Iwagakure Techniques [Finished]

[Ginjou]

Doton Jutsu

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Doton: Iwa no Ninkizai Oginai [ Ninja Tools Replenish from Stone ]

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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary | Ninjutsu
Range: See Special
Special: Can pull items from an area equal to the highest rank of Earth Dominion known. Can replenish three packs of either kunai, shuriken or senbon from the earth. User cannot add equipment above the number of such equipment that they had at the start of the thread. Equipment disintegrates at the end of the thread, regardless of how the thread ends. Can only be used for that thread.
Description: Using earth and stone, the user can create shuriken, kunai and senbon to replenish their stock for a battle. Of course, this comes at a chakra cost and after a while, the equipment disintegrates.
Domain: Doton, Earth Dominion

Mogura Tataki no Jutsu [ Whack-A-Mole Technique ][/u]
Rank: D
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10m
Special: User moves at very high speeds underground, and also pops up very quickly, making them very hard to strike. This really has no use in combat, other than annoying your opponent and is meant as a joke technique.
Description: By using Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique to move around the battle field, the user pops up in front of their target before whacking them with a stick.
Domain: Doton, Hiding like A Mole technique required, Iwagakure

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Tsuchi Tettsui [ Earth Hammer ]

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Rank: C
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5m
Special: Must be used while the Domu is active on the user. Hammer is roughly the size of a head. Hammer can be broken by Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of equal rank. Can break through shields and armour of an equal or lesser rank. Hammer lasts for 3 turns plus one more every time re-trained.
Description: The user utilizes the earth armour of Domu to create a hammer from stone. This hammer is heavy and powerful, capable of destroying shields and armour.
Domain: Doton, Domu rank 'C' required, Iwagakure

Tsuchi Mori [ Earth Lance ][/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10m
Special: May extend up to five meters from the origin point at the speed of a kunai. Requires Domu of rank 'B' to be active at time of creation. Can be broken by Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of equal rank. Ability to pierce through shields, walls and armour is affected by rank. It is able to pierce through shields, armour etc. of equal rank or less but any that are a rank above will shatter the lance instead. Lance may last for 3 turns plus one more each time retrained.
Description: Using chakra, the shinobi will create a long, pointed lance-like mass of earth and stone from the Domu, capable of extending it very high speeds and impaling targets.
Domain: Doton, Domu rank 'B' required, Iwagakure

Tsuchi Kaisaku Shuuren [ Earth Excavation Drill ][/u]
Rank: A, S
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5m
Special: Requires Domu of rank 'A' or 'S' to be active at time of creation. Can be broken by Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of equal rank but only when not spinning. Ability to pierce through shields, armour and walls is affected by rank. It is able to pierce through walls, armour and shields of equal rank or less when spinning. 'C' rank chakra drain for the user each turn it is spinning. May spin for one turn plus one more each time retrained, with a cooldown of turn where it is not spinning. Overall, the drill lasts 3 turns plus one more each time retrained.
Description: An advancement of the Tsuchi Mori technique, the user essentially uses chakra to cause the lance to spin rapidly, which in turn makes it perfect for breaking through armour, shields and other defensive techniques. Though, it has one more difference to the Tsuchi Mori, in the form of it not being able to extend, while the Tsuchi Mori can.
Domain: Doton, Domu of rank 'A' required, Tsuchi Mori required, Iwagakure
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Tsuchi Shuriken Kansei [ Earth Shuriken Trap ][/u]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10m
Special: Shuriken trap is designed to stop movement and allow for the user's escape and therefore stops the opponents movement for one turn from the force of the shuriken tearing into their skin. Five secondary weapons may be placed at first, with
Description: The user forces their chakra underground into an area and leaves it, making it very sensitive to pressure from someone walking or stepping on it. The user then programs the chakra to create shuriken made of earth or stone and then fire upwards at the pressure on it's surface, causing the target to become a human pin cushion full of shuriken, causing serious damage and also stopping their movement.
Domain: Doton, Earth Dominion, Iwagakure

Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu [ Earth Release: Hidden Among Rocks Technique ][/u]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary | Defensive | Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: User may stay hidden for 1 turn plus one more every time retrained. If there is a rock or earth surface within 10m of the user, they may transfer themselves into that rock or earth surface, but this can only be used once per thread plus one more every time retrained.
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.
Domain: Doton, Earth Dominion rank 'B' or above, Iwagakure

Goremu no Jutsu [ Golem Technique ][/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5m
Special: Can defend against Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of equal rank or less. May consume binding techniques that are of at least a lower rank. Does not require handseals. Attacks with 'B' rank strength. Must stay connected to user's body via the mouth. Does not require knowledge of Earth Dominion due to the fact that the earth is produced in their own body using chakra. Golem may be active for three turns plus one more each time retrained.
Description: This technique allows the user to expel a large creature composed of rock from their mouth which will stay connected to their mouth. The golem has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to bite and tear off an opponent's flesh with its mouth and hands, respectively. It is also very durable, able to withstand a plethora of strong attacks without budging. This makes the golem ideal for serving as both an ally and as a shield.
Domain: Doton, Iwagakure

Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu [ Earth Release: Aggravated Rock Technique ][/u]
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Hand's reach
Special: Requires no hand seals but costs chakra equal to a rank 'S' technique. When the petrification is complete, the target is killed instantly as the rock crumbles. It takes three turns for the technique to fully petrify it's target. The user cannot move or use any other technique while this is active and must keep contact between themselves and the target at all times. If the technique is cancelled as it is in the process of petrifying it's target, the target will simply be stuck in a coat of rocks that are approximately the toughness of a rank 'C' technique. Target's weight is doubled every turn it is trapped in the technique. May also be used on objects and liquids such as water but not on air, fire or lightning, as they do not have a physical form and are simply energy or substances with molecules too far apart to control.
Description: This technique allows the user to petrify whatever or whoever is touching him and causes it to start to crumble. The technique also seems to increase the weight of the object that's petrified.
Domain: Doton, Earth Dominion rank 'A' or above, Iwagakure, Requires Kage permission to learn

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I realize it says WIP, but you should put Iwagakure in the Domain if these are Iwagakure only jutsu.

[Ginjou]

Genjutsu

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Ishikure Amadare [ Pebble Raindrops ]

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Rank: C
Type: Touch | Genjutsu
Range: Hands Reach
Special: Any who are caught within this Genjutsu have the sensation of pebbles raining on their skin, causing them to feel uncomfortable and stopping their concentration. The target is prone to making mistakes due to the distraction.
Description: Activated through skin contact, this Genjutsu gives the target a sensation of being buried under one million pebbles and having small specks of stone bouncing off their skin, making it hard for them to concentrate and allowing the user to get the upper hand, usually used to slow down a faster opponent.
Domain: Genjutsu Sense 'Touch', Iwagakure

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The handmouths are currently being made by Fina, I believe.

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Taijutsu

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Fuhen Iwaheki [ Immovable Stone Wall ]

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Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive | Taijutsu
Range: Hands reach
Special: Blocks any Taijutsu strike of equal or lower rank for two turns. The user cannot use any other techniques or attack in any way when using this and movements must be kept to an absolute minimum.
Description: Based upon the concept of minimal movement to focus and avoid attacks, this is a good form to use when only facing one or two enemies. This is achieved through moving only the minimal amount to avoid attacks, so that energy is conserved and the user is able to quickly avoid one attack and then be in a position to avoid the next. Though, with training it can be used to avoid attacks from a group of enemies, even an army if used properly. Despite this, this technique is only a prelude to the actual Fighting style known as Fuhen Kanaheki [ Immovable Iron Wall ].
Domain: Taijutsu Primary or Secondary, Iwagakure

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Tsuchi Shuriken Kansei [ Earth Shuriken Trap ]: The level of complexity this technique creates is more than D Rank, likely C Rank. Create a maximum number of secondary weapons that you can fire at the target and I'm okay with it when you up the rank.

