Uneri

[KEITH]

Uneri (Heaving Sea)
Rank: A.
Type: Melee / Primary
Special: Uneri has been imbued with the Genjutsu Sense of Sight. It has the ability to cast those who set their sight upon it into a Genjutsu, without the user casting it upon them themselves. It allows the user to perform all Sight-based illusions from D - A.
Description: Uneri is a katana made of the hardest adamantium metals, created by a Genjutsu Master. The katana has a obsidian blade ridge and edge, pure, sleek and shiny. The blade itself is made of a stainless steel. The edge pattern of the blade is half the size it usually is and is scarlet red, as if it was painted with blood. The blade collar is the same color of the blade, and the so is the guard, expect it has a repeating triangle design around it, with triangle shape holes in them. The handle of the blade is also scarlet red, with the wrapping being obsidian. On the pommel, it has a Sharingan eye design, matching the color of the overall blade.
Cost: 75,000 Ryo

Hotokegokoro (The Buddha Mind)
Rank: D, C, B, A.
Type: Supplementary / Sight-Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 40 meters.
Chakra: Low - Very High.
Special: Hotokegokoro is a special ability of the Uneri, it allows the user to pour chakra into the blade to create a sight-based illusion, as long as the blade is on the user. Each rank of Hotokegokoro equals the rank of sight genjutsu they can use with the sword.
Description: Hotokegokoro is a technique used in conjunction with the Uneri to cast sight-based illusions. By one focusing chakra into the blade that is on it's person, the sword will activate it's Genjutsu ability, pulling everyone around it's range of sight that see's it into a Genjutsu level, based upon the rank of the Hotokegokoro being casted.
Domain: Uneri. Sight-Genjutsu.

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[chiatsuki]

There's nothing wrong with this. /shrug

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[KID GAMBINO.]

whoawhoawhoa, whuuuuuuut.

Firstly, this has complex abilities, meaning this should cost 75,000 ryo.

It has the ability to cast those who set their sight upon it into a Genjutsu, without the user casting it upon them themselves. The Genjutsu ability of the sword itself is passive, so it is constantly creating a Genjutsu without the user having to add chakra into it.

Also, with the blade upon the user, it protects them from A-rank Genjutsu and lower.

Both quotes need to be be separate techniques. It's nice that this is passive and all that, but being immune to nearly all Genjutsu and having to learn nothing won't fly with me.

[.DEVIOUS]

Nor will it fly by me. In addition to that, you WILL need to spend chakra in order to place Genjutsu on people with the sword. If you want to use it as a way to maneuver around handseals, okay, but you're not getting out of consumption costs, either. Both of these abilities will need a chakra cost equal to the standard ruleset.

[KEITH]

Oct 4, 2011 18:08:15 GMT -8 KID GAMBINO. said:

whoawhoawhoa, whuuuuuuut.

Firstly, this has complex abilities, meaning this should cost 75,000 ryo.

It has the ability to cast those who set their sight upon it into a Genjutsu, without the user casting it upon them themselves. The Genjutsu ability of the sword itself is passive, so it is constantly creating a Genjutsu without the user having to add chakra into it.

Also, with the blade upon the user, it protects them from A-rank Genjutsu and lower.

Both quotes need to be be separate techniques. It's nice that this is passive and all that, but being immune to nearly all Genjutsu and having to learn nothing won't fly with me.

okay, i edited it, and i took out the ability of it being able to stop me from being in a genjutsu. so, the sword doesn't have a complicated ability anymore? i just focus chakra into the blade to create genjutsu.

Oct 4, 2011 19:08:56 GMT -8 .DEVIOUS said:

Nor will it fly by me. In addition to that, you WILL need to spend chakra in order to place Genjutsu on people with the sword. If you want to use it as a way to maneuver around handseals, okay, but you're not getting out of consumption costs, either. Both of these abilities will need a chakra cost equal to the standard ruleset.

created the technique, added chakra costs, boom-pow!

[☆ F ☆]

Hold on. The whole point of Genjutsu Senses was to differentiate the type of illusions you can create, which essentially determines how a victim falls for it. If that's the case, why would a Touch based Genjutsu be cast immediately upon eye contact...?

Makes no sense. If anything, that should trigger when your sword touches someone.

[KEITH]

I had it Genjutsu Sight at first, but, I'm going to change it back.

[☆ F ☆]

Up Hotokegokoro chakra costs to "Low - Very High" and we should be good, unless your costs are off or something.

[KEITH]

Done.

[KID GAMBINO.]

this looks much better.

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[chiatsuki]

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[King]

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