Fuuton: Kaze Shuriken no Jutsu

[primadonna]

Fuuton: Kaze Shuriken no Jutsu (Wind Release: Art of the Wind Shuriken)
RANK: B
TYPE: Ninjutsu / Offensive
RANGE: 20 meters
HANDSEALS: Yes
CHAKRA: High
SPECIAL: Allows the user to imbue one shuriken, plus one more each time the technique is retrained, with rapidly spinning wind with great cutting properties. Each additional shuriken enhanced in this way costs an additional High amount of chakra, though the user only has to perform the handseals for one until the chain of created wind shuriken is broken. Maximum of five shuriken can be learned.
DESCRIPTION: The user performs the required handseals and then inhales. Then, pulling out shuriken from the user's pack, the user begins to spin the shuriken around a finger and then exhales onto the shuriken, creating a mass of sharp, rapidly-spinning wind about a meter in diameter. The user can then throw the shuriken towards the opponent at high speeds. If the user has relearned the technique, he may exhale onto another shuriken and throw it, up to a maximum of five times. The whole process takes very little time to complete, allowing the user to throw several shuriken per turn should they have the technique learned multiple times. Once thrown, the shuriken's path cannot be changed, but the user can use the meter length of the shuriken plus the enhanced cutting power to take opponents by surprise.
DOMAIN: Kiroko Gaijuu 'B' Rank. Kaiten Shuriken.

[Gally G6]

2 main concerns before I look at this further:

*How long does it take (in seconds) to cover a single shuriken in the wind chakra?

* What can the wind-shuriken cut/break through? Does this wind chakra add any durability to the shuriken itself?

[primadonna]

1) I don't really have an exact speed. The user would just perform the handseals, breath in, and then breath onto the Shuriken. All in all, it wouldn't take much time. The technique itself is mirrored after the one that Danzo used in the anime, and it took him almost no time to launch several of them.

2) Considering its a B rank technique, I'd think that that'd state how much damage they can do.

[vegapunk]

For the points made by Gally above, edit into your special that the users highest 'Wind Dominion' rank determines the speed and damage caused by the shuriken (I know there are parts in the description but that should be in the special). After that you should be good for approval.

[adero]

Apr 25, 2012 15:55:25 GMT -8 vegapunk said:

For the points made by Gally above, edit into your special that the users highest 'Wind Dominion' rank determines the speed and damage caused by the shuriken (I know there are parts in the description but that should be in the special). After that you should be good for approval.

They need to edit or delete the range section of the template then for this particular custom so there's not two conflicting statements. Either follow the 20 meter range the creator suggested or let the dominion decide.

[chiatsuki]

All techniques, unless in the category of a weapon, follow the speed / range of their dominion unless speed isn't one of the things clarified within a release dominion (such as doton).

[primadonna]

I was under the impression that the Dominion gave the maximum of what your techniques could be, not necessarily what all of them were. That being said, as a B rank tech, it requires B Rank Dominion, which grants a maximum of 30 meters in range. I don't really think that the technique should be that long in range, thus I'd prefer leaving it at 20. I also don't want the damage of the technique to be based on Wind Dominion, I'd rather it be based on the Rank of the technique. I'll modify the Special to say that the speed is based on the user's Dominion so that it's in the Special as well as the Description, but other than that there's no real point to editing anything else.

[vegapunk]

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[Not Masakuni]

I want it.

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[KEITH]

Apr 30, 2012 9:40:24 GMT -8 Not Masakuni said:

I want it.

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