The blades of vengeances have fallen swiftly. The shinobi are no more as 'Absolute Justice' has returned...now, it is the Samurai that rule the Five Major Nations!
But at what cost? Have they become the very thing that they despised the most...? Heroes and villains seem to change roles every day, but one thing is for certain - we yearn for our freedom, for days gone by where we flew the skies unhindered.
Just keep in mind that, without a water source (either already present, i.e. a lake or such) or created by a jutsu, this technique cannot occur (all suiton jutsu need a water source).
As for everything else, I dont' really see any other problems. I'm going to wait for another mod's opinion on the technique being personal before I give a final say. Otherwise, it looks fine (unless mods have something to add).
I would feel more comfortable if the rank reflected which rank of jutsu can be reflected. i.e. D rank can only reflect D rank techniques, while S rank can deflect S and below.
I know this is a canon jutsu, but can you please add a little further info on what exactly can be reflected? Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Ninjutsu?
If the technique used by the enemy is a long range technique (i.e. the Raiton technique Sousagatakoushi no Jutsu "Thunder Storm technique"), would the technique still create a clone of the opposing user, or just reflect the technique?
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Dohenshitsu no Jutsu (Earthen Degeneration Technique) - A rank Saton Ryouuken in the domain at least, 1500 exp in Saton. Give this a use limit (I suggest the common 1 user per thread, plus one more each time retrained).Very High chakra, please ^^
Tongari Suna Enchou (Fine Sand Extension) - Just to make sure you say the weapons double each time. does this mean (1/5/10, then 2/10/20, 3/15/30, etc. ) or are you implying (1/5/10, 2/10/20, 4/20/40, etc). Clarify that please, and make a chart to show what each retraining gives you. Bullets or howeve you iwsh to format it is fine wth me - Can the weapons be shot from the ground? If so how many at one time? When the user uses all the weapons created, can they create more, or is this more of a one-thread use technique? When you say extensions, what do you mean? -For chakra, since it involves making numerous weapons stack (if it doubles, this shoudl most definitely be included then). bump the chakra requirement up one rank when traning reaches a certain (so the first, second and third times this technqiue is learned, chakra cost is High. once fourth time is reached (this would mean 4 & 5 become Very High cost)
Sabaku Kasumi no Jutsu (Desert Cloud Technique) - There is a technique very much like this in the Saton index, called Suna Shigure (sand shower). If you want to stick with the sandstorm idea, im more than willing to see wher eyou might go with thta. otherwise this one's a no go. sorry :/