Fumetsu Hinote

[Yaen]

PERSONOLOGY[/u]

• Name: Fumetsu Hinote
  
• Age: 15
  
• Clan, BL, or Kekkei Touta?: none
  
• Country and/or Village: Kumogakure
  
• Rank & Profession: Genin
  
• Difficulty Setting: Easy
  
• Releases/Senses: Raiton
  
• Types: Nin|Gen|Tai
  

PHYSICALITY[/u]

• Height:5'11"
  
• Weight:175
  
• Apparel:white gloves,long lab coat with black stripes going down the neck, crossing over to the right under arm, small square thin glasses, white pants, and white leather shoes boots made for combat.
  
• Body Appearance:Pink hair,tall,light skinned.
  
• Blemishes & Scars: Sword scare over the heart
  

COGNITION[/u]

• Personality:
  • carefree
    
  • sadistic
    
  • rude
    
  • god-complex
    
  • analytic
  
  
• Alignment: Neutral Evil
  
• Allegiance: Myself, Kumo
  
• Quirks & Tendencies: over does it
  
• Likes & Dislikes: perfection, imperfection
  

ARMAMENTS[/u]

• Primary Weapons: Katana.
  
• Secondary Weapons:
  • Shuriken Pack x2
    
  • Ninja Wire x3
  
  
• Items: Tracker.
  
• Jutsu
  
  

[Yaen]

SPOILER: Click to show

Karai Shin (Lightning Wrath's Reach)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Allows the user the ability to create, control and move Raiton (Thunder) chakra of their own for multiple purposes, as well as control that produced by nature. Strength of thunder and distance at which one can control it depends on the highest rank known.
D: 10 meters
C: 20 meters
B: 30 meters
A: 40 meters
S: 50 meters

Description: Though powerful, Raiton can become uncontrollable even in the hands of the experienced, forcing its users to focus first on controlling their power in small areas, and then, over time, expanding. As one's experience with thunder and its control grows, so does the range at which they can become deadly with it.
Domain: Raiton.

Mekurumeku (Blinding Flash)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Distance of flash depends on the user's 'Karai Shin' range. Highest rank known determines light amplitude. Any person(s) effected are blinded for one turn.

D: 1/5th (20%) Karai Shin range
C: 2/5th's (40%) Karai Shin range
B: 3/5th's (60%) Karai Shin range
A: 4/5th's (80%) Karai Shin range
S: Full Karai Shin range

Description: A basic yet effective Raiton technique, the user focuses a bit of chakra all over their body, letting the lightning gather and then quickly exploding, effectively providing a blinding light that leaves all within the range blind. Useful for disorientation and quick get-aways.

Hiraishin Kiru (Human Lightning Rod)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: Touch
Chakra: Mid - Very High
Special: Once the victim is struck by lightning, the user is required to re-apply the effects. If the victim is not struck by lightning before they leave the given battle thread, the effects are neutralized and the jutsu must be reapplied. Highest rank determines the strength of the charge placed on the victim, and thus, the strength of lightning that can strike them.
Description: As the name implies, this simple technique allows the user to alter their internal electric charge temporarily, so that all Raiton chakra subsequently made by the user (as well as natural lightning!) is more susceptible to strike the victim, as well as damage them higher than normal. This alteration usually occurs during some form of contact, where the user’s charged appendage can simple tough, strike or graze the victim and quickly place the effects on them.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin.

Danpen Inazuma (Shooting Thunder)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Does not require handseals. Highest rank known determines range of bolt, as well as the level (rank) at which it is shot out.

D: 1/5th (20%) Karai Shin range
C: 2/5th's (40%) Karai Shin range
B: 3/5th's (60%) Karai Shin range
A: 4/5th's (80%) Karai Shin range
S: Full Karai Shin range

Description: Meant more as a reactionary technique than a main avenue of offense, this jutsu allows the user to essentially shoot out small lightning bolts from a free hand to anyone within a small range. This requires no seals to conjure, and can be shot out from one’s appendage during the most heated of combat. The damage is light and the bolts shoot off in a relatively strRaikyuu (Lightning Ball)

Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Travels in a straight line roughly at the speed of 1/2 a meter per second, plus 1/2 more each time retrained until reaching a maximum of 20 meters per second. Being struck by this results in the area in question being paralyzed for a half a turn, (a hit to the head affects the whole body). Paralysis effects do not stack once victim is struck.
Description: A very simple and effective Raiton technique known throughout, the user either takes twin weaponry or their own appendages, focuses their chakra into their center, and forms a ball of pure lightning. This newly formed threat can either be smashed into an opponent’s face, or tossed from a nearby distance. Repetitive exposure to the shocking has been known to leave its victims stunned.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin 'C'.
aight line, at rapid speeds.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin.

