Ancient Medicine [Leech Medical Jutsu]

[Hageshii]

The below is directly associated with my previously approved summoning contract, Hageshii Hiru. Please let me know in detail what concerns arise in reviewing this if at all possible so I can avoid repeating mistakes or know how to amend my current concepts. Thank you for whatever time you spend reading this and responding to it, I know its a smidge-bit lengthy.

Swamp Medicine[/u]
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: The user can learn new types of medical jutsu that are limited by the rank of this jutsu.
Description: Displaying a very particular type of medical knowledge related specifically to leech species the user becomes able to emulate their abilities. The user is able to observe and identify various kinds of blood-based damages and is aware of what causes them if inflicted naturally. They continue to learn from their bonded creatures and become more proficient in other unique forms of medical jutsu through this bond.
Domain: Medical, Hageshii Hiru

• Leech Style: Red Food

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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Drains blood from a human target to derive sustenance for a month without need for additional consumption. Retraining adds one month to the total per training, maximum of six months.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user becomes able to extract chemicals and nutrition from blood in the same fashion as a leech and with the same extraordinary results. This requires maintained contact with a human target and takes a half hour to complete. This sustains the user for a month without need for additional food or water in that period. This jutsu finds use in reducing the demand on food and water supply on missions but the amount of blood drained does no harm to the target beyond discomfort while 'feeding'.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

[/li][li]Leech Style: Evacuation[/u]
Rank: D,C
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: This jutsu's effects become more violent as a C Rank jutsu and the forceful evacuation of vomit in particular causes sever heart-burn which can briefly stun opponents due to pain as well as inhibit their ability to speak. Vomiting also has a foul odor that can nauseate other opponents once expelled.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user places their hand(s) on a target's throat or chest and applies medicinal chakra there to force liquid entities beyond blood to exit the body through nasal or oral orifices. This commonly includes mucus, vomit, and water, making it useful to prevent choking or to force vomiting to help remove ingested toxins. However, this leaves the effected individual in a weakened state and makes them susceptible to subsequent infections until their body recovers and replenishes what was lost.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

• Leech Style: Natural Infection

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Effects last one post plus one post per retraining with a twelve post maximum. Physical ability steadily reduces over time and after five posts the user's body becomes incapable of complex Taijutsu, their Taijutsu dropping a tier and limiting their abilities until corrected. After 10 the target will suffer another tier drop and if it persists to 12 posts the target becomes paralyzed due to physical inability to move.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user secretes a substance from their bodily pores similar in composition and properties to leech vomit (giving them a pale-yellow see-through coating) which contains the bacterial agents in their bowels as well as various other harmful entities. When the user contacts an open wound this vomit enters into the blood-stream and will shortly cause the infected individual to feel physically ill. Illness of this sort is not lethal but instead weakens them and slows them down, making them an easier target for additional jutsu or summoned leeches.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine[/li][/ul]

[/li][li]Leech Style: Vessel Cutter[/u]
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Breaks one vein per re-training on a successful hit, only one vein can be broken per finger connected to a body and arteries cannot be broken. Broken veins take days to repair naturally or can be fixed with medical jutsu.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. After performing a series of handseals that generates brown visible chakra around the hands the user strikes an opponent, often with one or two fingers, and inflicts a small cut that leaves the skin in tact while breaking a single vein. This causes no immediate damage but causes pain as well as the normal damage associated with blood-loss and in a fashion that is much more difficult to treat. Opening the damaged area increases the blood-loss but allows it to be treated like a normal cut. Leeches can be used to remedy this condition giving the user the upper hand and a useful bargaining chip.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

• Leech Style: Separating Strike

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: -
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. After performing handseals the user strikes a target, their hand coated in a brown and visible chakra aura, and upon impact separates a portion of the blood from the veins within the struck area, but still within their body. This does not damage the body or the veins but produces internal bleeding of a fairly sever variety. This jutsu leaves an opponent feeling woozy and repeated strikes can knock an opponent out from simple blood-loss. Since it does not damage circulation or open veins, the damage can be controlled to a degree to prevent lethality or unconsciousness if desired.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine[/li][/ul]

