Striking Ability

[Forsaken]

Shin Gurando (True Ground)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Handseals: No
Chakra: Low, Mid, Mid+Low, High, High+Mid
Special: Takes in and redirects raiton attacks into the ground minimizing the damage to a numb feeling in the point of impact for 1 second plus another for each rank higher than D-rank. Must have the rank equivalent to the raiton attack on the user.
Description: After becoming adept at the art of lightning the user becomes more aware of the electrical impulses in and around them. One of the unique abilities of a Thunder Master is the ability to redirect the raiton chakra that would preside around them into the ground minimizing damage to but a fraction of what it originally would be leaving slight numbness within their nerves.
Domain: Raiton, Lightning Dominion of equal rank, 1 mastery in Raiton.

Thunder Raven's Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / NinTaijutsu
Range: 3 meters
Handseals: yes
Chakra: Mid+Low [initial+Low upkeep]
Special: Creates 3 meter long blades from the back of the user's forearms out of solid raiton. These specialized blades can slice through anything at "B" rank. It will also numb in addition to cutting for one second plus another for each rank the user's Lightning Dominion is above “B” rank.
Description: After becoming adept at the art of lightning the user becomes more aware of the electrical impulses in and around them. One of the unique abilities of a Thunder Master is the ability to solidify the fleeting flash of lightning into blades of powerful raiton chakra. These blades birthed of plasma will slice just as a normal blade would with the added effect of raiton's numbing ability.
Domain: Raiton, Lightning dominion “B” rank, 1 mastery in Raiton.

Plasma Coil
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Counter-Offensive / Trap
Range: 3 meters starting plus another 3 for each rank.
Handseals: yes
Chakra: Low, Mid, Mid+Low, High, High+Mid
Special: Creates a trap of Raiton within and object or surface then with a single activating seal they will create a 3 meter radius blast with the object at the epicenter. Charge will disappear after 5 turns, no exceptions.
Description: After performing the seals the user's hand will glow a bright blue. Once this part is complete the user will touch an object charging it with the Raiton that had been in their hand. This unique technique will allow the user to remotely detonate this electrical charge to create a wide blast of electrical energy shocking and slightly numbing anything within the blast range.
Domain: Raiton, Lightning Dominion of equal rank.

[addy-hime ♥]

True Ground

• Why would the numbing effect last the more you train it? Lol. Unless this is really bad wording, then I just don't understand the logic at all.
  
  
• A technique like this is actually really good, but it needs to be fleshed out. I'm not going to accept it unless the rank of the Raiton that one can conduct into the ground is the same as the user's rank of this tech.

Thunder Raven's Claw

• First of all, there is no such thing as "solid" Raiton.
  
  
• I would prefer it if you made it so that they can slice through anything under 'B' rank, since that's what the technique is used for. I really hate that everyone bases the power off of the dominion. That works for some techniques, but not all. This is one that does not.

Lightning Beast Running

• I just don't like this technique at all. We already have a Raiton one that creates tigers that work better than this. That aside, I HATE the idea of you giving these wolves speed at twice the dominion. Raiton is already one of the fastest, especially with the current Tier 3 mastery. So, no.

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[Forsaken]

fixed

true ground: the higher and higher numbness is because you still get hit with the move you just move the damaging lightning to the ground, so the numbing is replacing the damage you wouldve taken otherwise.

claw: fixed the cutting and solid parts, would the numbness=dominion part still be alright? Ill get rid of it if not.

[addy-hime ♥]

Thunder Raven's Claw

• Yeah, I'm okay with the numbing. That's only 3 seconds max.

Lightning Beast Running

• You still haven't removed this.

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[Forsaken]

fixed

[addy-hime ♥]

1/3, unless anyone else has a problem.

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[vegapunk]

Not sure about the masteries but 2/3

[Gentlemanne]

3/3