1 kenjutsu tech.

[Icarus]

Strength Training: Strong Hand Sword Wielding[/u]
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
Range: 0~5 Ft.
Special: Allows the user initially to wield two handed swords with one hand as quick as a one handed sword. Each time retrained the sword can be swung faster and with more force.
Description: Through intense training the user can compensate for wielding a sword that would make them lack in speed such as a naginata, claymore, or a longsword. Through this special strengthening the user is able to wield swords that would normally be cumbersome in two handed form in one hand easily.
Domain: Kenjutsu. 2H swords

D: Speed(0.80x Normal ) Force(1.20x Normal )
C: Speed(0.90x Normal ) Force(1.40x Normal )
B: Speed(1.0x Normal) Force(1.60x Normal )
A: Speed(1.1x Normal) Force(1.80x Normal )
S: Speed(1.25x Normal) Force(2.0x Normal )

[Sayomi]

1.2

[addy-hime ♥]

2/2.

[.DEVIOUS]

Hey there. I'm bringing this back out because I spotted something that I didn't like.

This is a multi-rank Jutsu that doesn't really give any definitive reasons for it being multi-ranked. Although you state that you swing faster and stronger, you never state how much faster or how much stronger it gets with each retraining. I would probably like to say that at D and C ranks you can wield the 2handed weapons imperfectly, and thus you're slower than you would normally be. At B rank you could wield it like you'd wield a normal 1hand weapon, and then finally at A and S you're more proficient and can swing faster - but I'd still need to know how much faster/strong it gets. Things need to be clearly defined or otherwise they're too open-ended and can be abused later and make rulings by the battle moderators too difficult.

[Icarus]

Yeah, sorry about that. I'll add in a chart
Okay thats done, feel free to correct. On the speed and force I just gave a rough guess.

[☆ F ☆]

After thought we don't have a system of numerical speed and strength increases, and we don't plan to add one. It adds an unwanted level of specificity that's gonna force a lot of other things to get numerical and technical, when we're an honor based, free flowing RP board.

Try again. With the strength increases, try to play with the difference in ranks and such. Speed wise...? Not sure, considering you're encroaching on the Gates and other specialized high speed movements with a single sword tech.

[Icarus]

If its clearing any confusion im not talking about actually moving at different speeds but at swinging. But I can take out the speeds and just say at like C rank the user no longer is inhibited by the single handed wielding of the two handed sword and can swing it like a normal kenjutsu user does with a katana.

[Kii!]

I think the problem here is with the numbers themselves (specifically decimal numbers, such as 1.25). This adds a level of specificity to combat that's unwanted; "I swing .25 times faster than you, so I win," you know?

So, while it needs to be precise, there's a line. Try something like "swings with the speed and force of one rank lower than the learned level." You can get more specific with the ranks and details, but it's much easier if the force and speed is related to a universal system, in this case power/speed using rank.