Shurikenjutsu

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Shurikenjutsu is the excellent usage of the aforementioned ninja tool. Those who use this style are known for their quick movements, and ability to perfectly strike their enemy. It may seem weak to those who are not common practitioners, but it can be a deadly skill in the hand of the right ninja. If one can master this talent, they will no longer have to rely on complicated techniques to win. Distance would be best to keep when around them.

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Restrictions

1. These jutsu are available to any and all shinobi.

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MASTERY

• Tier 1 - Sharp Shooter: By training their eyes, they aim to kill with deadly accuracy, and precision, hitting their target. They can now hit targets 5 meters away.
  
  
• Tier 2 - Blind Spot: By becoming one with their surroundings, they are able to hit even locations they cannot see. They can now hit targets 5 meters away.
  
  
• Tier 3 - Quick Reload: By training their arms, and hands, they become able to quickly seize, and launch shuriken. They can now throw up to 5 shuriken per second.
  

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Kamigata Kensei (Upward Feint)
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu / Offensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low
Special: The user is able to hit targets below them.
Description: Upward Feint is a shurikenjutsu that tricks the opponent into believing they’re going to throw shuriken upward when they actually intend to throw them downward. These feints are done quickly as the user can seize shuriken.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Kahou Kensei (Downward Feint)
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu / Offensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low
Special: The user is able to hit targets above them.
Description: Downward Feint is a shurikenjutsu that tricks the opponent into believing they’re going to throw shuriken downward when they actually intend to throw them upward. These feints are done quickly as the user can seize shuriken.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Sakini Kensei (Forward Feint)
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu / Offensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low
Special: The user is able to hit targets behind them.
Description: Forward Feint is a shurikenjutsu that tricks the opponent into believing they’re going to throw shuriken forward when they intend to throw them backward. These feints are done quickly as the user can seize shuriken.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Ushiro Kensei (Backward Feint)
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu / Offensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low
Special: The user is able to hit targets in front of them.
Description: Backward Feint is a shurikenjutsu that tricks the opponent into believing they’re going to throw shuriken backward when they intend to throw them forward. These feints are done quickly as the user can seize shuriken.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Bouseki Boukou (Spinning Assault)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu / Offensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Mid
Special: The user is able to hit everybody around them.
Description: Spinning Assault is a shurikenjutsu that focuses on hitting everybody visible. During a flip, the user will spin in a 360° circle. They will launch however many shuriken from their hands to hit all their targets at once. The accuracy, and precision of these throws are kept. When put together with their overall skills, it can be deadly enough to take out multiple foes.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Suichoku Mekuru (Vertical Flip)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu / Defensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra: Mid
Special: The user is able to dodge, and use another shurikenjutsu at the same time.
Description: Vertical Flip is a shurikenjutsu that involves dodging, and striking at the same time. If the user is under attack, they can flip forward or backward, and throw shuriken. They can do this without losing their accuracy, and precision, and works better with those have techniques to land.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

Suihei Mekuru (Horizontal Flip)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu / Defensive
Range: -
Handseals: No
Chakra:Mid
Special: The user is able to dodge, and use another shurikenjutsu at the same time.
Description: Horizontal Flip is a shurikenjutsu that involves dodging, and striking at the same time. If the user is under attack, they can flip left or right, and throw shuriken. They can do this without losing their accuracy, and precision, and works better with those have techniques to land.
Domain: Shurikenjutsu.

[addy-hime ♥]

The only thing I can say right now is that this needs to be a Taijutsu fighting style. Right now it's in neither Nin nor Tai, but it needs to fall into one of those for classification purposes. It's certainly not Ninjutsu.

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[Pwn]

Fixed.

[addy-hime ♥]

Masteries

• While I personally do not mind the way you've set it up here (with a technique to go with each mastery), it's not the system we've been working with. Each mastery should be almost like a passive ability, or "technique" itself. For example, for Tier 2 you could instead say "By training their eyes, they aim to kill with deadly accuracy and precision. The user can now throw their shuriken up to 5 meters away without losing any of their natural accuracy."
  
