Birth of the Lava God ( Item, Jutsu)

[~Mifune~]

Yoarashi's Gourd
Rank:A
Type:Item
Description: A basic gourd that has been taken and laced with obsidian and other elements. This gourd can contain the hottest of lava, or any other hazardous material that cannot be handled normally.It is about 3 ft. in length, and is stamped with the mark of the Yoarashi, two salamanders eating their own tail. The special ability of this gourd is that it creates its own lava source when the user channels Youton element chakra into it.There fore, the user can use Youton jutsu without another lava source. Any cracks or breaks in the gourd can be repaired by the user sending a Mid to High level amount of chakra, (depending on the damage), through the gourd.
Cost: 70,000


Yousuika ( Lava Hydration)
Rank: B
Type:Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Range: See special
Chakra: High
Special: This jutsu only lasts for a set amount of turns depending on the user's highest rank learned in Fushokusai
C-2 turns
B-3 Turns
A-4 turns
S-5 turns
Range depends on the user's highest Fushokusai
Description: The user pours Suiton chakra into their lava source, cooling the lava slightly, but at the same time doubling the lava's speed, meaning the lava will move at about 2 times the speed of a kunai. Jutsu used after this technique also gain a speed boost when this jutsu was used.
Domain: Youton, Fushokusai

[Gally G6]

alright, well for the Gourd, there are a few thing that need to be fixed.

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A: If the previous class allows simple, pure chakra to dominate it, then these kinds of weapons can be used as beacons to house elemental and illusionary. From releases and kekkei touta to genjutsu senses, these weapons can manipualte these elements with each.

To allow this gourd to do what it does, it will first have to be bumped to A rank.

2.!![/i][/color] This will mean the price will be as such: 25000 Ryo (A ranked weapon) + 20000 Ryo (Manipulation/Housing of Kekkai Touta).

3.!![/i][/color] Weapons base defense are based upon their rank, thereforce this weapon can withstand an A rank assault before requiring repair. If the ability to restore it with chakra stays, I believe that would fall under a Complex Ability (40000 Ryo). You are saying that by using a Mid amount of chakra (which compared to many techniques is not much), you can essentially make the gourd invincable. The fact that it can create lava out of nothing is quite a perk already.

If the repairing is accepted by others, I would say make it the Chakra used High at the least (or higher depedning on the damage.). If this is part of the weapon, I assume then this would go under a complex ability. (I would wait for staff to see what they say).

Yougami Mugenseishi (Lava God's Infinite Control)
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Range: See Special!
Chakra:See Special
Special:This jutsu's range depends on the users highest rank in Fushokusai. This jutsu continuously consumes Mid level chakra for every turn it is activated, along with additional jutsu being used along side it. The user must remain still while using this jutsu.
Description:An experienced Youton users greatest jutsu. This jutsu allows the user to pour his chakra from his body into the nearest lava source, (after making the seal of the Ram, and as long as the lava source is within the user Fushokusai range), and manipulate it at their will. The user can only guide and steer the lava, and the lava only reaches 10 meters above the users head before their control is lost.
Domain:Youton, Fushokusai "B"

I know you are trying for creativity, but this is essentially what the base technique for youton does.
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Fushokuzai (Corrosion Disolvance Factor)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Youton Kekkei Touta
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Allows the user the ability to create, control and move Youton (Lava)

[/i] chakra of their own for multiple purposes. Level of corrosion and intensity of lava is determined by highest rank learned, materials of the same rank will take a full turn of contact with lava to dissolve and materials of lower ranked will be melted instantly.

• D: 10 meters
• C: 20 meters
• B: 30 meters
• A: 40 meters
  
• S: 50 meters

Description: Youton, the marriage of Earth, Fire and Water, yields a new and truly terrifying substance - lava. Birthed from the user's very chakra control and the simultaneous binding of these two substances, the Corrosion Disolvance Factor exists as the user's corrosion gauge. Essentially, as their control over the kekkei touta grows, so will the strength of the corrosion of lava, as well as the size and area of control. In their most basic state, the Youton user is able to summon a fixed amount of Lava within an designated area, and further the birthing by controlling the substance to their will.
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Yousuika ( Lava Hydration)
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Range: See special
Chakra: Low
Special:This jutsu only works when accompanied with Yougami Mugenseishi. Range depends on the user's highest Fushokusai
Description: The user pours Suiton chakra into their lava source, therefore cooling it slightly, but making it 3 times as fast.
Domain: Youton, Yougami Mugenseishi.

I feel like for this technique to have a chance, the rank would have to be increased and the speed reduced. A D rank allowing, from what it looks like , any lava techniue the user creates to travel 3 times as fast is normal is overpowered. Also, the typical base speed of comparison is that of a Kunai (i.e. three times as fast as a kunai). If anything, I would say bump the technique up to B rank (High chakra at the least) and reduce speed to two times as fast as a kunai.

Also, I feel like if you have the mindset of increasing an attack's original speed, how many techniques can the user affect a one time? (A good idea might be to base it off of Fushokuzai, i.e. B rank allows 1 technique, 2 for A, up to 3 for S). Also, how long does this speed last? Putting a cap on this (3 or 4 turns at most I would say, and if you are controlling the lava, make it at least Very High per turn. Increasing a technique's speed to twice the speed of a kunai for a constant time would require a larger amount of chakra).[/font]

[~Mifune~]

Mmmkay i can see how the gourd thing makes since.. also i will add the neccessary specification to the technique... but as far as the Yougami jutsu goes, i was aiming for a jutsu that essentially allows user to be a little more flexible, for example they would be able to guid lava trhough a battle field without the use of a specific jutsu, sorta like how gaara uses his sand ya know? .... i dk how i'd do this thats why i put these things up her for some help.

Can Fushokusai allow user to freely manipulate lava without using other jutsu?

[chiatsuki]

No this may not manipulate chakra without the use of seals.

It is about half the size of other gourds,

This isnt a clear description of the size of the gourd - please use ft. as a measurement to describe the gourd's length? Also your pricing is off.

• 40,000 - Complex Ability
  
• 10,000 - A ranked item
  
• 20,000 - Kekkai Touta

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• Does this jutsu add onto the effects of jutsu casted after this [?]

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[~Mifune~]

Modifications been made..

[~Mifune~]

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[~Mifune~]

I cut out lava god control.. i think this is more than acceptable now

[chiatsuki]

sorry for the wait.

Yousuika ( Lava Hydration)
Rank: B
Type:Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Range: See special
Chakra: High
Special: This jutsu only lasts for a set amount of turns depending on the user's highest rank learned in Fushokusai
C-2 turns
B-3 Turns
A-4 turns
S-5 turns
Range depends on the user's highest Fushokusai
Description: The user pours Suiton chakra into their lava source, cooling the lava slightly, but at the same time doubling the lava's speed, meaning the lava will move at about 2 times the speed of a kunai. Jutsu used after this technique also gain a speed boost when this jutsu was used.
Domain: Youton, Fushokusai

Make this multi-ranked and we can get this accepted.