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[luneth]

Shikami-Te (Hand Of Ankou)
Rank: S
Type: Primary / Melee
Special: While dormant, the razor-sharp, prickly metals lining the knuckles, fingertips, and palm act to stack C-ranked damage onto any physical strike made by the right hand. In need of repair if directly struck by one S-ranked technique. While capable of harnessing nearly any release, it is simply a medium, restricted by its wielder's specific releases. See below for more!

• Due to its nature, the expending of a single 'High' amount of chakra ('Mid' Upkeep) will raise the weapon from its dormant state, then acting as a medium for most types of chakra (no Kekkai Touta), harnessing them, in turn stacking B-ranked elemental damage (lightning, sound vibration, etc.) onto any physical strike made by the right hand (applies to swords as well).
  
  
• As a catalyst and extreme impetus for chakra, feeding the gauntlet a single 'High' amount ('Mid' Upkeep) will give it a push, supplying the weapon with energy, and consequently unleashing its full potential. Depending upon the user's own releases, the gauntlet carries the ability to increase their offensive power by one tier (A-rank max.), and increase range by five meters.
  
  
• Following a 'High' consumption ('Mid' Upkeep), a wide, blade-like beam of pure chakra is capable of being extended out from the gauntlet's four fingertips when elongated (i.e. knife hand/ karate chop form), its maximum length measuring two meters in total, with a speed of two meters per second. The beam is capable of piercing through steel and most armors (non-relic).

[/i][/li][/ul]Description: Appearing to be the combination of both a gauntlet and sap glove, the black material primarily composing this arcane weapon is unknown, though has proven to be extremely responsive when exposed to chakra, and appears/feels to be both durable and flexible. While the specific type is unknown, it is obvious that some kind of metal, its color ranging from deep black to dark grey, lines the palm area, each individual fingertip, and knuckle region in an extremely compacted, barbed like fashion, these spiked, prickly metals protuding anywhere from a quarter inch to half inch in length, while extremely thin in width. It bears several odd markings, though the most prominent and identifiable being a Jashinistic symbol located on its the front. Fitting tightly along the hand's contours, it would seem to be an ordinary black glove from afar, giving it the power of subtlety.
Cost: Obtained via quest. Can't be sold.

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NOTE: The picture is only a general idea of what the weapon looks like, as there were parts I didn't know how to put on it (small spiky metals, etc.), refer to the actual description if you're looking for more detail.

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[King]

1. The speeds for both the first and second bonus isn't going to fly. Despite this being an s-rank weapon, that doesn't mean that the abilities will be all too powerful. It simply means that you have more leeway in being unique with them (which you have been), and more than likely how many of these unique traits your weapon can have. With that said, I want the speeds in both the second and third perk dropped to two meters per second.

2. I don't like the fact that a, roughly, fifteen foot blade of pure chakra, which can pierce most metals (i.e anything non-relic, really) can come from any point in the gauntlet. Instead, I want it to come from the fingers when they're straight (i.e karate-chop hand; you'll essentially be morphing your hand into a sword).

[/b][/color] The blade, it self, needs to be considerably shortened (I think two meters is more than enough). The fact that its chakra means that it has no weight and thusly you can move it without any real penalties from physics. This, in itself, is a monstrous advantage over any and all physical weapons (spare for Kusanagi). Keep that in mind.[/ul]
3. I don't see a duration for how long these effects are in play, so you'll need to clarify that. For instance, if you were to activate the third perk, does the ability to summon that blade of chakra remain constant throughout the remainder of the battle? Or, do you need to feed it a high worth of chakra each time you want to bring the sword out. This question goes for the other abilities, as well.[/justify][/blockquote][/blockquote]

[luneth]

Done, and I really wasn't thinking about how long five meters actually was hehe so, sorry about that. I've also replaced increased speed in the second perk with increased range.

[King]

With the changes in place, it looks far more balanced. Nice work.

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[Trigga]

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