  You'll have to do that with all three of them. I can tell you now that Tier 2 and Tier 3 can both have the range of their 'S' rank technique, but for Tier 1 you may need to dial it down. I think at most they should be throwing 5 shuriken per hand. I also encourage you to make the accuracy mastery Tier 1 and the amount of shuriken they can throw Tier 2 or 3 (3 preferably), because of how awsm it is for the style in general.

In General

• Upward Feint, Downard Feint, Forward Feint, and Backward Feint are all unnecessary techniques. The same action can be done through RP without the need of buying them.
  
  
• Vertical Flip and Horizontal flip can also be done via RP. However, I would assume that you would lose a bit of accuracy during a flip. If you want to keep these two techniques, I recommend fleshing them out more and giving them some actual use, like saying that you can preserve your accuracy during the flip (which is not implied, ever).
  
  
• You need to add some more techniques to this if you want it to be accepted as a fighting style with masteries. Right now all but 1-3 of them aren't necessary, so it's practically empty.

Spinning Assault

• The biggest issue here is that you don't give ANY detail. Sure, I get that they spin. But how do they hit everyone around them if, say, they're only using one shuriken? Or two? While simplicity is nice, a complete lack of detail is not.

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[Sharkk]

Imo should be Tai prim.

[addy-hime ♥]

Sharkk, no, and please don't post in Customs.. you can PM suggestions to the creator. I see absolutely no reason why throwing shuriken should be Tai Prime.

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[Jae]

Sept 7, 2012 8:02:59 GMT -8 addy-hime ♥ said:

Sharkk, no, and please don't post in Customs.. you can PM suggestions to the creator. I see absolutely no reason why throwing shuriken should be Tai Prime.

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Itachi was highly proficient in Shurikenjutsu and is anything but Tai Prime. I side with Addington.

[Pwn]

Fixed.

[vegapunk]

Still don't really understand these masteries? You need to edit them according to what Addy has mentioned;

While I personally do not mind the way you've set it up here (with a technique to go with each mastery), it's not the system we've been working with. Each mastery should be almost like a passive ability, or "technique" itself. For example, for Tier 2 you could instead say "By training their eyes, they aim to kill with deadly accuracy and precision. The user can now throw their shuriken up to 5 meters away without losing any of their natural accuracy."

You'll have to do that with all three of them. I can tell you now that Tier 2 and Tier 3 can both have the range of their 'S' rank technique, but for Tier 1 you may need to dial it down. I think at most they should be throwing 5 shuriken per hand. I also encourage you to make the accuracy mastery Tier 1 and the amount of shuriken they can throw Tier 2 or 3 (3 preferably), because of how awsm it is for the style in general.

[KEITH]

Master Tier - Sixth Sense: After many long days and hours of practicing, you have been brought to the pinnacle of your skill with Shuriken. You a true warrior, a true shinobi - you only have to see the battlefield once before you create a complete mental map of it within your head, allowing you to close your eyes, and move about the area as you would like, and remember where your targets are. Even if it is a moving target, if they are moving in a straight path or a pattern that you can predict, even while your eyes would be closed, you could predict what moves or movements they would make (providing they don't metagame and change it up), and strike them down accurately with your shuriken jutsu. Your corporal eyes may be closed, by your mind's eye is wide open.

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[Pwn]

Fixed.

[Naitome]

Nothing about this has really been fixed. As Addy said before, a vast majority of this can be done through competent RP, and the ones that can't are basically accuracy boosts to allow you to hit something you couldn't conceivably hit anyway. The first four techs are useless, the last two techs are useless, the only one that could work in any real way would be the Spinning Assault, and it lacks any sort of actual description of how any of it is actually done. The masteries are poorly written and don't include much of anything that would even make sense for a Mastery to begin with. On top of all that; this style as 250 exp worth of techs and has masteries. That's a bit silly. Nobody in their right mind would waste masteries or buy them for something like this, and a genin shinobi's first character would be able to master the entire style with a quarter of their 1000 exp. No, No, and No.

My advice would be to condense all this down to a single technique, that allowed you to spin and throw shuriken at the same time with some degree of accuracy. But even then, you'd have to find the ability to actually write out a proper technique description. As it is;

1/2 Denied.

[addy-hime ♥]

If this is not edited in some way within 48 hours, it will be archived.

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[addy-hime ♥]

Archived.