Ranton Vol 1. Bit

[iseelanden]

Kyodai rēzā-hō (Massive Laser Cannon)(Selfish)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Kekkei Genkai
Range:Highest Joukyuu Sutomu Keiro (Advanced Storm Channeling)
Charge Time: 4 seconds
Chakra: Highx2
Special: Kyodai rēzā-hō doesn’t require any seals it only require the user to hold the hand in the form of a gun while it charges before firing. Kyodai rēzā-hō Also has the ability pierce A Rank barriers and below, the actual size of the beam is limited to half the users Maximum Storm channeling range.
Description: A technique developed in the heart of Kirigakure a technique that requires keen Chakra molding ability, which is why most people aren’t able to perform these techniques. Instead of handseals the user is able to hold their hand in the form of a gun while the technique charges on the tip of their finger, Once the chakra is comprised and molded complete into the shape of a small spear on the tip of the users fingers he’s able to fire a linear beam directly at his opponents.
Domain: Ranton / Oshe, Shōrai/ Kyodai rēzā-hō

Kyodai bakuhatsu rēzākyanon (Massive explosive Laser Cannon)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Kekkei Genkai
Range:Highest Joukyuu Sutomu Keiro (Advanced Storm Channeling)
Handseals: see special
Charge Time: 4 seconds
Chakra: Massive
Special: Kyodai bakuhatsu rēzākyanon doesn’t require any seals it only require the user to hold their hand in the form of a gun while it charges before firing. Kyodai bakuhatsu rēzākyanon Also has the ability pierce S Rank barriers and below, unlike the base technique this beam fires off with girth of 5 meters but once it makes contact with whatever its target is it causes a massive explosion that can measure up to 30 meters
Description: A technique developed in the heart of Kirigakure a technique that requires keen Chakra molding ability, which is why most people aren’t able to perform these techniques. Instead of handseals the user is able to hold their hand in the form of a gun while the technique charges on the tip of their finger, Once the chakra is comprised and molded complete into the shape of a small spear on the tip of the users fingers he’s able to fire a linear beam directly at his opponents. Once the Ranton beam makes contact with its target it expands on contact up to 30 meters.
Domain: Ranton / Oshe, Shōrai/ Kyodai rēzā-hō

[Hotaru]

These need higher chakra costs. B's to at least High. A's to at least Highx2, S's to massive.

[tigaevo]

fixed

[Hotaru]

-General note. Please remove the coloring from the technique names. If these get indexed, the coloring will have to be removed by a staff member, so lets just nip that in the bud now.

1) This needs a concrete charge time assigned to it. Also, remove the reference to a gun. Since they dont exist in naruto, it would be better to describe it another way.

2) Same note about guns as above.

3) 1|2 denied. Though its a technically sound jutsu, its way too generic of a skill to merit being placed in an advanced release. Advanced release techniques are largely limited to aspects unique to that discipline, like your laser techniques.

[iseelanden]

Fixed -

But I would like to ask if I could keep the reference to the gun because there is a cannon technique that makes the same reference. Water Gun Technique

-Also these are selfish techs...... lol

[Hotaru]

1.3

[Naitome]

You can only submit one selfish technique a month, so either get rid of one and wait until a month is over to submit it, or make one a universal technique. Clearly mark it with (Selfish) and not your name.


For whichever of these you stick with, how fast does the laser finger gun move?

[tigaevo]

Well there isn't an actual speed of any of the other Ranton techniques...... and ok i'll remove one..

[Hotaru]

sorry nai.

i actually updated the rules to allow 1 set per month.

go ahead and unstrike it and 1.3 stands.

[Naitome]

No to Advanced Releases having sealless techs, especially when the A ranked version and the S ranked version have the exact same charge time, and its only 4 seconds. We're also trying to move away from even the concept of A and S 'Ranked' Barriers; a barrier is just a barrier against what it defends from, thats it. Your storm release technique is not, for instance, going to pierce through Susano'o. So reword both of these techniques in keeping with movement towards this new system.

[iseelanden]

Just archive it..

[Comatose]

As you wish. Archived.