Doton: Iwa no Ninkizai Oginai [ Ninja Tools Replenish from Stone ]: This is fine.

Mogura Tataki no Jutsu [ Whack-A-Mole Technique ]: Eh... I guess it depends on how quickly you can move around underground. I do understand that this is a joke technique but it can be used in combat to avoid taking damage... eh, whatever. This is fine.

Doton Yoroi [ Earth Release Armour ]: I don't really care for an armor jutsu being a village-exclusive technique. None of the other Armor techniques are... the idea is just too universal in my mind to really follow as a village exclusive. All of the damage upgrades can likely be village exclusive, but the original armor technique really shouldn't be.

Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu [ Rock Clone Technique ]: Like the armor, I feel like a clone is just too universal to be a village exclusive technique.

Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu [ Earth Release: Hidden Among Rocks Technique ]: This is fine.

Doton: Otoshibuta [ Earth Release: Dropping Lid ]: Where do you create the lid from if it drops onto the target from above? Also, it takes more than 24 seconds to suffocate. Given how large the lid is, there'd be a large amount of air trapped, you could probably last for several hours. <_<;; That part just flat-out needs to be deleted.

Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu [ Earth Release: Aggravated Rock Technique ]: I'll not allow this to paralyze the target of the technique, as what is causing the paralyzation? They have to have a way to defend themselves from the technique. It will be fine as long as you remove the point of paralyzation and leave the rest of the technique alone.

Ishikure Amadare [ Pebble Raindrops ]: No to the handseals being formed slower.

Fuhen Iwaheki [ Immovable Stone Wall ]: You don't explain the why and how your movement, or lackthereof, allows you to defend against all the assaults.

[Ginjou]

Done.

Made the Earth Armour variations of the Domu technique in the Doton Index of the site. Removed the Iwa Bunshin and the Dropping Lid. Made changes to the Shuriken trap, same with the Aggravated Rock, the Pebble Genjutsu and the Immovable Stone Wall.

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Tsuchi Shuriken Kansei [ Earth Shuriken Trap ]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10m
Special: Shuriken trap is designed to stop movement and allow for the user's escape and therefore stops the opponents movement for one turn from the force of the shuriken tearing into their skin. Five secondary weapons may be placed at first, with
Description: The user forces their chakra underground into an area and leaves it, making it very sensitive to pressure from someone walking or stepping on it. The user then programs the chakra to create shuriken made of earth or stone and then fire upwards at the pressure on it's surface, causing the target to become a human pin cushion full of shuriken, causing serious damage and also stopping their movement.
Domain: Doton, Earth Dominion, Iwagakure

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Goremu no Jutsu [ Golem Technique ]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary | Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5m
Special: Can defend against Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of equal rank or less. May consume binding techniques that are of at least a lower rank.Does not require handseals. Attacks with 'B' rank strength. Must stay connected to user's body via the mouth. Does not require knowledge of Earth Dominion due to the fact that the earth is produced in their own body using chakra. Golem may be active for three turns plus one more each time retrained.
Description: This technique allows the user to expel a large creature composed of rock from their mouth which will stay connected to their mouth. The golem has a fair amount of brute strength, being able to bite and tear off an opponent's flesh with its mouth and hands, respectively. It is also very durable, able to withstand a plethora of strong attacks without budging. This makes the golem ideal for serving as both an ally and as a shield.
Domain: Doton, Iwagakure

1. Does not require hand seals.

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Lash, to add onto this I think that since the technique requires no hand seals it should not be allowed to petrify the user's full body with a single touch. I think that maybe the part of the person being touched should be petrified and not their entire bodies because that seems just a little OP. I could see it working that way (in the way of instantly petrifying) if the description stated the jutsu were to be charged so and so turns before becoming fully active.... kind of like how chidori has to wait a turn before becoming fully concentrated.

That's all I have for now.

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Gonna give you 3 days to fix the suggested edits of Sohyo's or at least reply or this'll be archived.

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