Steaming Danger Tyranny

[KEITH]

Jōki Bōi (Steaming Danger Tyranny)
Rank: S.
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu.
Range: 0 - 50 Meters.
Chakra: Massive.
Special: Can only be used again each time the technique is retrained, it can only be retrained a total of ten times.
Description: Jōki Bōi is a technique whereby the user creates a clone made from the oil and with water inside it's body. The water in the clone is surrounded by a thin layer of oil that resembles a chibi version of themselves once completed. Due to its structure, the clone's temperature can easily be altered to cold or hot. When it exerts itself the outer layer of oil heats up and evaporates the water inside. As the internal pressure builds, the clone expands until it explodes and the water vapour is released. This vapour then cools down as it rises and as a result, turns into hail which cools the clone, causing it to shrink to its original size and start the entire process again. Despite its size, the clone itself remains very fast throughout the technique, which not only allows it to heat up very quickly but also inflict damage using an axe-like liquid blade that forms on one of its arms. However, using this technique leaves the user in a very weak and vulnerable state.
Domain: Hozuki. Mizu Bunshin.

[Sayomi]

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[Gally G6]

Reduce the amout of explosions to five max and you have my 1² :]

[KID GAMBINO.]

The speed of the clone needs to be determined. I'm willing to say at thrice the speed of the user, but that's fast enough. Anything beyond that would just be too powerful.

Agreed with Frispakarn, lower the retraining to four times, with 5 explosions max.

How long does it take the clone to expand before being ready for detonation? Making it one post for 'D', then for each post, the explosion increases a rank will do fine.

What is the radius of the explosion? This needs to follow the same as the build-up time, meaning the explosion increases for each post. Maybe it starts at 3 meters, then increases three meter each post.

The cooldown needs a duration as well. I believe half the time it took to build up is good enough.

Make the 'axe-like blade' a branch technique from Joki Boi, requiring additional chakra on the user's behalf. 'B' rank with High chakra cost.

[KEITH]

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