouga does literally the same thing as your technique. As Jae has told me, a change of appearance does not mean a change of function. I've made my ruling on it; if you want to get the opinion of another LM, feel free.

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fine with me

[Gentlemanne]

It, effect-wise, does the exact same thing, as said by Addy. I'm agreeing with her. Make some changes to it or I can archive it for you, Wolfy.

[Forsaken]

what changes? not much else I can do to it that will keep it separate from the normal fangs

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fine archive