[/li][li]Leech Style: Running Blood[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Increased blood loss lasts for one post plus an additional post per retraining to a maximum of ten. If an opened vein is not treated death will occur within ten posts due to blood loss.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user applies medical chakra to their palms and contacts a target's chest, applying a chakra-based form of anti-coagulant that is undetectable until bleeding occurs, at which point the wound will not close and will bleed more profusely than a normal wound, increasing its difficult to be treated or stopped until clotting returns to normal.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

[/li][li]Leech Style: Binding Slime[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: C Rank force or higher will break free of adhesive.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user strikes a target with their palm and closes it on an opponent, releasing a biological adhesive that attaches the hand of the user to whatever was grasped. This can be used to restrain unwilling patients or to allow a direct connection to an opponent's body for additional medical techniques without having to worry about landing another hit. This adhesive can be ripped off with sufficient force though it usually doesn't take long for the user to do what they wanted to do before they are separated from the target.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

[/li][li]Leech Style: Parasite Awareness[/u]
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: This jutsu lasts for one post plus one post per retraining. Information gathered during this time period is retained but cannot be renewed without another post of its effects.
Description: A medical technique that relies on the base knowledge gathered from the leech summoning contract. The user gathers medical chakra within their body, closing their eyes and focusing on this chakra circulation in their bodily cells which causes their body to radiate with visible brown chakra. The body in this state becomes aware of a variety of factors in its environment that allow the user to track down living beings within it and distinguish from illusions or clones with shinobi opponents. The user is able to determine carbon dioxide levels and its sources as well as heat signatures and their sources from the air. If submerged in the same body of water as an opponent they can detect their presence by body oils that they leave whenever they move and whose concentration increases the longer they remain stationary. In this state, the user's eyes are glued shut with an excreted mucus but these other senses ensure that they are not left combat-ineffective.
Domain: Medical, Swamp Medicine

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[Kii!]

For Vessel Cutter and Separating Strike, I think they'll both need handseals to be activated. To be able to cut the insides of a person (ala chakra scalpels) whenever you touch them, without using handseals to activate it, is pretty powerful.

On Binding Slime, it should be noted that C Rank force or more can break the technique (if you want a higher amount of force, the technique should be higher ranked).

[Hageshii]

I've modified both techniques to incorporate handseals and given Vessel Cutter a visible chakra effect to make it more manageable because its easily detected. Binding Slime has been modified as stated as well.

[Kii!]

One last thing, on natural infection. We're trying to stay away from percents, so if you could change it to fit a new system, that would be awesome. I'd suggest utilizing ranks or even the primary/secondary system.

[Hageshii]

Well I'm not entirely sure how to make small damages like that using that sort of system, since there aren't stats to influence I tried percentiles. If thats not good then I'm sorta' stumped on how to make small changes like what was written in that format, are there any suggestions or ways I should go about that?

[Kii!]

If it were me, I'd be more vague about it. Like:

"Effects last one post plus one post per retraining. Each post, the effected's physical abilities steadily decay, until after 4 posts, all taijutsu (techniques, normal movement, normal attacks, etc.) is reduced by one tier (i.e. from primary to secondary, from secondary to tertiary, or from tertiary down one more tier). After 10 posts, the target succumbs to paralysis."

If you really want to keep the %s, then I can probably deal with that, it's just not preferable.

[Hageshii]

Hm, well I just needed an example of how to do something like that, I've modified the jutsu.

[Kii!]

I think this looks good.

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[Hageshii]

Thanks.

[Kii!]

Due to a change in template, can you add in chakra consumption rates on all of these, please?

[marvolous.]

You have three days to update this or it'll be archived.

[Comatose]

Archived.