Moar Medic Techniques

[Exar Kun]

Name: Guardian Sphere
Rank: B,A,S
Type: Ninjutsu; Defensive
Range: 3
Special: By forming handseals, the user can create a chakra shield that has a radius of 3 meters and provides a limited protection from chakra related techniques. Guardian Sphere will protect the user from techniques that are of equal rank to the rank of Guardian Sphere learned, and below. Any technique that is higher than the maximum rank learned will shatter the shield, causing a chakra backlash that will stun the user with a searing headache for a full post. The shield does not protect against taijutsu regardless of the rank. Any taijutsu attack will pass through the shield without destroying it. The user as well as anyone else may freely use techniques inside the bubble, once initially cast the shield acts as a passive technique, however in addition to the initial chakra cost to perform the technique and the required upkeep chakra cost per turn, all ninjutsu used while the shield is still up costs twice as much chakra. The user cannot leave the shield, doing so causes it to dissipitate, but anyone else can freely enter or exit the shield at their own volition.

Description: A technique designed to protect others, the Guardian Sphere is a major crux of many medical ninja’s arsenal due to its life saving abilities. By forming the required handseals, the user of this jutsu will emit a light blue, semi-transparent sphere of chakra from their body, with themselves as the epicenter. This sphere will protect the user and anyone inside its radius from a certain amount of harm, for a limited time. Once the sphere is cast, the user can freely move around within it and even perform techniques, however, Guardian Sphere is one of the most taxing techniques within the medical profession. Due to its nature, it plays havoc on a shinobi’s chakra molding abilities, and in addition it is useless against all attacks that are not imbued with chakra.
Domain: Medical Ninjutsu. Must have 500 experience in medical techniques to learn.




Name: Guardian Sphere Radius Extension
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Supplementary
Range: 1
Special: By learning this technique the user can increase the radius of their Guardian Sphere technique by one meter. This technique can be learned an infinite number of times.
Description: Powerful medics can, with practice, make their Guardian Sphere even more powerful than it already is. Dedication to the art can result in the increasing of the size of Guardian Sphere.

[Exar Kun]

This is basically completed; aside from the critiquing, though, I would appreciate it if you guys could help me with naming some of these techs. I created names for them all but most of them (all of them) are boring and uninspired, so any suggestions are appreciated.

In addition, I will, at some undefined point in time, rewrite the first technique's description to be more stream-lined and more sensible. Maybe. If it's fine as is I'll just leave it alone.

[-vince]

Don't get why the first, and last 2 are medic only. Explain.

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[Exar Kun]

Regarding the first and last technique, it's because I want medics to not suck? haha.

If I had to throw out some kind of IC reason, I could add in to the descriptions that due to to the heavy chakra usage they require the pristine chakra control of a medic, or something, if you'd like. It's kind of a difficult question to aanswer because all techniques that are medical should technically just be universal ninjutsu, since at the end of they day you don't need a release or a BL or a clan ritual to use them, just chakra. I created these for medics because I want medics to not be useless in a fight and have some active defensive options, not just reactive like healing, and also for them to be able to create some breathing room to heal people int he middle of a fight.

In regards to the third one, Earth Shaker, it's medical only because 1. It's a branch-off of the 2nd technique, and 2. It's a canon medical technique that I just kind of modified. Painful sky leg.

[-vince]

Understandable, I'll give them a good look over and post again, or edit, with an update.

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[Exar Kun]

Much appreciated, sir.

[Exar Kun]

Talked with Fina briefly in the c-box, and he's outlined some changes for me to make. Give me a few days to handle that.

[Exar Kun]

Changes have been made. I still just need a fucking name. xD

[DAVID BOWE]

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[Exar Kun]

To the first question, it only applies to the user, since he/she is the one casting the technique. To the second, I put it as limited because the chakra drain is enormous and it will most likely eventually get destroyed or willingly ended. I can make that clearer in the effect, if you'd like.

And, for the the third question, the second jutsu was originally apart of the technique. Fina specifically requested that it be made its own technique, so my hands were kind of tied in that respect. -shrug-

[Exar Kun]

Jesus, guys. >___>

[☆ F ☆]

Sorry for the delay, buddy! Just give this sucker a name, pretty it up, and...


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[DAVID BOWE]

[/s]. Put a round length on the technique if it’s not destroyed since it’s so chakra draining. That’s however all I’m looking for. Once you do that and change the names PM me or something and I’ll move this over to accepted.
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[.DEVIOUS]

Did you do what Shibu asked?

[Exar Kun]

The technique doesn't have a round limit, you can keep it up as long as you have the chakra to do so. As far as how long it would take for one to run out of chakra, well, that's up to the honor system, I'd assume? It would depend on how much chakra a user has, plus what rank techniques he's using within the sphere,how many techs, what rank of this ability he's using,a buncha stuff. Also, changed the name. Dull I know, but whatever. Not everythang's gotta be flashy!