Jakura (Lightning Sparrow Cometh)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Raiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Up to 5 sparrows can be summoned at a time, plus 5 more each time retrained, for a maximum of 50 sparrows active at any given time. Sparrows fly as fast their normal counterparts do. No other jutsu may be performed while controlling the sparrows, and the user must remain still. Range at which sparrows can be controlled depends on the user's highest 'Karai Shin' range.
Description: The Lightning Sparrows Cometh! In the form of bright blue sparrows, these creations fly to wherever the user desires, allowing them to reach and damage places previously deemed impossible. As the user continues to improve their skill in this technique, they can summon more and more sparrows.
Domain: Raiton. Karai Shin 'C'.

[Yaen]

reserve

[KID GAMBINO.]

From what I can tell, your appearance still needs to be finished, and there should be no unfinished bios in this section. Moved to WIP until completed.

[Yaen]

done.

[Apple]

[/b][/color] Please copy and paste your items from the Wearponry index. Your Katana primary weapon is alright, but as for your secondary weapons and items, they are incorrect. As a new character you start with five free packs. If you look at the secondary weapons thread in the above link you'll find something like "x3 per pack" which means that per pack you have, you can have that amount, so for example Kunai are x2 per pack, so if you wanted to use all your free spaces, you'd get 10 kunai, if that makes sense.

Also, there's no such thing as an explosive kunai in our indexes, so please choose one from the accessory thread Here Thank you!

Primary Weapons: Katana.
Secondary Weapons: Ninja Wire Strings x5|
Shuriken (Ninja Star)x5
Items: Explosive kunai

[2] You have 400 EXP in Raiton, not 425, so you get to add 1 more D-ranked technique to your profile so that you total is 500EXP!

[3] Where it says clan/Kekkai touta/Bloodlimit on your profile where you've stated 'Not availiable', please clarify that you do not have one starting out, because it effects your EXP count when you start off. It's just me nitpicking, but if you don't have one, please put 'None.

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[Yaen]

Edited

[Apple]

[/b][/color] Again you've only changed the layout of the weapons and not the weapons themselves. I'll explain once more:

[/b] are things like trackers, gourds, weights etc. These aren't shuriken, kunai or anything like this, these are completely different. As a new character you get to pick up one free "C" ranked weapon from the list Here.

Secondary Weapons: As a starting character, you get five free packs. I'll give you an example below of what I mean. As of now, your five shuriken count as one pack, so you have four left to use, since the count from your ninja wire strings is incorrect.

Ninja Wire Strings
Rank: D
Type: Secondary / Ranged
Special: 20 ft. of wire per pack.
Description: Wire Strings can be used for rappelling, manipulating weapons, or to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent, sometimes even being able to slice through items when generating enough force to do so. They are a useful tool for a shinobi.
Cost: 200 Ryo per pack

Now, if you wanted one pack of these, you'd have 20ft of wire. If you want two packs you'd have 40ft of wire, etc. Same goes for other weapon, like, as I explained above, if you want four kunai, it would take up two packs. [/ul]

[5] Kekkai • Tengai Houjin (Barrier • Dome Method Formation)- This technique is copied on and it's really close to the genjutsu kai technique, so I'd suggest you move it. Also you haven't specified a rank for it so please underline or strike the rank you know. Remember- As I'm going to say below, you have a few issues coming up with EXP count. To make your count alright, make the above technique D ranked and you should be fine.

[6] You have 400 EXP in lightning, not 500 EXP.

[7] You've cut off the name of your third lightning technique. It starts at rank but doesn't have a name, please go back to the indexes and find it!

[3] Where it says clan/Kekkai touta/Bloodlimit on your profile where you've stated 'Not availiable', please clarify that you do not have one starting out, because it effects your EXP count when you start off. It's just me nitpicking, but if you don't have one, please put 'None.

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[Yaen]

Everything edited - not in a clan, i'm a normal ninja.

[Trigga]

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[Apple]

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